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Old 03-01-2016, 02:29 PM   #1
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shouts to all my peoples who stay onpoint with that ballpoint. ya'll know what I do so lets do it!

It's on, bithces!!!
I came thru to check u pussies, I'm a gynecologist that makes home vists
Orc's a cokehead even tho he's brethren
his pusher's a ticket hawker and always gets him seats in the nosebleed section
Greed's the weakest in the league and bout to be a dead artist
for you? the Brad Pitt scene in Se7en is the only way I'd role out the red carpet
I throw Shade at Frauds, your face is the product of bad sex sonny!
and Jilti & Junto are like Sharp 9 & Split 8....but more boring & less funny
seen his Storm Trooper pic, and figured out whats wrong with Witty
cause when it comes to your scripts, even Yoda would say "the force is strong...and shitty"
and Lotto's my nigga, but I gotta give my boy some truth
when it comes to elevation, that old phrase "raising the roof" was coined for you
I'm a vet from the future scoping the lineup of ill fated rookies
who sit around thinkin of concepts all day and will never Infiltrate a pussy (double meaning)
and that oldtimer Resin will get cooked dog, stop it
I got a pair of 4 finger rings that read "deaf & dumb" and both will get you hooked on phonics
shouts to the OG's who rep and still ill with the rank....
but you's a Billion Dollar baby but Boys Don't Cry, who R U, Destro or Hillary Swank?
Slecht!
you'd be interested to know that I'm not intersted in knowing you
but I did a google search and first result in itself is a quotable
Cred n Hush both have lisps, how impressive
ya'll worse than fags cuz even homo's over pronounce there S's
and Vic's liften weights now, thumbs up to the prick
but you'll need a spotter for benchpresses cuz the bar'll get stuck under your chin
King Kar needs to be HOF'd, but we'd all still hate your ass
and the first chance I'd get I'd trade you for Karpis in the racial draft
Ill Nika disowned his family and left em all to rott, broke, and scarred
to make up for it he says he'd smoke Castro.....close.....but it's no cigar
Utmost I don't know shit about you, so for you, no hate lines
and for that you should feel both proud and embarrassed at the same time
this rhyme was finger wrote while rocking a figaro
I'm so dope I'd drop a platinum album with instrumentals from 2trippleO
and ya'll know my slogan, best of luck to the rest of you
prepare now cuz the worlds ending and I got preppin to do......CHYEAHHH!!!
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Old 03-03-2016, 05:37 PM   #2
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I thought this was pretty slick, a lot of cool punches mixed in here
a lot of name dropping of some familiar faces from around the board
a lot of it made me chuckle but what caught me off guard were the Hush & 2tripple0 lines
some good shit here regardless and I thought that closer was smooth...
dope shit brah
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Old 03-04-2016, 10:03 AM   #3
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this was dope man. out of this wrorld creativity. di you have a tall grey help you with this?
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Old 03-04-2016, 11:12 AM   #4
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some good lines in here man

jilti/junto line was tight, nosebleed line was funny lol, few other slick lines too

good shit
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