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WEEK 4 CONTENDER MATCH: TOP iLL 3-0 VS Hush 2-0 TOP ILL WINS
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Rules Line limit Minimum: 10 Maximum: 16 Verses due 11:59pm EST October 29, 2020 (Thursday) Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE Good luck, gentlemen __________________
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Good luck bro
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10-24-2020, 11:40 AM
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10-24-2020, 07:00 PM
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Child neglect for site respect .. dad prefers his txt habit instead
The most attention u gave ya son was hanging a nc bar over his head I’ll leave u a skeleton ...In upn primetime u barely was relevant.. can’t teach ur boy to stand on his own like a man wit the legs of a pelican Date nights browsing netcees .. nigga this can’t be ur life Sadly It ain’t a gun bar when u share half the mag wit ya wife U bit Zuch as top . Bit top as Zuch.. homie this is writing itself If I call u my dog it’s cuz I gotta remind u to stop biting yourself It’s weird how u worship the legends .. u always been second to kungfu I know u wish u was Ajax but it’s weird u literally wannabe Rudge2 Ur face is deformed - that coke habit fucked ur whole nose up This nigga had issues wit Cain that would make Abel Undertaker and stone cold blush We can let it boom like cowboys in a saloon.. u leave on a stretcher just had a son .. I know u got issues when it’s time to pull out under pressure To u happy hours grind time .. Wife at home like why he neglect me for Jamie happy hour the neighbor fuckin her 60 mins straight while u playin txtcee
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No alias needed my guy. Let’s go... You guys think I steal bars? That’s a swerve indirectly Dogg, I’ll bite YOUR lines, then beat you with them after I word ‘em correctly Yeah I let my girl do a mag, Jamie thinks that learning is fun Plus that shit had better reviews than literally any tourney you run She put a lot of effort into it, worked hard, chick deserves it You couldn’t walk a mile in her shoes, even though they’d fit you perfect You’re a tiny man, Hush. I’m a superior mod, your friends love me, don’t make me take your world dude Cuz if she goes on a diet and grows some tits I’m gonna take your girl too For real that bitch fat, lipo is intact, that’s BIG facts Her 10th grade crush was a dude she tripped and fell on top of in gym class Big bad drug dealer, yeah Hush is killin’ this shit You grow WEED amigo, the only thing illegal is your citizenship Everyone talking about Des’ miscarriage, so I’m heated of course His kid was alive for less than a second and has more of a right to be here than yours You’re the SIXTH HOFer I’ve beaten here, trust Z is mountin’ worth That’s right SIXTH. Lol SIXXTHHHH, dogg can you even pronounce that word?
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10-27-2020, 11:14 AM
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Gang shit on my brain
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Child neglect for site respect .. dad prefers his txt habit instead
The most attention u gave ya son was hanging a nc bar over his head this was hard I’ll leave u a skeleton ...In upn primetime u barely was relevant.. can’t teach ur boy to stand on his own like a man wit the legs of a pelican not feelin this Date nights browsing netcees .. nigga this can’t be ur life Sadly It ain’t a gun bar when u share half the mag wit ya wife cool U bit Zuch as top . Bit top as Zuch.. homie this is writing itself If I call u my dog it’s cuz I gotta remind u to stop biting yourself i like the wording but do dogs bite themselves often? It’s weird how u worship the legends .. u always been second to kungfu I know u wish u was Ajax but it’s weird u literally wannabe Rudge2 hmm Ur face is deformed - that coke habit fucked ur whole nose up This nigga had issues wit Cain that would make Abel Undertaker and stone cold blush make them blush dawg? what am i missing. We can let it boom like cowboys in a saloon.. u leave on a stretcher just had a son .. I know u got issues when it’s time to pull out under pressure ok cool To u happy hours grind time .. Wife at home like why he neglect me for Jamie happy hour the neighbor fuckin her 60 mins straight while u playin txtcee lolllllll vs. You guys think I steal bars? That’s a swerve indirectly Dogg, I’ll bite YOUR lines, then beat you with them after I word ‘em correctly cool Yeah I let my girl do a mag, Jamie thinks that learning is fun Plus that shit had better reviews than literally any tourney you run cool She put a lot of effort into it, worked hard, chick deserves it You couldn’t walk a mile in her shoes, even though they’d fit you perfect shiii You’re a tiny man, Hush. I’m a superior mod, your friends love me, don’t make me take your world dude Cuz if she goes on a diet and grows some tits I’m gonna take your girl too nahh For real that bitch fat, lipo is intact, that’s BIG facts Her 10th grade crush was a dude she tripped and fell on top of in gym class ok Big bad drug dealer, yeah Hush is killin’ this shit You grow WEED amigo, the only thing illegal is your citizenship nice Everyone talking about Des’ miscarriage, so I’m heated of course His kid was alive for less than a second and has more of a right to be here than yours ok You’re the SIXTH HOFer I’ve beaten here, trust Z is mountin’ worth That’s right SIXTH. Lol SIXXTHHHH, dogg can you even pronounce that word? ehh ima have to vote ill/zuch. good battle here, pretty even on quotable bars tbh. zuch had the more solid verse imo.
