WEEK 6: Dave 3-2 VS Adverse 3-2 DAVE WINS

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Good luck, gentlemen

[Adverse]

What’s up

I’m good with 12

[evaD]

12 is cool brother

[Adverse]

Sorry bout our 1st match…

I was busy juggling a NBL run, and a grip of GWL champ matches, too
Only thing that tourney L “Shows n Proves” is I had way better shit to do than battle you
I got mad clips for son, assaults n tecs, know you garnered a lotta respect
But all that talk’ll turn to…”Nevermind” when I put Dave on these Drums like a fucking Nirvana set
Took a shot to my confidence last week, but similar events left this poor fag hurtin
Both ‘fucked up with Orc’, I lost to em, U got dumped by ur World of Warcraft girlfriend
Let my occupation slip on Discord, but fuck it I’d post it again
It’s all business when I grip handles and sweep this trash, just doing my job as Custodian
I ain’t sharing bullets man, when I pull back you’ll feel the pain, promise.
Thought you could sneak by, this glock is week 5, whole MAG got your name on it
And what’s the outcome if you come runnin your mouth? Your worst fate.
They’ll find you ‘stretched out n not saying shit’ like some Scout wordplay

12

[evaD]

I’ve bodied you twice before, you want another I can make it so
But after round three I’m taking an axe to the leftovers like I’m HBO
We’re both coming off questionable losses, well here’s another plank to walk
Mine was strange voting, yours? questionable how you were even matched with orc
I’m plenty trill; known for stepping out of cars to the tune of £20 mil
If adverse steps out of anything it’s to the tune of Benny Hill
I’m the best NC. Your name should not be written next to me
If any part of you is in my wheelhouse it means I’ve mowed you down successfully
Half tempted to deliberately lose to you today
It would be a great scalp and lord knows you could use a new toupe
You came into this world dirt poor, so don’t be very surprised
That you’ll be leaving this world dirt pour, when I bury you alive

[Wanderer]

I was busy juggling a NBL run, and a grip of GWL champ matches, too
Only thing that tourney L “Shows n Proves” is I had way better shit to do than battle you
Tad wordy but it’s a passable swaggy personal
I got mad clips for son, assaults n tecs, know you garnered a lotta respect
But all that talk’ll turn to…”Nevermind” when I put Dave on these Drums like a fucking Nirvana set
Cool
Took a shot to my confidence last week, but similar events left this poor fag hurtin
Both ‘fucked up with Orc’, I lost to em, U got dumped by ur World of Warcraft girlfriend
Lol funny concept and ok
Let my occupation slip on Discord, but fuck it I’d post it again
It’s all business when I grip handles and sweep this trash, just doing my job as Custodian
Nearly was t overly feeling
I ain’t sharing bullets man, when I pull back you’ll feel the pain, promise.
Thought you could sneak by, this glock is week 5, whole MAG got your name on it
Seen too many bars like this
And what’s the outcome if you come runnin your mouth? Your worst fate.
They’ll find you ‘stretched out n not saying shit’ like some Scout wordplay
Just about ok

Vs

I’ve bodied you twice before, you want another I can make it so
But after round three I’m taking an axe to the leftovers like I’m HBO
Alright cool idea
We’re both coming off questionable losses, well here’s another plank to walk
Mine was strange voting, yours? questionable how you were even matched with orc
Lol cool
I’m plenty trill; known for stepping out of cars to the tune of £20 mil
If adverse steps out of anything it’s to the tune of Benny Hill
HAHA.. I like it, ok
I’m the best NC. Your name should not be written next to me
If any part of you is in my wheelhouse it means I’ve mowed you down successfully
Ehhh kinda.. ok
Half tempted to deliberately lose to you today
It would be a great scalp and lord knows you could use a new toupe
Fire
You came into this world dirt poor, so don’t be very surprised
That you’ll be leaving this world dirt pour, when I bury you alive
Cool closer
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Good battle. Dave had too much for Adverse here. Execution stronger and some better ideas in my opinion.

