Odd Ways 1-0 Vs Murda Sho 3-3 - SHO WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

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• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Odd Ways @murda sho

[Bash]

My starting five'll dot his eyes or carve his ass for the cash
U'll see his arms flail from the cut like he expected a bounce pass
When it comes to Kombat, u'll catch combos if I'm low key pissed
Cuz one punch'll have ya skull go flying on some quan chi shit
Hes a loser. Fact is his love life is lonely n hopeless
I bet he sings the State Farm jingle everyday w/ red wine n roses
This is war on wack texcees, and he's apart so go figure
I'll have tanks firing out his chest that could rival megatron pictures
Bro that's some true shit. U'll get spotted out if the shoe fits
Ya demise won't be just a set up, it'll come w/ official architect blue prints
Get smacked hard af, I'm the one u shouldn't try at all geek
The steam comin off ya face could heat vegetables in a pot for a couple of weeks
Ya Internet dating fuck. Stop inboxing on some stalker shit
Cuz no matter what bayonet, they'll find one just to stab you w/
I'm a Titan to the board. Nigga everything about you says rookie
Bro we all know u ain't a beast, boy ur only known for being pussy

[Useless]

Odd ways
-decent jab, nothing crazy but a good flip
-I've seen this a few times before
-thought this was nice.
-another decent jab...generic tho
-another bland jab n this one wasn't that great
-nahh this was whack man
-nice wp. I haven't seen if before either unless someone has used it on beyond, but I haven't seen it so its that much doper for being original. Thought thebpunch could've been harsher tho. Still fire.
-beast boy/pussy. Nahhh that's wack man.

Sho
-Thought this was nice af
-ehhh this is aite but I've seen better flips. Its kind of a last week punch too lol.
-this was nice af too lol
-damn
-ehhh wasn't really feeln this. N its bizzy bone. Lmao @ busy bone that's a dog treat nigga
-I'm missing something on this one
-wasn't really feeln this either. I like the concept, don't like the wording
-this made me lol but I still don't like the wording.

This was aite battle but I got murda show taking it pretty handily. Odd just had too many misses n too many generic jabs. U battling murda sho! Dude been here for ever find some ammo.

Vote murda sho

[Mr. J]

My starting five'll dot his eyes or carve his ass for the cash
U'll see his arms flail from the cut like he expected a bounce pass
When it comes to Kombat, u'll catch combos if I'm low key pissed
Cuz one punch'll have ya skull go flying on some quan chi shit

Ya Internet dating fuck. Stop inboxing on some stalker shit
Cuz no matter what bayonet, they'll find one just to stab you w/
^^^^^
those were the stand outs to me, I felt like your verse was cool
after getting to the Megatron line I got thrown off...you going to ram a tank through his chest?
idk but I felt like you came pretty slick with these lines, that closer didn't feel fitting to me
maybe if you had that quan chi at the end that would have been better


Ur dame'd get scooped but I won't hit it again till she bust them keagles out
I've grown tired of her same sex, while u're just happy it's fuckin legal now
Someone get them a doctor... cause Bullet Farm's a fuckin clique of imposters
If the mag woulda ran out of bitches Sharp coulda just listed their roster

Come see some high tiers & get ripped up, or leave this guy seared
As something hot chips at u that'd give Strikta burrito ideas
^^^^
You had some dope concepts weaved into your verse...
my only issue was that Odd Future line, maybe I didn't get it because I haven't followed them lately
but that Bizzy Bone line was pretty lulz worthy, nice work regardless

V/Murda, I feel like he had a few more quotables compared to Odd Ways...
oh...now I get the Odd future line, durr, anyway this was a close battle in my eyes
buuuut now I feel Murda edged it out for me, Odd came with some pretty cool lines
the roses & megatron line just killed it for me though, either way nice battle

[Junto]

My starting five'll dot his eyes or carve his ass for the cash
U'll see his arms flail from the cut like he expected a bounce pass
cool
When it comes to Kombat, u'll catch combos if I'm low key pissed
Cuz one punch'll have ya skull go flying on some quan chi shit
tough
Get smacked hard af, I'm the one u shouldn't try at all geek
The steam comin off ya face could heat vegetables in a pot for a couple of weeks
haha ok

vs.

