Championship Match: Orc vs Jilti - ORC WINS

[Orc]

NBL Season 9


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@jilti

[Orc]

What are you looking to do? I'm good with 12-14 @jilti

[jilti]

Im going 10.

[Orc]

Sent 10 to Useless

[jilti]

dear Orc aka Burd,

congrats on taking the title from a person with a speech impediment who cant even say those words..



u took a disabled persons spot.. thats handicapped parking fam
soon as orc roll up, metal arms put this retard down like van accessible ramps
splatter ur insides from floor to ceiling up, intenstines to tibia
so many pieces of Burd on the wall.. look like boston celtic memorabilia
makes sense u've faced Junto like 2 or 3 times & cant beat him still
cuz against Junior Misses are fitting for someone with such a female build
ya Outsiders crew scared to face me. guess u the brave one or something
that means orc has the most Guts on the Outside.. after the blade done cutting
for blood money send rounds thru the front of ur crib til they exit out
but even if my aim off u'll take a stray,dawg.. once i let one in ur house

[Orc]

Originally Posted by jilti thread

whats the best way to get rid of herpes?

Wait, what?!

This guy is a lame; altho I suggest a lighter with flames
How u got Bubbles coming outta ya Mouth that'd put a Comic Writer to shame
Congrats to the boy Witty. I heard he's next with the kids
If YOUR Girlfriend tells you about her Bump it means you Infected the bitch
''I'm not from RB guyz! I swear, Bible on the shelf''
Maaan I shoulda known u weren't Greedy how u never kept a Title for yaself
Drive-by ya wholeee squad; ain't a thing to gun 'em
Trusttt... I'll have Arms Pointed Behind ya Back like a Ninja Runnin'
J a Baby at text; &&&the Knife will land him in trouble
Throw hands it's a tussle, you'll Catch a Nick Young.. that's DeAngelo Russell


AND STILLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by jilti

dear Orc aka Burd,

congrats on taking the title from a person with a speech impediment who cant even say those words..



u took a disabled persons spot.. thats handicapped parking fam
soon as orc roll up, metal arms put this retard down like van accessible ramps
cool opener
splatter ur insides from floor to ceiling up, intenstines to tibia
so many pieces of Burd on the wall.. look like boston celtic memorabilia
Ok.. Not seen this nameplay done
makes sense u've faced Junto like 2 or 3 times & cant beat him still
cuz against Junior Misses are fitting for someone with such a female build
Haha, ok again
ya Outsiders crew scared to face me. guess u the brave one or something
that means orc has the most Guts on the Outside.. after the blade done cutting
pretty cool
for blood money send rounds thru the front of ur crib til they exit out
but even if my aim off u'll take a stray,dawg.. once i let one in ur house
Not really feeling this last one here

Vs

Originally Posted by Orc

Wait, what?!

This guy is a lame; altho I suggest a lighter with flames
How u got Bubbles coming outta ya Mouth that'd put a Comic Writer to shame
dope
Congrats to the boy Witty. I heard he's next with the kids
If YOUR Girlfriend tells you about her Bump it means you Infected the bitch
Haha cool
''I'm not from RB guyz! I swear, Bible on the shelf''
Maaan I shoulda known u weren't Greedy how u never kept a Title for yaself
Who's Greedy? Shit. I see where you're coming from though & it's clever
Drive-by ya wholeee squad; ain't a thing to gun 'em
Trusttt... I'll have Arms Pointed Behind ya Back like a Ninja Runnin'
This is creative, cool
J a Baby at text; &&&the Knife will land him in trouble
Throw hands it's a tussle, you'll Catch a Nick Young.. that's DeAngelo Russell
Ok. Nice flow too.


AND STILLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

Ok so dug both verses. Overall, I felt Jilti shoulda come a bit harder for a champ match. I was feeling orcs hits more. Creativity was better. I was pleased to see he didn't focus too much on the herpes thing. Couple bars was enough. LOTB was Comic Writer for me.

Good shit from both,

V/Orc

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by jilti

Opener, memorabilia & junior misses.