Vote dave

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Adverse

I was busy juggling a NBL run, and a grip of GWL champ matches, too
Only thing that tourney L “Shows n Proves” is I had way better shit to do than battle you
mechanically this is nice but its a light punch
I got mad clips for son, assaults n tecs, know you garnered a lotta respect
But all that talk’ll turn to…”Nevermind” when I put Dave on these Drums like a fucking Nirvana set
this is cool
Took a shot to my confidence last week, but similar events left this poor fag hurtin
Both ‘fucked up with Orc’, I lost to em, U got dumped by ur World of Warcraft girlfriend
this is ok
Let my occupation slip on Discord, but fuck it I’d post it again
It’s all business when I grip handles and sweep this trash, just doing my job as Custodian
wording is awkward meh punch.
I ain’t sharing bullets man, when I pull back you’ll feel the pain, promise.
Thought you could sneak by, this glock is week 5, whole MAG got your name on it
would have hit with better wording
And what’s the outcome if you come runnin your mouth? Your worst fate.
They’ll find you ‘stretched out n not saying shit’ like some Scout wordplay
light

Originally Posted by evaD

I’ve bodied you twice before, you want another I can make it so
But after round three I’m taking an axe to the leftovers like I’m HBO
cool
We’re both coming off questionable losses, well here’s another plank to walk
Mine was strange voting, yours? questionable how you were even matched with orc
doesn't hit to me as worded
I’m plenty trill; known for stepping out of cars to the tune of £20 mil
If adverse steps out of anything it’s to the tune of Benny Hill
this is funny
I’m the best NC. Your name should not be written next to me
If any part of you is in my wheelhouse it means I’ve mowed you down successfully
cool concept
Half tempted to deliberately lose to you today
It would be a great scalp and lord knows you could use a new toupe
not feeling this
You came into this world dirt poor, so don’t be very surprised
That you’ll be leaving this world dirt pour, when I bury you alive
wording is weak. light punch

Adverse had Nirvana and World of War Craft. Felt like he spent most of his verse trying to negate lines he thought Dave would use. I liked a lot of the concepts you used but wording was up and down.

Dave has HBO, Benny Hill, and wheelhouse. Some of the other bars felt rushed. You clearly know what you're doing tho.

Vote: Dave Closer match than I thought. I could see Adverse edging this if he had another quotable as his misses weren't as bad as some of Dave's toward the end. Dave started out strong and did just enough to win.

[UPN Zuch]

Originally Posted by evaD

We’re both coming off questionable losses, well here’s another plank to walk
Mine was strange voting, yours? questionable how you were even matched with orc

Vote Adverse



































Syke naw. HBO was jokes. Benny hill, wheelhouse and toupee were also dope.



Adverse had nirvana bar. Glock was cool too for a mag line.


Good shit guys

Vote - dave

[Aero]

Adverse - tourney L was an excuse // dave on drums I liked // orc warcraft wasnt good // dont think you should've mentioned being a custodian again and the sweep stick nah // mag got your name on it nice // scout wordplay nah...

Dave - leftovers okay.. did they get cut off after season 3? // matched with Orc was weird rhyme not too good // tune of.. the misdirection was off here // wheelhouse I like it // new toupee alright // dirt pour I liked conceptually just didnt hit


Dave on drums and mag with name takes this.


Mvgt Adverse

[Ajax]

Cool, close battle. Dave’s Bennie Hill line is something I’d write... gotta love the catering to the elderly. Thought Adverse’s world of Warcraft line was funny and direct.

Frankly, I think the concepts here were probably too close to call. But, Dave’s wording is more concise, which I think is really important. Adverse has solid concepts, but can let the wording get away from him at times.

So, Dave wins. In a close, entertaining read.

[Eviction]

@Adverse
better shit to do that battle you was cool, world of warcraft gf was humourous, likee some scout wordplay was funny.
@evaD
questionable how you was even matched with orc was slick, deliberatly lose to you today was cool, I didn't like that whole bar though, that should have closed that bar, dirt pour was cool also.

This is a close battle, I got evad winning this for having one more bar over adverse, so my count was 3-2, got to go with evad for now.

[Mac]

I was busy juggling a NBL run, and a grip of GWL champ matches, too
Only thing that tourney L “Shows n Proves” is I had way better shit to do than battle you
mild

I got mad clips for son, assaults n tecs, know you garnered a lotta respect
But all that talk’ll turn to…”Nevermind” when I put Dave on these Drums like a fucking Nirvana set
lol

Took a shot to my confidence last week, but similar events left this poor fag hurtin
Both ‘fucked up with Orc’, I lost to em, U got dumped by ur World of Warcraft girlfriend
funny

Let my occupation slip on Discord, but fuck it I’d post it again
It’s all business when I grip handles and sweep this trash, just doing my job as Custodian
ehh

I ain’t sharing bullets man, when I pull back you’ll feel the pain, promise.
Thought you could sneak by, this glock is week 5, whole MAG got your name on it
played

And what’s the outcome if you come runnin your mouth? Your worst fate.
They’ll find you ‘stretched out n not saying shit’ like some Scout wordplay
ok i like this


vs.

