Week 5 - King Ra. (1-2) vs. symetrik (0-1) - SYMETRIK WINS BY NS

Certain · 10-21-2013, 11:46 AM

Season 2

Rules

Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST

Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST

Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree

Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post.

If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension.

Topic

Good luck @King Ra., @symetrik

symetrik · 10-21-2013, 01:05 PM

Vote links:
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=26805
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=26803
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=26802

King Ra. · 10-21-2013, 04:53 PM

Check.

symetrik · 10-22-2013, 12:10 PM

Colour of Foundation

(hey, wake up.)
you ever wondered where your blue eyes came from?
I met your mother back in nineteen eighty-one.

(wake up)
I was fifteen and dollar-less,
less interested in listening to lectures then to lick her tits,
we'd hook up near the outhouse where the scholar's shit

(wake up!)
trench war politics, bricks to keep the stench in,
high school hiding spot, where kids would learn to French kiss,
and sip up off of the liquor drinks to stagger from establishment,
romanticizing sex with every chick they've ever had it with...

(is that bottle empty?)
"frantic" fits, you could say we moved a little fast,
addiction triggered relapse like a selfish ass,
though no one knew the grind like her pelvis had.
double line, tight lips, flip to see who tells her dad.

(someone call 911)
I let her have.

(hurry!)
nine months later, the trauma took you and your mum's life,
you were christened on the outskirts of a dump site.
I sympathize with wolves when we scream at moons.

(I don't feel a pulse.)
I'll see you soon.

10-21-2013, 11:46 AM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Week 5 - King Ra. (1-2) vs. symetrik (0-1) - SYMETRIK WINS BY NS Season 2 Rules Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post. If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension. Topic Good luck @King Ra., @symetrik __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-21-2013, 01:05 PM	#2
symetrik Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 709 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 12429299	Vote links: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=26805 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=26803 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=26802 Last edited by symetrik; 10-25-2013 at 05:08 PM.

10-22-2013, 12:10 PM	#4
symetrik Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 709 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 12429299	Colour of Foundation (hey, wake up.) you ever wondered where your blue eyes came from? I met your mother back in nineteen eighty-one. (wake up) I was fifteen and dollar-less, less interested in listening to lectures then to lick her tits, we'd hook up near the outhouse where the scholar's shit (wake up!) trench war politics, bricks to keep the stench in, high school hiding spot, where kids would learn to French kiss, and sip up off of the liquor drinks to stagger from establishment, romanticizing sex with every chick they've ever had it with... (is that bottle empty?) "frantic" fits, you could say we moved a little fast, addiction triggered relapse like a selfish ass, though no one knew the grind like her pelvis had. double line, tight lips, flip to see who tells her dad. (someone call 911) I let her have. (hurry!) nine months later, the trauma took you and your mum's life, you were christened on the outskirts of a dump site. I sympathize with wolves when we scream at moons. (I don't feel a pulse.) I'll see you soon. Last edited by symetrik; 10-22-2013 at 02:08 PM.

10-21-2013, 04:53 PM	#3
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Check.