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11-01-2020, 01:14 PM
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Child neglect for site respect .. dad prefers his txt habit instead
The most attention u gave ya son was hanging a nc bar over his head good opening personal hit I’ll leave u a skeleton ...In upn primetime u barely was relevant.. can’t teach ur boy to stand on his own like a man wit the legs of a pelican legs of a pelican is funny but the bar as a whole is a miss to me Date nights browsing netcees .. nigga this can’t be ur life Sadly It ain’t a gun bar when u share half the mag wit ya wife ehh "mag" concepts are so played out to me at this point, but a wife being involved like this has literally never happened so it alright U bit Zuch as top . Bit top as Zuch.. homie this is writing itself If I call u my dog it’s cuz I gotta remind u to stop biting yourself nah loose personal that doesnt really translate,a nd too basic a concept It’s weird how u worship the legends .. u always been second to kungfu I know u wish u was Ajax but it’s weird u literally wannabe Rudge2 okay personal hit.. pretty statementish tho Ur face is deformed - that coke habit fucked ur whole nose up This nigga had issues wit Cain that would make Abel Undertaker and stone cold blush lol i dont usually like 'wrestling' concepts but this was solid... cool wp and personal We can let it boom like cowboys in a saloon.. u leave on a stretcher just had a son .. I know u got issues when it’s time to pull out under pressure pretty cool here To u happy hours grind time .. Wife at home like why he neglect me for Jamie happy hour the neighbor fuckin her 60 mins straight while u playin txtcee lol chukcle worthy vs. You guys think I steal bars? That’s a swerve indirectly Dogg, I’ll bite YOUR lines, then beat you with them after I word ‘em correctly solid Yeah I let my girl do a mag, Jamie thinks that learning is fun Plus that shit had better reviews than literally any tourney you run coolish personal She put a lot of effort into it, worked hard, chick deserves it You couldn’t walk a mile in her shoes, even though they’d fit you perfect lol funny You’re a tiny man, Hush. I’m a superior mod, your friends love me, don’t make me take your world dude Cuz if she goes on a diet and grows some tits I’m gonna take your girl too nah not feeling this For real that bitch fat, lipo is intact, that’s BIG facts Her 10th grade crush was a dude she tripped and fell on top of in gym class lol funny concept...this was cool Big bad drug dealer, yeah Hush is killin’ this shit You grow WEED amigo, the only thing illegal is your citizenship LOL funny jab Everyone talking about Des’ miscarriage, so I’m heated of course His kid was alive for less than a second and has more of a right to be here than yours lol works well in followup to the above concepot..solid You’re the SIXTH HOFer I’ve beaten here, trust Z is mountin’ worth That’s right SIXTH. Lol SIXXTHHHH, dogg can you even pronounce that word? haha pretty funny lisp concept and double personal Cool battle here guys.. i've seen both come doper conceptually in the past, but these were both pretty consistent verses with a lot of good humor and hard hitting personals...in the end i think TOP was a bit more consistent and had the hiegher highs so he took this one.. good read props to both Vote Zuch |
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10-27-2020, 04:32 PM
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Child neglect for site respect .. dad prefers his txt habit instead The most attention u gave ya son was hanging a nc bar over his head Date nights browsing netcees .. nigga this can’t be ur life Sadly It ain’t a gun bar when u share half the mag wit ya wife U bit Zuch as top . Bit top as Zuch.. homie this is writing itself If I call u my dog it’s cuz I gotta remind u to stop biting yourself Zuch has: You guys think I steal bars? That’s a swerve indirectly Dogg, I’ll bite YOUR lines, then beat you with them after I word ‘em correctly Yeah I let my girl do a mag, Jamie thinks that learning is fun Plus that shit had better reviews than literally any tourney you run She put a lot of effort into it, worked hard, chick deserves it You couldn’t walk a mile in her shoes, even though they’d fit you perfect Big bad drug dealer, yeah Hush is killin’ this shit You grow WEED amigo, the only thing illegal is your citizenship Both started off fire and then kind of died out and got pretty general or just didn’t hit super hard with me but I think I’d give it to Zuch thought he threw some haymakers here |