I’ve bodied you twice before, you want another I can make it so
But after round three I’m taking an axe to the leftovers like I’m HBO
good

We’re both coming off questionable losses, well here’s another plank to walk
Mine was strange voting, yours? questionable how you were even matched with orc
nice

I’m plenty trill; known for stepping out of cars to the tune of £20 mil
If adverse steps out of anything it’s to the tune of Benny Hill
lol

I’m the best NC. Your name should not be written next to me
If any part of you is in my wheelhouse it means I’ve mowed you down successfully
ok

Half tempted to deliberately lose to you today
It would be a great scalp and lord knows you could use a new toupe
dope

You came into this world dirt poor, so don’t be very surprised
That you’ll be leaving this world dirt pour, when I bury you alive
ok mild

nice read.. adverse had some wordy lines that could've used a cleaner wording but some good concepts here and there.. dave did good and hes been very consistent lately.. with some clever stuff

v/ dave

[Coop]

Adverse

I was busy juggling a NBL run, and a grip of GWL champ matches, too
Only thing that tourney L “Shows n Proves” is I had way better shit to do than battle you
Braggadocio but not that harsh
I got mad clips for son, assaults n tecs, know you garnered a lotta respect
But all that talk’ll turn to…”Nevermind” when I put Dave on these Drums like a fucking Nirvana set
OK
Took a shot to my confidence last week, but similar events left this poor fag hurtin
Both ‘fucked up with Orc’, I lost to em, U got dumped by ur World of Warcraft girlfriend
Ok
Let my occupation slip on Discord, but fuck it I’d post it again
It’s all business when I grip handles and sweep this trash, just doing my job as Custodian
Idk
I ain’t sharing bullets man, when I pull back you’ll feel the pain, promise.
Thought you could sneak by, this glock is week 5, whole MAG got your name on it
Blah
And what’s the outcome if you come runnin your mouth? Your worst fate.
They’ll find you ‘stretched out n not saying shit’ like some Scout wordplay
More of a diss to Scout


VS



Dave

I’ve bodied you twice before, you want another I can make it so
But after round three I’m taking an axe to the leftovers like I’m HBO
Meh
We’re both coming off questionable losses, well here’s another plank to walk
Mine was strange voting, yours? questionable how you were even matched with orc
[B]This doesn't rhyme and you know it/B]
I’m plenty trill; known for stepping out of cars to the tune of £20 mil
If adverse steps out of anything it’s to the tune of Benny Hill
Lol
I’m the best NC. Your name should not be written next to me
If any part of you is in my wheelhouse it means I’ve mowed you down successfully
Ok
Half tempted to deliberately lose to you today
It would be a great scalp and lord knows you could use a new toupe
Ok
You came into this world dirt poor, so don’t be very surprised
That you’ll be leaving this world dirt pour, when I bury you alive
Ok



Relatively close battle. Dave takes it with less misses


V Dave

[Scout]

Adverse

I got mad clips for son, assaults n tecs, know you garnered a lotta respect
But all that talk’ll turn to…”Nevermind” when I put Dave on these Drums like a fucking Nirvana set
I ain’t sharing bullets man, when I pull back you’ll feel the pain, promise.
Thought you could sneak by, this glock is week 5, whole MAG got your name on it

Dave

I’ve bodied you twice before, you want another I can make it so
But after round three I’m taking an axe to the leftovers like I’m HBO
I’m plenty trill; known for stepping out of cars to the tune of £20 mil
If adverse steps out of anything it’s to the tune of Benny Hill
I’m the best NC. Your name should not be written next to me
If any part of you is in my wheelhouse it means I’ve mowed you down successfully
Half tempted to deliberately lose to you today
It would be a great scalp and lord knows you could use a new toupe

4-2
Adverse nirvana could've been lotw contender with better wording
Voting Dave

[Destroyer]

Dave got this but props adverse. This is easily the best verse I’ve ever seen from you. Your wording was better, connections were solid, just need to tighten up the multis a bit and stick with this style. Good job man. The nirvana bar was flames
Dave, you know what you did and frankly, I want you to be less good so I’m not gonna waste any more time hyping you up. You need to start losing.

V/dave