Slanging Kryptonite In Metropolis

Mr. J · 09-09-2013, 06:48 PM

Can't explain shit, change it, live with the shame...shit
back to the same shit, ain't shit, whole life ain't made shit
caused pain without showing the love I really felt
I thought saying it enough times would really help
I'm, killing myself looking in the mirror knowing who I am
all the problems I been causing I only owe it to who I am
were the lies real, the truth had it's lines blurred
no matter how much I'm sure, she'd understand only if I was her
seeing it from my point of view when you really don't own shit
borderline homeless, antisocial to the point I don't know what "homes" is
sick to my core not knowing why I held that positionin' for
all I left was a cold chip to your shoulder when I'm hittin' the door
trying to fix the foundation you broke in your absence
blaming what's going on now with unspoken past-tense
a lump of coal lumps my soul to the point my tears are uncontrolled
to further speak on it is just stuff she's never gonna know...
thought I could be what I never knew, for lack of better truths
misguided emotions, mixed messages cause bars of the federal
lack of better use, I'll never see the world how I used to....

tbc

Mr. J · 09-16-2013, 02:01 PM

yea

Vulgar · 09-17-2013, 10:57 PM

were the lies real, the truth had it's lines blurred
no matter how much I'm sure, she'd understand only if I was her

That line was fucking real.

Reverberated with me, maybe because I'm trying to understand women better atm.

Good job tbc.

09-09-2013, 06:48 PM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Slanging Kryptonite In Metropolis Can't explain shit, change it, live with the shame...shit back to the same shit, ain't shit, whole life ain't made shit caused pain without showing the love I really felt I thought saying it enough times would really help I'm, killing myself looking in the mirror knowing who I am all the problems I been causing I only owe it to who I am were the lies real, the truth had it's lines blurred no matter how much I'm sure, she'd understand only if I was her seeing it from my point of view when you really don't own shit borderline homeless, antisocial to the point I don't know what "homes" is sick to my core not knowing why I held that positionin' for all I left was a cold chip to your shoulder when I'm hittin' the door trying to fix the foundation you broke in your absence blaming what's going on now with unspoken past-tense a lump of coal lumps my soul to the point my tears are uncontrolled to further speak on it is just stuff she's never gonna know... thought I could be what I never knew, for lack of better truths misguided emotions, mixed messages cause bars of the federal lack of better use, I'll never see the world how I used to.... tbc __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

09-16-2013, 02:01 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	yea __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

09-17-2013, 10:57 PM	#3
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	were the lies real, the truth had it's lines blurred no matter how much I'm sure, she'd understand only if I was her That line was fucking real. Reverberated with me, maybe because I'm trying to understand women better atm. Good job tbc.