Get Structured

Exis · 10-23-2015, 11:57 PM

Ayo,

There's too many cracks
it's excessive
always havin' to check every paragraph to correct ones grammar and spellin'
I was dope long before smack was invented,
Certain dropped Serpent and Black became dead man
you've been wack ever since every cat can remember
you'll get out rapped in a second by the most inactive of members
I've only come back just to mentor who has assonance ventured
asses get embedded with footprints
whenever a master class is in session
you cannot grasp at my status whilst it's on such a rapid ascension
let alone graph the percentage based off of how the masses accept it
your massively desperate,
over there is an exit for casualties statin' you should never of entered
until forever has ended
you will be irrelevant brethren
while a legend left as my legacy will be how Ex is remembered.

JESODIST · 10-24-2015, 03:13 AM

Hey billy Bee Exis :) do you want a ride on my Green Lexus?
We can Terrorize the industry like Team Nexus,
Have sex with blondes all over the Streets of Texas,
then take them to Brutalize Beef along with some Green Letuce,
I'd prefer a stripper with a Weird Fetish,
She can Play it Endless while Stocking lines like in that Game Tetris,
Your soul is mine the Minute you Inspect This because spitting in the air is Plain Wreckless,
The Temper of the he 6 Winged Member,
Radiates heat beyond supernovas Whenever roasting the Shit outta Lepers,
We can battle From now till the Brink of Forever
You will not meet someone that can Script it This so Clever that You think I'm Professor,
Swift Gritty Letters are like 6 Spinning Blenders leaving Everything inside the Ribs Really Severed,
Week Templar Alert the Wicked spirits that it is now time for them to Meet the Possessor,
That has your Skull clamped with the Biggest Compressors,
Awaiting for it to Pop can you withstand the Pressure?
Nevermind I'm a Flying Avenger that wants to take you on a Frightening Adventure,
My Titanic Mentors taught me how to fight off Dementors with Fiery Scepters,
Chopp them in Sections, do it for Entirely Pleasure,
I psionically Trail your Receptors, Calculate how your Brain Measures up to Pain and its Vectors,
Ultimate Transgressor slash moderate Suppressor
Who can bring you back to the sane state with the Insanest of Lectures,
See me on the streets greated by the Greatest of Emperors,
I write my own rhymes defeating the Fakest of Editors,
A Repulsive Spectre with Corrosive Texture Move Swiftly on the scene Undetected by the Motion Sensors,
Lies that are Cheap are unable to get the Titan Defeat,
A Shepherd Disguised as a Sheep, Monitor the Site while you Sleep
Vengence by Hand is what i plan not to Teach,
I write lyrics with stars and the Skies are my Sheet...

Exis · 10-24-2015, 06:14 AM

You can find the time to run up in my thread all pussy like yet no show in the league? Yeah you gangsta.

JESODIST · 10-24-2015, 06:26 AM

LOL you mad and but hurt caz i was just freestyling earlier.... and about the league i wrote my verse and sent it to @Adonis that same night but he said it was a double no show and didn't want to reopen the thread so get your facts straight "Gangsta"

Exis · 10-24-2015, 06:39 AM

Freestyle in the cypher section niggarette.

dead man · 10-24-2015, 09:57 AM

Jesodist that was dope bro

2tripple0 · 10-25-2015, 07:41 AM

Couldn't get into it....too many stolen items Missing from the archive but this has been done to death still i enjoyed the rhyme and would like to peep more shit you....we battled in a league I thought you were a bit repetitive...something we knew already....good job keep up the good work

e11even · 10-27-2015, 04:21 AM

Hmm. Great battle guys. This jeso diss just got shat on by jesodist. Nice form and decent imagery with one or three repeated words. Still dope though. Exis seems pretty butt hurt though. I guess I would be too. You guys should set up an actual battle. I would watch.

Exis · 10-27-2015, 05:25 PM

Lmfao...wasn't dissin' anyone dickhead, JESODIST added on...good for him.

& if your talkin' to me 2tripplehoe then your fuckin' deluded aswell...I've never battled your wack ass.

Pharaohs Army · 10-27-2015, 08:19 PM

writers

2tripple0 · 10-28-2015, 04:07 PM

lol I was talking to jesodhist.........sorry didn't see your verse above that......that's my fault.......sorry bro.....I made a mistake there hope u can forgive me.....

