What I Was Aiming For

Mr. J · 10-29-2013, 08:41 PM

Sheep in my field, there's sheep in my dreams
I count on them to put me to sleep when I need
to leave when I lead, then proceed as I please
see what I see...understand..when speech isn't heard
pollute my rivers, my flow, there's leeches in the words..
that grow wings, spread out my disease to the world
blood clot, got the users itchin'... literally inflamed
poison & such, Romeo & Juliet differently staged...
all types of ideals that I live by, & given to the game
maggots, come to the dead, missing a stage
extra lives, missing a plane, fly by, get it arranged
give it up or continue like the man giving his change
funerals...get your arcade fired, your internet cut
Step into the arcane fire..get your ligaments flushed@
talk to Colonel Sanders, you're wrong, get your temperament touched
do what suits me, and forget what my measurements was
is...never one up'd, never back down
let it grow on you until the leather straps out...
another notch in, nauseous...
the supporter of the postures
get some training brah
I forgot what I was aiming for...

Frank · 10-29-2013, 08:44 PM

qwauterz???????

Mr. J · 10-29-2013, 08:48 PM

Yea bro

Frank · 10-29-2013, 08:52 PM

good shit kid, you came back from the dead son

now you the aowl champion, hows it feel?

Wise Wiggles · 10-29-2013, 08:53 PM

Dope. My bad about never getting to our collab like a year or so ago.. I'll send you something soon. Favored the end btw.

Mr. J · 10-29-2013, 08:57 PM

Pretty good @Frank took awhile but it was worth the wait @Wise Ways no problem bro no rush

Frank · 10-29-2013, 09:24 PM

sometimes all it takes is a fresh start..... and your back on track, just like that!

see you in the championship, next week............

Mr. J · 10-29-2013, 09:40 PM

No doubt..good luck

e11even · 10-30-2013, 04:49 AM

tight bro. maybe me you and zen could put down a monster collab? dunno. let me know what you think.

Mr. J · 10-30-2013, 06:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vividlyvague

tight bro. maybe me you and zen could put down a monster collab? dunno. let me know what you think.

I'm game, hit me up with a PM @Vividlyvague

CopyPat · 10-30-2013, 12:27 PM

hahaha, cool ending, this seemed way more legit to me man. i can dig this. opening sheep part was enjoyable as well, painted a lil picture

"funerals...get your arcade fired, your internet cut
Step into the arcane fire..get your ligaments flushed@"

^obv dopest bar

e11even · 10-30-2013, 10:50 PM

cool beans.

10-29-2013, 08:41 PM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	What I Was Aiming For Sheep in my field, there's sheep in my dreams I count on them to put me to sleep when I need to leave when I lead, then proceed as I please see what I see...understand..when speech isn't heard pollute my rivers, my flow, there's leeches in the words.. that grow wings, spread out my disease to the world blood clot, got the users itchin'... literally inflamed poison & such, Romeo & Juliet differently staged... all types of ideals that I live by, & given to the game maggots, come to the dead, missing a stage extra lives, missing a plane, fly by, get it arranged give it up or continue like the man giving his change funerals...get your arcade fired, your internet cut Step into the arcane fire..get your ligaments flushed@ talk to Colonel Sanders, you're wrong, get your temperament touched do what suits me, and forget what my measurements was is...never one up'd, never back down let it grow on you until the leather straps out... another notch in, nauseous... the supporter of the postures get some training brah I forgot what I was aiming for... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you Last edited by Mr. J; 10-29-2013 at 08:47 PM.

10-29-2013, 08:44 PM	#2
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	qwauterz??????? __________________ *VETWORK*

10-29-2013, 08:48 PM	#3
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Yea bro __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-29-2013, 08:52 PM	#4
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	good shit kid, you came back from the dead son now you the aowl champion, hows it feel? __________________ *VETWORK*

10-29-2013, 08:53 PM	#5
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Dope. My bad about never getting to our collab like a year or so ago.. I'll send you something soon. Favored the end btw. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

10-29-2013, 08:57 PM	#6
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Pretty good @Frank took awhile but it was worth the wait @Wise Ways no problem bro no rush __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-29-2013, 09:24 PM	#7
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	sometimes all it takes is a fresh start..... and your back on track, just like that! see you in the championship, next week............ __________________ *VETWORK*

10-29-2013, 09:40 PM	#8
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	No doubt..good luck __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-30-2013, 04:49 AM	#9
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	tight bro. maybe me you and zen could put down a monster collab? dunno. let me know what you think. __________________ Ahem.

10-30-2013, 12:27 PM	#11
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahaha, cool ending, this seemed way more legit to me man. i can dig this. opening sheep part was enjoyable as well, painted a lil picture "funerals...get your arcade fired, your internet cut Step into the arcane fire..get your ligaments flushed@" ^obv dopest bar __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

10-30-2013, 10:50 PM	#12
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	cool beans. __________________ Ahem.