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Exis · 04-21-2020, 08:38 PM

The evil get rich & fat, in the U.S. The best will starve
Thugs leave our hoods with techs & scars, this test is ours
& ours alone, the start of the conflict
Rise up, rip apart all the nonsense
I got this...

Yo bitch, Exis got bad habits
I'll beef until the rap static turns my enemies asthmatic
The government arrests our brothers like they mad @ us, how sad tragic
These spastics reject our slang, even though they imprisioned us & sexed our dames
We either ran to Canada, or got on the next train before our necks were sprained
I don't respect the game, I'd rather resurrect the best
Inject my name
In the flesh, the pressure leaves sections of guests in flames
Omega - the crest scares vicious, shells turn your chest into spare riblets
Ever since the eviction I've trailed frictionless, until I decided to nail bitches
I lurk in alley ways waitin' for sumthin' to make suffer, take the gun suction to wallets
& stuff it in pockets, until our nations politics revolve around important topics
Like "Why can't I get a job?"
& "Why do we only fight the poor?"
"How are the votes really stored?"
"Why is our economy based on wars?"
"Why the fuck did we elect a coward?"
"Who really bombed the towers?"
"Why is respect so showered?"
Bitch when my money is tight my tech showers, politicians are weak & Exis wrecks power.

corleone · 04-22-2020, 12:06 PM

obviously, you have some sort of delusion going on that you are not a thug, and thats why this verse was a major downage for me.. well, I say this because your lyrics, and language reflect thuggetry, for one.. including your avatar but hence you say..

"Thugs leave our hoods with techs & scars, this test is ours"

In a act of socialism and being pro like, you shouldnt of never incorporated that saying.. you cannot fight fire with fire in a war between two dialects which reflect eachother.. be different, stand out and stay true to your vision.. it was hypocritical.. but never the less, on a grand scale of skill, I would say that ths verse was trash and wayy off topic.. you need to grow.. mentally, then cultivate hiphop in its truest form.. 100

Exis · 04-22-2020, 05:07 PM

Fuck outta here nigga...

04-21-2020, 08:38 PM	#1
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Check... The evil get rich & fat, in the U.S. The best will starve Thugs leave our hoods with techs & scars, this test is ours & ours alone, the start of the conflict Rise up, rip apart all the nonsense I got this... Yo bitch, Exis got bad habits I'll beef until the rap static turns my enemies asthmatic The government arrests our brothers like they mad @ us, how sad tragic These spastics reject our slang, even though they imprisioned us & sexed our dames We either ran to Canada, or got on the next train before our necks were sprained I don't respect the game, I'd rather resurrect the best Inject my name In the flesh, the pressure leaves sections of guests in flames Omega - the crest scares vicious, shells turn your chest into spare riblets Ever since the eviction I've trailed frictionless, until I decided to nail bitches I lurk in alley ways waitin' for sumthin' to make suffer, take the gun suction to wallets & stuff it in pockets, until our nations politics revolve around important topics Like "Why can't I get a job?" & "Why do we only fight the poor?" "How are the votes really stored?" "Why is our economy based on wars?" "Why the fuck did we elect a coward?" "Who really bombed the towers?" "Why is respect so showered?" Bitch when my money is tight my tech showers, politicians are weak & Exis wrecks power.

04-22-2020, 12:06 PM	#2
corleone Shakespearian Dialect Join Date: Mar 2020 Location: Brooklyn, NY --> Allentown, PA Posts: 1,022 Battle Record: 0-3 Rep Power: 0	obviously, you have some sort of delusion going on that you are not a thug, and thats why this verse was a major downage for me.. well, I say this because your lyrics, and language reflect thuggetry, for one.. including your avatar but hence you say.. "Thugs leave our hoods with techs & scars, this test is ours" In a act of socialism and being pro like, you shouldnt of never incorporated that saying.. you cannot fight fire with fire in a war between two dialects which reflect eachother.. be different, stand out and stay true to your vision.. it was hypocritical.. but never the less, on a grand scale of skill, I would say that ths verse was trash and wayy off topic.. you need to grow.. mentally, then cultivate hiphop in its truest form.. 100 __________________

04-22-2020, 05:07 PM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Fuck outta here nigga...