Pretty good drop, even yo misses were decent. Thing is I feel in a champ match it's all out - throw all of the bars, personals & haymakers u have. Verse read so tho u ran out of ammo & just posted what u had.

versus

Originally Posted by Orc

Opener, title, running ninja & closer.

Pretty good verse, expecially since it's short, but the creativitiy's what shined here. The ninja was LOTB & the opener was pretty original too. Seen better drops from u obviously, but this was nice nonetheless.

Overall ORC takes it, expected more from Jilti tbh, but he didn't have enough to win.

[Saint]

u took a disabled persons spot.. thats handicapped parking fam
soon as orc roll up, metal arms put this retard down like van accessible ramps
This ok...decent personal tie in.

splatter ur insides from floor to ceiling up, intestines to tibia
so many pieces of Burd on the wall.. look like boston celtic memorabilia

Not sure if this has been done, but its ok...nothing crazy

makes sense u've faced Junto like 2 or 3 times & cant beat him still
cuz against Junior Misses are fitting for someone with such a female build

This is better, and the personal was good.

ya Outsiders crew scared to face me. guess u the brave one or something
that means orc has the most Guts on the Outside.. after the blade done cutting
for blood money send rounds thru the front of ur crib til they exit out
but even if my aim off u'll take a stray,dawg.. once i let one in your house

I didn't feel these last two imo. outsiders pretty much aint been active in over a year, and the guts flip was eh. stray dog didnt care for either, tbh.

This guy is a lame; altho I suggest a lighter with flames
How u got Bubbles coming outta ya Mouth that'd put a Comic Writer to shame
Seen this concept before..nice flip

Congrats to the boy Witty. I heard he's next with the kids
If YOUR Girlfriend tells you about her Bump it means you Infected the bitch
ok, not bad ref wording helped it

''I'm not from RB guyz! I swear, Bible on the shelf''
Maaan I shoulda known u weren't Greedy how u never kept a Title for yaself
Alright, straight but not a heavy hitter..

Drive-by ya wholeee squad; ain't a thing to gun 'em
Trusttt... I'll have Arms Pointed Behind ya Back like a Ninja Runnin'
I liked this, maybe its a personal opinion but the imagery cool..

J a Baby at text; &&&the Knife will land him in trouble
Throw hands it's a tussle, you'll Catch a Nick Young.. that's DeAngelo Russell
Solid closer..

Vote Orc. Jilti's last two didnt hit at all to me. I did like the junior line but orc was more consistent.

[JShazo]

u took a disabled persons spot.. thats handicapped parking fam
soon as orc roll up, metal arms put this retard down like van accessible ramps
vs

This guy is a lame; altho I suggest a lighter with flames
How u got Bubbles coming outta ya Mouth that'd put a Comic Writer to shame
Drive-by ya wholeee squad; ain't a thing to gun 'em
Trusttt... I'll have Arms Pointed Behind ya Back like a Ninja Runnin'

I got Orc taking it here, Jilti had a couple good lines, but more misses imo. Comic writer and ninja running bars secured the W

vote- Orc

[Joe Boston]

Jilti

u took a disabled persons spot.. thats handicapped parking fam
soon as orc roll up, metal arms put this retard down like van accessible ramps
Cool metaphore i felt this finisher couldve been more polished on the wording aspect

splatter ur insides from floor to ceiling up, intenstines to tibia
so many pieces of Burd on the wall.. look like boston celtic memorabilia
Dope nameplay flip

makes sense u've faced Junto like 2 or 3 times & cant beat him still
cuz against Junior Misses are fitting for someone with such a female build
Lol

ya Outsiders crew scared to face me. guess u the brave one or something
that means orc has the most Guts on the Outside.. after the blade done cutting
Good flip

for blood money send rounds thru the front of ur crib til they exit out
but even if my aim off u'll take a stray,dawg.. once i let one in ur house
Not bad wordplay kinda basic and predictable punch