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10-29-2020, 12:12 PM
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Child neglect for site respect .. dad prefers his txt habit instead
The most attention u gave ya son was hanging a nc bar over his head cool opener I’ll leave u a skeleton ...In upn primetime u barely was relevant.. can’t teach ur boy to stand on his own like a man wit the legs of a pelican nah im not really feeling this Date nights browsing netcees .. nigga this can’t be ur life Sadly It ain’t a gun bar when u share half the mag wit ya wife this was funny, i fuck with it U bit Zuch as top . Bit top as Zuch.. homie this is writing itself If I call u my dog it’s cuz I gotta remind u to stop biting yourself i didnt like this one as much as the last bar, its kind of a fresh take on an older concept but its ok It’s weird how u worship the legends .. u always been second to kungfu I know u wish u was Ajax but it’s weird u literally wannabe Rudge2 nah this is kinda light to me Ur face is deformed - that coke habit fucked ur whole nose up This nigga had issues wit Cain that would make Abel Undertaker and stone cold blush kind of a played concept and it feels too long the way it's worded We can let it boom like cowboys in a saloon.. u leave on a stretcher just had a son .. I know u got issues when it’s time to pull out under pressure decent but not a haymaker To u happy hours grind time .. Wife at home like why he neglect me for Jamie happy hour the neighbor fuckin her 60 mins straight while u playin txtcee eh ok closer You guys think I steal bars? That’s a swerve indirectly Dogg, I’ll bite YOUR lines, then beat you with them after I word ‘em correctly not really vicious but still a decent hit Yeah I let my girl do a mag, Jamie thinks that learning is fun Plus that shit had better reviews than literally any tourney you run same comment as before, wording is good but the substance beneath it is missing She put a lot of effort into it, worked hard, chick deserves it You couldn’t walk a mile in her shoes, even though they’d fit you perfect ok You’re a tiny man, Hush. I’m a superior mod, your friends love me, don’t make me take your world dude Cuz if she goes on a diet and grows some tits I’m gonna take your girl too nah feels too much like middle school playground disses For real that bitch fat, lipo is intact, that’s BIG facts Her 10th grade crush was a dude she tripped and fell on top of in gym class this was funny Big bad drug dealer, yeah Hush is killin’ this shit You grow WEED amigo, the only thing illegal is your citizenship nah kinda corny Everyone talking about Des’ miscarriage, so I’m heated of course His kid was alive for less than a second and has more of a right to be here than yours dope You’re the SIXTH HOFer I’ve beaten here, trust Z is mountin’ worth That’s right SIXTH. Lol SIXXTHHHH, dogg can you even pronounce that word? eh kinda funny but again lacks any lyrical aspect to it. I think you prolly shouldve closed with the last bar this was a cool battle from both sides and kinda close. I think the miscarriage bar was probably the one that resonated with me the most and Zuch had slightly better wording overall, but I also felt like zuch also had more misses conceptually. Meanwhile, Hush had more elements of lyricism and had the more consistent verse throughout which is more to my preference v/ Hush Last edited by Answer; 10-29-2020 at 12:16 PM. |
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10-29-2020, 03:29 PM
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Child neglect for site respect .. dad prefers his txt habit instead