So since I signed out my consequence is having me scrape this fuckin dweeb?
Well no matter who u are N.R. ima make u take a vacation from this league
I like that
Someone get them a doctor... cause Bullet Farm's a fuckin clique of imposters
If the mag woulda ran out of bitches Sharp coulda just listed their roster
not bad
Don't care who u battle with those shitty old scripts...
Cause we all know those punches "gonna miss everybody" more than Busy Bone did
dope
Im either gon flip or blow ur mind from this world...
Just know death is in Odd future so much it could collab with Tyler & Earl
haha this was heat

Good shit here... Odd definitely came wit a few. Quan chi was the best.
Some misses though like megatron & the closer I wasn't feelin those.
Other than that some creative concepts but nothin that hit as hard.
Sho had a nice verse. I thought odd future was hard... lotb.
R&r and miss everybody were pretty tough too.
Same sex was kinda played but a cool twist.
A lotta solid shit almost all above avg... cool stuff from Odd too but Sho got it

V/ Murda sho

[Unfukwitable]

When it comes to Kombat, u'll catch combos if I'm low key pissed
Cuz one punch'll have ya skull go flying on some quan chi shit
Bro that's some true shit. U'll get spotted out if the shoe fits
Ya demise won't be just a set up, it'll come w/ official architect blue prints
Ya Internet dating fuck. Stop inboxing on some stalker shit
Cuz no matter what bayonet, they'll find one just to stab you w/

I liked the opener concept felt it couldve been worded way doper tho, overall I liked ya verse I think u couldve scrapped the whole beast boy idea or tied in something else to make it stand out. but the blueprints line was niceee and the wording was crisp.

vs.

So since I signed out my consequence is having me scrape this fuckin dweeb?
Well no matter who u are N.R. ima make u take a vacation from this league
Don't care who u battle with those shitty old scripts...
Cause we all know those punches "gonna miss everybody" more than Busy Bone did
Im either gon flip or blow ur mind from this world...
Just know death is in Odd future so much it could collab with Tyler & Earl


felt like the one way & same sex bar was missing impact and couldve been better, but that Busy bone bar was fireeeeee! no doubt very creative and unseen and I fucked with the RnR bar too.


....

Felt one just had the stronger quoteables... v/Sho'nem

[Bust]

Odd

I liked ur opener
Quran chi was cool
State Farm jingle was funny
Didn't like megatron
Blue prints was nice
Veggies in a pot was oooook
Bayonet was a cool Wp
Wasn't feelin the closer much

Sho

Opener was cool np
Same sex ooooooook
Listed the roster was ok
Oddeysee been done on him a couple times on rb I think still thought the bar was cool
That busy bone shit was nasty tho, that style slick
Odd future damn dope bro
I thought got one, ways was cool actually
I don't fully get the closer, I get the hot chips burrito shit but not strikta


Well damn! This was a entertaining battle.. Felt like both yall were very consistent, couple misses/light hits but all in all fa this many barz it was good so props to both.. I just felt show had a couple barz that pretty much sealed this the busy none n odd future were harsh n enuff to edge out a good bout.. Pleasure to read tho

Vote sho

[murda sho]

Originally Posted by Odd Ways

...I went by N.R. That's what I went by on RB years ago.

So since I signed out my consequence is having me scrape this fuckin dweeb?
Well no matter who u are N.R. ima make u take a vacation from this league
Ur dame'd get scooped but I won't hit it again till she bust them keagles out
I've grown tired of her same sex, while u're just happy it's fuckin legal now
Someone get them a doctor... cause Bullet Farm's a fuckin clique of imposters
If the mag woulda ran out of bitches Sharp coulda just listed their roster
My set is the top, i'll fill up Knight & Knucklehead with some shots
Odyssey his niggas get laid out whether they legends or not!
Don't care who u battle with those shitty old scripts...
Cause we all know those punches "gonna miss everybody" more than Busy Bone did
Im either gon flip or blow ur mind from this world...
Just know death is in Odd future so much it could collab with Tyler & Earl
But if he won't die peep, i'll up tre's then start to load my piece
Let the gun bang & hit u with one Ways more than most side streets
Come see some high tiers & get ripped up, or leave this guy seared
As something hot chips at u that'd give Strikta burrito ideas

Zip Him Up!!!

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Odd Ways

My starting five'll dot his eyes or carve his ass for the cash
U'll see his arms flail from the cut like he expected a bounce pass
aight cool. light but cool
When it comes to Kombat, u'll catch combos if I'm low key pissed
Cuz one punch'll have ya skull go flying on some quan chi shit
this shit fire, u did that
Hes a loser. Fact is his love life is lonely n hopeless
I bet he sings the State Farm jingle everyday w/ red wine n roses
nah man, this dont have a sting or edge..
This is war on wack texcees, and he's apart so go figure
I'll have tanks firing out his chest that could rival megatron pictures
cannon to his chest? iunno that would of made it sicker to me. I liked the concept and wanted to love the line but it didint get over the hump man
Bro that's some true shit. U'll get spotted out if the shoe fits
Ya demise won't be just a set up, it'll come w/ official architect blue prints
ok this is a dope ass take on a concept i seen b4, never seen it done like this man props
Get smacked hard af, I'm the one u shouldn't try at all geek
The steam comin off ya face could heat vegetables in a pot for a couple of weeks
lol nah man. i get it but its just really bland
Ya Internet dating fuck. Stop inboxing on some stalker shit
Cuz no matter what bayonet, they'll find one just to stab you w/
wp was dope, never been done. this is nice man, the flip was eh, it didnt hit hard as it should but points for creativity
I'm a Titan to the board. Nigga everything about you says rookie
Bro we all know u ain't a beast, boy ur only known for being pussy
team titans, beast boy, i get it, its light tho man, try to end ya verse with ya best line if possible

