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Skilled with the writtens, Pardon my ability to really be wicked
Dug urself a nice whole, eventually ill use ur bones to fill in the ditches I'm still in the mixes, cause how you gone doubt main ingredients If your words are weapons. mine r the reasons your plainly eating'em Brain completely numb, so doped up you can not even touch me Trust me, cause I'm high on more percs than a compliment junky Nobodies above me, not when it comes to puting life in perspective Give you that hardcore dose of reality, and all types of injections Gen the viking, the legend, one of the few that you wanna behold As for lyrics, you want mine so bad that your covered in coal Quit shoveling snow, too many primative fucking writers exist might be a vet, but ur best work is stone age wether you like to admit I ain't the slightest convinced, my prime has yet to reveal ill take your heart, leave your body parts across the rest of the field Rip the crest from your shield, it looks like pedestrians cross Your bitch intoxicated, she won't wipe the scents of me off I march like centipedes walk, one man battalion of rage The biggest problem with your sorry ass is how to explain Cowherds get slain, so if you fit in this description beware You can't be free in skinny jeans, I find imprissonment there
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good clean dope bars...
Brain completely numb, so doped up you can not even touch me Trust me, cause I'm high on more percs than a compliment junky Nobodies above me, not when it comes to puting life in perspective Give you that hardcore dose of reality, and all types of injections sickest shit ever.
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Skilled with the writtens, Pardon my ability to really be wicked
Dug urself a nice whole, eventually ill use ur bones to fill in the ditches after reading that it lured me in to keep reading. this was a good free verse man and it all flowed together really well |
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Lol cool drop geno, i enjoyed the dark humor involved. From this point on was my favorite
Gen the viking, the legend, one of the few that you wanna beholdAs for lyrics, you want mine so bad that your covered in coalQuit shoveling snow, too many primative fucking writers existmight be a vet, but ur best work is stone age wether you like to admitI ain't the slightest convinced, my prime has yet to revealill take your heart, leave your body parts across the rest of the fieldRip the crest from your shield, it looks like pedestrians crossYour bitch intoxicated, she won't wipe the scents of me offI march like centipedes walk, one man battalion of rageThe biggest problem with your sorry ass is how to explainCowherds get slain, so if you fit in this description bewareYou can't be free in skinny jeans, I find imprissonment there The bwggining few was dope too, and i do believe you when u say ur not in that prime yet. I do t think i am too. I enjoyed this man. I know your super busy but get at me for a collab when u got the time g. Peace |
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Quit shoveling snow, too many primative fucking writers exist
might be a vet, but ur best work is stone age wether you like to admit I ain't the slightest convinced, my prime has yet to reveal ill take your heart, leave your body parts across the rest of the field ^^^Favorite Part. Dope shit right there. All in all I enjoyed it man. Nice flow and some dark ass content too. Dope shit Gen. My only problem with it is it was too god damn short haha. Drop some feed on my drop when you get a chance. http://www.artofbattling.com/forum/s...hp?398-ZenLand |
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Boink
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lol @ the imprisonment of skinny jeans.
this was a much more impressive work of aggression than i remember seeing from you recently, and i'm usually pretty critical of your writing from the stance of somebody who i expect to present quality, or at least, a sense of viscerality. you were really on point with your rhythm and had some great conceptual gems in here. bones to fill in the ditches, compliment junky, "stone age", all valid observations and also impressive displays of a discipline you've been dedicated to. you're getting there adolf. thanks man. 1 |
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up lol
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