Old Sh*t (Speedin' Bullet 2 Heaven Freestyle)

Darius Da Terrible · 12-08-2015, 10:15 AM

https://soundcloud.com/dariusdaterri...aven-freestyle

A 1,2 and you don't stop
A 1,2 and you don't quit
I'm on dat old shit
I'm on dat oold shit

A 1,2 and you don't stop
A 1,2 and you don't quit

That new shit cool my nigga
I'm on that old shit
I on that old shit

Im shooting vodka, Luksosawa//
Hit my stomach, till I vomit, spewing lava//
.on phone that im typing on ….now my musics hotter//
Night is long, moon light is gone, room is darker//…
….and its getting darker….darker darker…//

Merciless verses burst though the author//
S.y.n...Birthin worthless words.. Who the father?//
And where Maury at, And where the party at//, they gone have to arrest me I'm a ba'cardiac'//
Alocholic anonymous scarier than a heart attack//
Wait.them bars synonymous let me start it back//
Ominous lyricall dominance, yeh I'm all of that
So where the artist that showcase the art of raps//
The flows they show is from the holes in they garbage bags//
If spitting complex lyrics is old //…
My soul need to be sold, 27 year old
I'm artifact/

A 1,2 and you don't stop
A 1,2 and you don't quit

I'm on dat old shit
I'm on dat oold shit

A 1,2 and you don't stop
A 1,2 and you don't quit

That new shit cool my nigga
I'm on that old shit
I on that old shit

Mastermind , i craft lines like ice daggers//
And Combine mass in black diamonds to slice matter,
When I rhyme half the time mics shatter
I just to rhyme to pass the time, life matters/
Real eloquent, real intelligent but them fake lyrics wasn't really relevant/they say spit dat real shit but reals relative//
so save that real shit to yo real relative//
I on know you, nigga I probably hate you
So how I am I gon make some shit that you gon relate to//
say realistic shit, but niggas that's the fake you//
I'd rather make up some good shit that you escape through//

Quarter O · 12-08-2015, 03:02 PM

This was pretty decent fam..i liked the flow but the lyrics were slackin'..i liked the beginning of the 1st verse and the beginning of the 2nd..you just started using rhyming words thats been over-used in my honest opinion..the flow really saved this tho.. swag was on (for lack of a better word)..vocals were nice..simple hook but worked..beat was gunfire...quality was also lacking but wasnt so terrible where i couldnt look past it..decent shit tho.

Exis · 12-11-2015, 12:49 AM

Glad you posted an audio, tbh in text it doesn't fly, read it & was like ok...then heard shit, shit's nice...your delivery was nice, you remind me of someone...Moka Only? Idk lol, solid though...when you get on with a flow its slick, liked it...beat choice was nice, what you spit over it meshed well.

Enjoyable bro, I'd cop this joint.

Stay up.

Pakistani Hand Cannon · 12-14-2015, 05:09 PM

Quote:

When I rhyme half the time mics shatter
I just to rhyme to pass the time, life matters/
Real eloquent, real intelligent but them fake lyrics wasn't really relevant/they say spit dat real shit but reals relative

Quote:

I on know you, nigga I probably hate you
So how I am I gon make some shit that you gon relate to

wooord though that shits tough

was expecting some weak shit no lie, this was not that at all though

that old shit cool my nigga

Darius Da Terrible · 12-16-2015, 12:49 AM

'prociate the criticism will def keep elevatin. Thanks yall

Ghost1 · 12-16-2015, 06:41 AM

Saw ur structure an strapped in to be dissapointed lol. Was pleasantly surprised. I fucked w this shit.

Alice White · 12-19-2015, 01:34 PM

Thought this was some enjoyable stuff, it definitely got an original old school feeling to it and I kind of find your structure interesting. I really liked the "worthless words" couplet. Overall, nice one!

Geno · 12-20-2015, 12:27 PM

Barcardiac was dope

12-08-2015, 10:15 AM	#1
Darius Da Terrible Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 13 Rep Power: 0	*Old Sht (Speedin' Bullet 2 Heaven Freestyle)** https://soundcloud.com/dariusdaterri...aven-freestyle A 1,2 and you don't stop A 1,2 and you don't quit I'm on dat old shit I'm on dat oold shit A 1,2 and you don't stop A 1,2 and you don't quit That new shit cool my nigga I'm on that old shit I on that old shit Im shooting vodka, Luksosawa// Hit my stomach, till I vomit, spewing lava// .on phone that im typing on ….now my musics hotter// Night is long, moon light is gone, room is darker//… ….and its getting darker….darker darker…// Merciless verses burst though the author// S.y.n...Birthin worthless words.. Who the father?// And where Maury at, And where the party at//, they gone have to arrest me I'm a ba'cardiac'// Alocholic anonymous scarier than a heart attack// Wait.them bars synonymous let me start it back// Ominous lyricall dominance, yeh I'm all of that So where the artist that showcase the art of raps// The flows they show is from the holes in they garbage bags// If spitting complex lyrics is old //… My soul need to be sold, 27 year old I'm artifact/ A 1,2 and you don't stop A 1,2 and you don't quit I'm on dat old shit I'm on dat oold shit A 1,2 and you don't stop A 1,2 and you don't quit That new shit cool my nigga I'm on that old shit I on that old shit Mastermind , i craft lines like ice daggers// And Combine mass in black diamonds to slice matter, When I rhyme half the time mics shatter I just to rhyme to pass the time, life matters/ Real eloquent, real intelligent but them fake lyrics wasn't really relevant/they say spit dat real shit but reals relative// so save that real shit to yo real relative// I on know you, nigga I probably hate you So how I am I gon make some shit that you gon relate to// say realistic shit, but niggas that's the fake you// I'd rather make up some good shit that you escape through//

12-20-2015, 12:27 PM	#8
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Barcardiac was dope __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

12-08-2015, 03:02 PM	#2
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	This was pretty decent fam..i liked the flow but the lyrics were slackin'..i liked the beginning of the 1st verse and the beginning of the 2nd..you just started using rhyming words thats been over-used in my honest opinion..the flow really saved this tho.. swag was on (for lack of a better word)..vocals were nice..simple hook but worked..beat was gunfire...quality was also lacking but wasnt so terrible where i couldnt look past it..decent shit tho.

12-11-2015, 12:49 AM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Glad you posted an audio, tbh in text it doesn't fly, read it & was like ok...then heard shit, shit's nice...your delivery was nice, you remind me of someone...Moka Only? Idk lol, solid though...when you get on with a flow its slick, liked it...beat choice was nice, what you spit over it meshed well. Enjoyable bro, I'd cop this joint. Stay up.

12-16-2015, 12:49 AM	#5
Darius Da Terrible Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 13 Rep Power: 0	'prociate the criticism will def keep elevatin. Thanks yall

12-19-2015, 01:34 PM	#7
Alice White Member Join Date: Dec 2015 Posts: 72 Rep Power: 0	Thought this was some enjoyable stuff, it definitely got an original old school feeling to it and I kind of find your structure interesting. I really liked the "worthless words" couplet. Overall, nice one!