Never heard this Eminem song before

Witty · 08-13-2016, 06:40 PM

Probably one of my favourites in the last ten or so years. Shit's clever with the word play, very subtle.

I know a lot of you will hate this because it's Eminem.

sral · 08-14-2016, 11:22 AM

nah it's just more of his nonsensical bullshit I already got tired of hearing 5 albums ago

annoying stop/start flow and angry delivery with wack beats

i honestly don't know why I even keep clicking these when ppl post them, Em has nothing I find entertaining at all now

Witty · 08-14-2016, 01:41 PM

What was nonsensical tho?

Like, post the bars...cuz I didn't hear any.

sral · 08-14-2016, 03:41 PM

lmao okay so I'll play along just this once

I can hear the drummer drumming
And the trumpets, someone's
tryna summon someone, I know something's coming
But I'm running from it to be standing at the summit
And plummet, how come it wasn't what I thought it was, was it
Too good to be true?
Have nothing, get it all but too much of it then lose it again
Did I swallow hallucinogens, 'cause if not, where the hell did it go?
'Cause here I sit in Lucifer's den by the dutch oven just choosing to sin

A DUTCH OVEN IS A FART UNDER THE BLANKET

THE REST THAT SHIT IS STRAIGHT GARBO, TRYING WAY TOO HARD TO BE COMPLEX AND AS A RESULT YOU GET THIS HORRID JAUNTY FLOW THAT SOUNDS ALL OVER THE PLACE

I CANT FUCKS WITH THIS SHIT YO

Witty · 08-14-2016, 04:35 PM

But it all makes sense tho.

I'm just saying, I hear a lot of people talking about Eminem's nonsensical bars, but I don't see any.

His flow is terrible. I agree. But from a written perspective, his work is better than ever

Witty · 08-14-2016, 04:37 PM

Also completely missed the comparison he was making in those first bars.

sral · 08-15-2016, 08:16 AM

lmao I just can't listen to that shit

it's like he's trying to find a thought amongst a scatterbrained aimless bit of writing that goes off on far too many rhyme scheme tangents without any real direction

he may as well be writing text raps at RB

Jamal · 08-15-2016, 12:40 PM

lol

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Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	What was nonsensical tho? Like, post the bars...cuz I didn't hear any. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

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sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899395	lmao okay so I'll play along just this once I can hear the drummer drumming And the trumpets, someone's tryna summon someone, I know something's coming But I'm running from it to be standing at the summit And plummet, how come it wasn't what I thought it was, was it Too good to be true? Have nothing, get it all but too much of it then lose it again Did I swallow hallucinogens, 'cause if not, where the hell did it go? 'Cause here I sit in Lucifer's den by the dutch oven just choosing to sin A DUTCH OVEN IS A FART UNDER THE BLANKET THE REST THAT SHIT IS STRAIGHT GARBO, TRYING WAY TOO HARD TO BE COMPLEX AND AS A RESULT YOU GET THIS HORRID JAUNTY FLOW THAT SOUNDS ALL OVER THE PLACE I CANT FUCKS WITH THIS SHIT YO __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

08-14-2016, 04:35 PM	#5
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	But it all makes sense tho. I'm just saying, I hear a lot of people talking about Eminem's nonsensical bars, but I don't see any. His flow is terrible. I agree. But from a written perspective, his work is better than ever __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

08-14-2016, 04:37 PM	#6
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Also completely missed the comparison he was making in those first bars. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

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