The most attention u gave ya son was hanging a nc bar over his head yes I’ll leave u a skeleton ...In upn primetime u barely was relevant.. can’t teach ur boy to stand on his own like a man wit the legs of a pelican no Date nights browsing netcees .. nigga this can’t be ur life Sadly It ain’t a gun bar when u share half the mag wit ya wife alright U bit Zuch as top . Bit top as Zuch.. homie this is writing itself If I call u my dog it’s cuz I gotta remind u to stop biting yourself solid It’s weird how u worship the legends .. u always been second to kungfu I know u wish u was Ajax but it’s weird u literally wannabe Rudge2 great line Ur face is deformed - that coke habit fucked ur whole nose up This nigga had issues wit Cain that would make Abel Undertaker and stone cold blush i like it We can let it boom like cowboys in a saloon.. u leave on a stretcher just had a son .. I know u got issues when it’s time to pull out under pressure eh To u happy hours grind time .. Wife at home like why he neglect me for Jamie happy hour the neighbor fuckin her 60 mins straight while u playin txtcee mean. vs. You guys think I steal bars? That’s a swerve indirectly Dogg, I’ll bite YOUR lines, then beat you with them after I word ‘em correctly fire Yeah I let my girl do a mag, Jamie thinks that learning is fun Plus that shit had better reviews than literally any tourney you run lol She put a lot of effort into it, worked hard, chick deserves it You couldn’t walk a mile in her shoes, even though they’d fit you perfect lmfao You’re a tiny man, Hush. I’m a superior mod, your friends love me, don’t make me take your world dude Cuz if she goes on a diet and grows some tits I’m gonna take your girl too terribly worded. For real that bitch fat, lipo is intact, that’s BIG facts Her 10th grade crush was a dude she tripped and fell on top of in gym class flames Big bad drug dealer, yeah Hush is killin’ this shit You grow WEED amigo, the only thing illegal is your citizenship meh Everyone talking about Des’ miscarriage, so I’m heated of course His kid was alive for less than a second and has more of a right to be here than yours ok You’re the SIXTH HOFer I’ve beaten here, trust Z is mountin’ worth That’s right SIXTH. Lol SIXXTHHHH, dogg can you even pronounce that word? lol well, now that i literally broke it down bar by bar. I'm sorry Hush, I loved some of your lines, but Zuch won. v zuch |
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10-29-2020, 05:51 PM
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Hush
Gun bar dope Dog cool Jamie cool Pull out under pressure and cain were just ok to me Top Bite ur lines cool Shoes lol cool Crush dope and LOTB Miscarriage dope Honestly this was so close but when top ill hit he hit hard. I’m giving the edge his way Vote top ill dragster |
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Bags will be avenged
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Top ill was meaner and got it because of that
Hush was nice. Legs, crib, 10 grade crush Personals were there but just didn’t hit as hard as Zuch’s punches about his height, tourney running, etc. Good battle V/top
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10-31-2020, 07:56 PM
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Date nights browsing netcees .. nigga this can’t be ur life Sadly It ain’t a gun bar when u share half the mag wit ya wife U bit Zuch as top . Bit top as Zuch.. homie this is writing itself If I call u my dog it’s cuz I gotta remind u to stop biting yourself It’s weird how u worship the legends .. u always been second to kungfu I know u wish u was Ajax but it’s weird u literally wannabe Rudge2 Ur face is deformed - that coke habit fucked ur whole nose up This nigga had issues wit Cain that would make Abel Undertaker and stone cold blush Top You guys think I steal bars? That’s a swerve indirectly Dogg, I’ll bite YOUR lines, then beat you with them after I word ‘em correctly Yeah I let my girl do a mag, Jamie thinks that learning is fun Plus that shit had better reviews than literally any tourney you run She put a lot of effort into it, worked hard, chick deserves it You couldn’t walk a mile in her shoes, even though they’d fit you perfect For real that bitch fat, lipo is intact, that’s BIG facts Her 10th grade crush was a dude she tripped and fell on top of in gym class Big bad drug dealer, yeah Hush is killin’ this shit You grow WEED amigo, the only thing illegal is your citizenship Everyone talking about Des’ miscarriage, so I’m heated of course His kid was alive for less than a second and has more of a right to be here than yours Top likely fed off Hush's verse, but technicalities may say otherwise He's a smart battler. Won anyway Voting Top |
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