Orc


This guy is a lame; altho I suggest a lighter with flames
How u got Bubbles coming outta ya Mouth that'd put a Comic Writer to shame
Lol nice flip good reference

Congrats to the boy Witty. I heard he's next with the kids
If YOUR Girlfriend tells you about her Bump it means you Infected the bitch
Ok felt couldve done more here

''I'm not from RB guyz! I swear, Bible on the shelf''
Maaan I shoulda known u weren't Greedy how u never kept a Title for yaself
Lol good reference

Drive-by ya wholeee squad; ain't a thing to gun 'em
Trusttt... I'll have Arms Pointed Behind ya Back like a Ninja Runnin'
Nice

J a Baby at text; &&&the Knife will land him in trouble
Throw hands it's a tussle, you'll Catch a Nick Young.. that's DeAngelo Russell
Dope

Jilti had the Burd np and the Guts on the outside line which were both dope. Orc i felt was more consistent here like his opener the ninja reference and his closer. Just overall more creative.

V/orc

[Toil]

Jil: celtics, closer
Orc: bubbles, bump, ninja running

The Celtics and bubbles punches were dope, props to both. Orc had more hitters though.

Vote = Orc

[SHECK WES]

u took a disabled persons spot.. thats handicapped parking fam
soon as orc roll up, metal arms put this retard down like van accessible ramps
this shit was nice
splatter ur insides from floor to ceiling up, intenstines to tibia
so many pieces of Burd on the wall.. look like boston celtic memorabilia
alright
makes sense u've faced Junto like 2 or 3 times & cant beat him still
cuz against Junior Misses are fitting for someone with such a female build
wasnt feeling this, maybe if you went a different route with the junior wp..
ya Outsiders crew scared to face me. guess u the brave one or something
that means orc has the most Guts on the Outside.. after the blade done cutting
ok
for blood money send rounds thru the front of ur crib til they exit out
but even if my aim off u'll take a stray,dawg.. once i let one in ur house
decent

Vs


This guy is a lame; altho I suggest a lighter with flames
How u got Bubbles coming outta ya Mouth that'd put a Comic Writer to shame
this was good
Congrats to the boy Witty. I heard he's next with the kids
If YOUR Girlfriend tells you about her Bump it means you Infected the bitch
alright solid personal
''I'm not from RB guyz! I swear, Bible on the shelf''
Maaan I shoulda known u weren't Greedy how u never kept a Title for yaself
eh maybe I'm missing something but I don't get the second line
Drive-by ya wholeee squad; ain't a thing to gun 'em
Trusttt... I'll have Arms Pointed Behind ya Back like a Ninja Runnin'
lol good
J a Baby at text; &&&the Knife will land him in trouble
Throw hands it's a tussle, you'll Catch a Nick Young.. that's DeAngelo Russell
this was kinda forced

I got this one being pretty close, same number of misses but I feel orc's good punches were better than jiltis good ones. Jiltis opener was LOTB for me but didn't weigh out enough to catch the W.

Vote Orc

[Unfukwitable]

splatter ur insides from floor to ceiling up, intenstines to tibia
so many pieces of Burd on the wall.. look like boston celtic memorabilia
makes sense u've faced Junto like 2 or 3 times & cant beat him still
cuz against Junior Misses are fitting for someone with such a female build
ya Outsiders crew scared to face me. guess u the brave one or something
that means orc has the most Guts on the Outside.. after the blade done cutting

vs

This guy is a lame; altho I suggest a lighter with flames
How u got Bubbles coming outta ya Mouth that'd put a Comic Writer to shame
Congrats to the boy Witty. I heard he's next with the kids
If YOUR Girlfriend tells you about her Bump it means you Infected the bitch
Drive-by ya wholeee squad; ain't a thing to gun 'em
Trusttt... I'll have Arms Pointed Behind ya Back like a Ninja Runnin'
J a Baby at text; &&&the Knife will land him in trouble
Throw hands it's a tussle, you'll Catch a Nick Young.. that's DeAngelo Russell


nice battle here one just came with stronger hits, good read tho. v/Orc