A.T.R. Featuring: Mike Wrecka

Geno · 10-29-2013, 01:57 PM

Gods of controversial displays
Discussion forum is our circus olay
All we do is put our words into play..
Sit back and watch you cry in a personal way
But hey, I just love to see you all with a throat full of dick
Even death came to life when the goat joined the click
Alotta mouth from seyance, no response when I quip
Stfu when bosses talk <-that's the motto he lives
Objective talking dollars and shit, pm'ed me all fucking night
Wake up nd check my cheese when grown men turn to mice
I'm kanye west, eminem, and fifty cent when I bomb
You wanna twerk it all out, miiey cyrus da gawd!!!
I see witty wanna ride soon as he dumped from the click
I can't believe this chump change, he's 500 to Vic

Mike Wrecka..
pay attention you fiends, I'm the puppet master at the center of things,
so once you proved useless we had to sever the strings,
making power moves, that's what real thugs do,
Objective was put on suicide watch, after he got kicked out the crew,
I was sickened by dude, he actually thought that we were friendly,
but to be perfectly honest, I never felt a single verse he ever sent me,
Rawn we outlined a collab, you said you were too busy curing cancer,
now you flooding my PM box, begging for the new forum password,
I am Above the Rest, yes, I mean that truthfully,
if Vulgar the foundation of topical text, im where the roof would be,
aint no stopping me and my clique, our presence is quickly felt,
as I hit you all in the head with my new championship belt

StarFaggot · 10-29-2013, 02:07 PM

Some stuff I liked. Expect a response.

Vulgar · 10-29-2013, 07:20 PM

This was sort of weak sauce. I mean, the verses were cool and some lines were cute. But for these to have any type of real impact, you have to diss more than just past crew members, and it should be much, much longer. Like 20 bars each of straight diss-age. That's how people used to do it back in 04-05, which was what I liked to see. Can Geno be consistent for that many bars? Can MW? I wonder these things in the midst of the playful disses, and it gives me a feeling of excitement if we could bring it back to those textual customs.

Cool keys.

Objective · 10-30-2013, 12:12 AM

Cheese line was dope, beside of that it wasn't your usual hard hitting stuff but it was cool enough. Enjoyed the read. One of the better diss verses I've read from MW, he's getting better so that's great.

Response will be up shortly.

Geno · 10-30-2013, 12:16 PM

Cool.

10-29-2013, 01:57 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	A.T.R. Featuring: Mike Wrecka Gods of controversial displays Discussion forum is our circus olay All we do is put our words into play.. Sit back and watch you cry in a personal way But hey, I just love to see you all with a throat full of dick Even death came to life when the goat joined the click Alotta mouth from seyance, no response when I quip Stfu when bosses talk <-that's the motto he lives Objective talking dollars and shit, pm'ed me all fucking night Wake up nd check my cheese when grown men turn to mice I'm kanye west, eminem, and fifty cent when I bomb You wanna twerk it all out, miiey cyrus da gawd!!! I see witty wanna ride soon as he dumped from the click I can't believe this chump change, he's 500 to Vic Mike Wrecka.. pay attention you fiends, I'm the puppet master at the center of things, so once you proved useless we had to sever the strings, making power moves, that's what real thugs do, Objective was put on suicide watch, after he got kicked out the crew, I was sickened by dude, he actually thought that we were friendly, but to be perfectly honest, I never felt a single verse he ever sent me, Rawn we outlined a collab, you said you were too busy curing cancer, now you flooding my PM box, begging for the new forum password, I am Above the Rest, yes, I mean that truthfully, if Vulgar the foundation of topical text, im where the roof would be, aint no stopping me and my clique, our presence is quickly felt, as I hit you all in the head with my new championship belt __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

10-29-2013, 02:07 PM	#2
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	Some stuff I liked. Expect a response. __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

10-30-2013, 12:12 AM	#4
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Cheese line was dope, beside of that it wasn't your usual hard hitting stuff but it was cool enough. Enjoyed the read. One of the better diss verses I've read from MW, he's getting better so that's great. Response will be up shortly. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

10-30-2013, 12:16 PM	#5
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Cool. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

10-29-2013, 07:20 PM	#3
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	This was sort of weak sauce. I mean, the verses were cool and some lines were cute. But for these to have any type of real impact, you have to diss more than just past crew members, and it should be much, much longer. Like 20 bars each of straight diss-age. That's how people used to do it back in 04-05, which was what I liked to see. Can Geno be consistent for that many bars? Can MW? I wonder these things in the midst of the playful disses, and it gives me a feeling of excitement if we could bring it back to those textual customs. Cool keys.