10-23-2015, 11:57 PM	#1
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Get Structured Ayo, There's too many cracks it's excessive always havin' to check every paragraph to correct ones grammar and spellin' I was dope long before smack was invented, Certain dropped Serpent and Black became dead man you've been wack ever since every cat can remember you'll get out rapped in a second by the most inactive of members I've only come back just to mentor who has assonance ventured asses get embedded with footprints whenever a master class is in session you cannot grasp at my status whilst it's on such a rapid ascension let alone graph the percentage based off of how the masses accept it your massively desperate, over there is an exit for casualties statin' you should never of entered until forever has ended you will be irrelevant brethren while a legend left as my legacy will be how Ex is remembered.

10-24-2015, 09:57 AM	#6
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	Jesodist that was dope bro __________________ Zack Wicks for president

10-25-2015, 07:41 AM	#7
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Couldn't get into it....too many stolen items Missing from the archive but this has been done to death still i enjoyed the rhyme and would like to peep more shit you....we battled in a league I thought you were a bit repetitive...something we knew already....good job keep up the good work __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

10-27-2015, 04:21 AM	#8
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Hmm. Great battle guys. This jeso diss just got shat on by jesodist. Nice form and decent imagery with one or three repeated words. Still dope though. Exis seems pretty butt hurt though. I guess I would be too. You guys should set up an actual battle. I would watch. __________________ Ahem.

10-27-2015, 08:19 PM	#10
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	writers Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 10-23-2016 at 08:49 PM.

10-24-2015, 03:13 AM	#2
JESODIST Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 309 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 976839	Hey billy Bee Exis :) do you want a ride on my Green Lexus? We can Terrorize the industry like Team Nexus, Have sex with blondes all over the Streets of Texas, then take them to Brutalize Beef along with some Green Letuce, I'd prefer a stripper with a Weird Fetish, She can Play it Endless while Stocking lines like in that Game Tetris, Your soul is mine the Minute you Inspect This because spitting in the air is Plain Wreckless, The Temper of the he 6 Winged Member, Radiates heat beyond supernovas Whenever roasting the Shit outta Lepers, We can battle From now till the Brink of Forever You will not meet someone that can Script it This so Clever that You think I'm Professor, Swift Gritty Letters are like 6 Spinning Blenders leaving Everything inside the Ribs Really Severed, Week Templar Alert the Wicked spirits that it is now time for them to Meet the Possessor, That has your Skull clamped with the Biggest Compressors, Awaiting for it to Pop can you withstand the Pressure? Nevermind I'm a Flying Avenger that wants to take you on a Frightening Adventure, My Titanic Mentors taught me how to fight off Dementors with Fiery Scepters, Chopp them in Sections, do it for Entirely Pleasure, I psionically Trail your Receptors, Calculate how your Brain Measures up to Pain and its Vectors, Ultimate Transgressor slash moderate Suppressor Who can bring you back to the sane state with the Insanest of Lectures, See me on the streets greated by the Greatest of Emperors, I write my own rhymes defeating the Fakest of Editors, A Repulsive Spectre with Corrosive Texture Move Swiftly on the scene Undetected by the Motion Sensors, Lies that are Cheap are unable to get the Titan Defeat, A Shepherd Disguised as a Sheep, Monitor the Site while you Sleep Vengence by Hand is what i plan not to Teach, I write lyrics with stars and the Skies are my Sheet...

10-24-2015, 06:14 AM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	You can find the time to run up in my thread all pussy like yet no show in the league? Yeah you gangsta.

10-24-2015, 06:26 AM	#4
JESODIST Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 309 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 976839	LOL you mad and but hurt caz i was just freestyling earlier.... and about the league i wrote my verse and sent it to @Adonis that same night but he said it was a double no show and didn't want to reopen the thread so get your facts straight "Gangsta"

10-24-2015, 06:39 AM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Freestyle in the cypher section niggarette.

10-27-2015, 05:25 PM	#9
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Lmfao...wasn't dissin' anyone dickhead, JESODIST added on...good for him. & if your talkin' to me 2tripplehoe then your fuckin' deluded aswell...I've never battled your wack ass.

10-28-2015, 04:07 PM	#11
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	lol I was talking to jesodhist.........sorry didn't see your verse above that......that's my fault.......sorry bro.....I made a mistake there hope u can forgive me..... __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/