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04-28-2018, 12:05 PM
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Summer Storm
"Summer Storm"
"Kiss me” rains down dispensing the themes of our lives Embalming the time. Kept it wrapped….every chord. Every line. Mnemonic notation Every note connote a moment A stranger’s frolicsome smile; Lightning crescent flashed perfection against a thundering sky She couldn't remember his face or sign, just salt scented ocean maybe we’re not meant to relish in details...but only in moments She may have forgotten his name today, but that summer storm continues to roll in. |
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04-28-2018, 10:07 PM
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Yea dis trash
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04-30-2018, 02:20 PM
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I dont know man that was funny lol
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05-05-2018, 03:54 PM
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I think the original picture you wrote this to brings much needed context to the content. In any case I dug the poetics. Very sophisticated and in the pocket.
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