Originally Posted by murda sho

So since I signed out my consequence is having me scrape this fuckin dweeb?
Well no matter who u are N.R. ima make u take a vacation from this league
fire
Ur dame'd get scooped but I won't hit it again till she bust them keagles out
I've grown tired of her same sex, while u're just happy it's fuckin legal now
eh this weak brodie
Someone get them a doctor... cause Bullet Farm's a fuckin clique of imposters
If the mag woulda ran out of bitches Sharp coulda just listed their roster
lol light but funny
My set is the top, i'll fill up Knight & Knucklehead with some shots
Odyssey his niggas get laid out whether they legends or not!
kool the wp dont work both ways but it made sense and hit.. someone said wp is dead. shit im seeing alot of wp this weak so thats cool
Don't care who u battle with those shitty old scripts...
Cause we all know those punches "gonna miss everybody" more than Busy Bone did
lmao top 10 punch
Im either gon flip or blow ur mind from this world...
Just know death is in Odd future so much it could collab with Tyler & Earl
tight
But if he won't die peep, i'll up tre's then start to load my piece
Let the gun bang & hit u with one Ways more than most side streets
nah
Come see some high tiers & get ripped up, or leave this guy seared
As something hot chips at u that'd give Strikta burrito ideas
light
Zip Him Up!!!

Odd got unlimited potential and had some fire shit, especially the mortal kombat punch
but sho outpunched him

good battle

v murda

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Odd Ways

My starting five'll dot his eyes or carve his ass for the cash
U'll see his arms flail from the cut like he expected a bounce pass
nice concept. think you could have set this up more effectively but still cool
When it comes to Kombat, u'll catch combos if I'm low key pissed
Cuz one punch'll have ya skull go flying on some quan chi shit
a little simple but not bad
Hes a loser. Fact is his love life is lonely n hopeless
I bet he sings the State Farm jingle everyday w/ red wine n roses
meh. i see what you're going for but its not quite there
This is war on wack texcees, and he's apart so go figure
I'll have tanks firing out his chest that could rival megatron pictures
nah. didn't word this punch well
Bro that's some true shit. U'll get spotted out if the shoe fits
Ya demise won't be just a set up, it'll come w/ official architect blue prints
not feeling this
Get smacked hard af, I'm the one u shouldn't try at all geek
The steam comin off ya face could heat vegetables in a pot for a couple of weeks
light. but okish
Ya Internet dating fuck. Stop inboxing on some stalker shit
Cuz no matter what bayonet, they'll find one just to stab you w/
nice wp. could have done more with it but still cool
I'm a Titan to the board. Nigga everything about you says rookie
Bro we all know u ain't a beast, boy ur only known for being pussy
nah. didn't set this up well enough to hit.

Originally Posted by murda sho

So since I signed out my consequence is having me scrape this fuckin dweeb?
Well no matter who u are N.R. ima make u take a vacation from this league
i see the RnR wp but feels forced to me.
Ur dame'd get scooped but I won't hit it again till she bust them keagles out
I've grown tired of her same sex, while u're just happy it's fuckin legal now
aight. not too hard hitting but ok.
Someone get them a doctor... cause Bullet Farm's a fuckin clique of imposters
If the mag woulda ran out of bitches Sharp coulda just listed their roster
haha this was funny. but fuck you.
My set is the top, i'll fill up Knight & Knucklehead with some shots
Odyssey his niggas get laid out whether they legends or not!
this bar was a Illy add. j/k this was cool
Don't care who u battle with those shitty old scripts...
Cause we all know those punches "gonna miss everybody" more than Busy Bone did
haha this was nice to me
Im either gon flip or blow ur mind from this world...
Just know death is in Odd future so much it could collab with Tyler & Earl
nice. picking up steam. like this.
But if he won't die peep, i'll up tre's then start to load my piece
Let the gun bang & hit u with one Ways more than most side streets
decent concept, but you didn't get the wording right for this bar
Come see some high tiers & get ripped up, or leave this guy seared
As something hot chips at u that'd give Strikta burrito ideas
ill pass on this one.

This was a nice battle props to both. Odd ways had some nice concepts, but might still be shaking rust of as there were a few bars with wording/setup issues. Im gonna be checking for you tho, because with your concepts you can be dangerous if you work on a few things. I liked bounce pass and bayonet. You had a few other bars that were close but needed to little more editting TLC.

Murda Sho is a vet so not much to say there. I liked mag run out of bitches, gonna miss everybody, and Odd future collab. There were a couple bars I feel like you could have left out but they weren't bad enough misses to change the outcome. Feel like Sho did just enough to win this one.

Vote: Murda Sho