How To Catch A Body

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-27-2018, 10:13 AM

...swag, flow, flex...

Ayo ... check it ...

I'm the 3 Eyed Raven with a lightsaber
Step out of line and a nigga might slay ya
Spit rhymes so precise that they slice like lasers
Plus I'm nice with a razor, pinstripe ya windpipe
When we fight in the 39th Chamber, ice grill you haters
Right before I shank ya, prose so cold I gave Pablo a glacier
A kilo of that snow'll get you popped like a Coke
That's a triple entendre -- call me Edgar Allan Dope
Got the Palace on the hill wit the alligator moat
What you agitators on? Bro my habitat's patrolled
By a dragon wrapped in chrome! I'm so savage that my throne
Was crafted from the bones of the rappers that I domed
Yo those bastards stole my flow 'n choked on daggers to the throat
Cos every passage that I wrote had scattered shrapnel in the quotes
Sack ya castles made of stone and attack ya tabernacles
Cos I practice no shalōm! Grab the ratchet go Capone
Samuel Jackson wit a 'fro and a loaded fo'ty fo'
Blowing Pulp right out they lobes!
As I tear-a-teen-nose off an adolescent skull!
Like A Natural Born Killer or a Desperado!
(Let's go) the muthafuckin GOAT! Baahaaaaaaaa

Lyriscologist · 01-27-2018, 12:10 PM

not too shabby bro, seems more of like a chicken scratch piece, but, nonetheless had some good lines, flow and structure

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-27-2018, 12:50 PM

Word. Appreciate that.

01-27-2018, 10:13 AM	#1
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 783 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584278	How To Catch A Body ...swag, flow, flex... Ayo ... check it ... I'm the 3 Eyed Raven with a lightsaber Step out of line and a nigga might slay ya Spit rhymes so precise that they slice like lasers Plus I'm nice with a razor, pinstripe ya windpipe When we fight in the 39th Chamber, ice grill you haters Right before I shank ya, prose so cold I gave Pablo a glacier A kilo of that snow'll get you popped like a Coke That's a triple entendre -- call me Edgar Allan Dope Got the Palace on the hill wit the alligator moat What you agitators on? Bro my habitat's patrolled By a dragon wrapped in chrome! I'm so savage that my throne Was crafted from the bones of the rappers that I domed Yo those bastards stole my flow 'n choked on daggers to the throat Cos every passage that I wrote had scattered shrapnel in the quotes Sack ya castles made of stone and attack ya tabernacles Cos I practice no shalōm! Grab the ratchet go Capone Samuel Jackson wit a 'fro and a loaded fo'ty fo' Blowing Pulp right out they lobes! As I tear-a-teen-nose off an adolescent skull! Like A Natural Born Killer or a Desperado! (Let's go) the muthafuckin GOAT! Baahaaaaaaaa Last edited by ACTIVATE SELF; 01-27-2018 at 03:54 PM.

01-27-2018, 12:10 PM	#2
Lyriscologist Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 101 Rep Power: 95181	not too shabby bro, seems more of like a chicken scratch piece, but, nonetheless had some good lines, flow and structure

01-27-2018, 12:50 PM	#3
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 783 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584278	Word. Appreciate that.