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05-13-2018, 09:10 AM
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A Stormy Tuesday afternoon
 She dared to be different beyond hair color and lipstick I swear I bared witness to her magnificent image When she stared at my lens with the most intimate glimpse of what it meant to be free A genuine spirit so photogenic and sweet The way she skipped through the rain causing ripples and waves like a nymph in the street or a big city mermaid that finally made her way to the sea! . . "Okay, baby ... say CHEESE"
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05-13-2018, 10:33 AM
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White Earl
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Short and sweet. Nice
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05-13-2018, 11:27 AM
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A genuine spirit
so photogenic and sweet The way she skipped through the rain causing ripples and waves like a nymph in the street or a big city mermaid that finally made her way to the sea! ^^Beautiful. |
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05-15-2018, 12:24 PM
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This is awesome. Poetry meets rap flows.
I dig it |
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