Class Act

Geno · 03-25-2015, 02:30 PM

nothing comes easy, put in this world to fight
i know my reps on the line, doin' curls with life
i aint never seen a king, without kingdom scars
your nobody, until somebody thinks you are
s'why i always plan shit, executed the plot
buried, so nobody knows, only you and ur god
you cant trust anybody, i dont play with teams
keep your secrets, take'm to the grave, my G
they say loose lips sink ships, and thats a fact
my boats been afloat 33 yrs, im a classic act
the shit i know could bury folks, deep in hell
important information, i aint felt the need to tell
last of a dying breed, we all know where we at
populations getting thin, its aerobics for rats
world took a twist for the worst here lately
the realness is dying, with every birth of a baby

Mutilate · 03-25-2015, 08:38 PM

The first line was clever I liked that, this was short but didn't need to be long, it worked perfect. Nice little written here Genocide. Rhymes were basic but that's okay

dead man · 03-25-2015, 11:22 PM

the return to the written word. this was vintage.

nothing terribly heavy in terms of content - but this was a personal commentary from your own perspective and nothing less. you got a bit broader at times, discussing the population at large towards the end but the majority of this is like your ode to the struggle you face. but not as a victim. as one who overcomes, biting the bullet and striking back with twice the force. its more of an aural impression than one of singular quotation.

good to see this.

thank you man.

03-25-2015, 02:30 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Class Act nothing comes easy, put in this world to fight i know my reps on the line, doin' curls with life i aint never seen a king, without kingdom scars your nobody, until somebody thinks you are s'why i always plan shit, executed the plot buried, so nobody knows, only you and ur god you cant trust anybody, i dont play with teams keep your secrets, take'm to the grave, my G they say loose lips sink ships, and thats a fact my boats been afloat 33 yrs, im a classic act the shit i know could bury folks, deep in hell important information, i aint felt the need to tell last of a dying breed, we all know where we at populations getting thin, its aerobics for rats world took a twist for the worst here lately the realness is dying, with every birth of a baby __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

03-25-2015, 11:22 PM	#3
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	the return to the written word. this was vintage. nothing terribly heavy in terms of content - but this was a personal commentary from your own perspective and nothing less. you got a bit broader at times, discussing the population at large towards the end but the majority of this is like your ode to the struggle you face. but not as a victim. as one who overcomes, biting the bullet and striking back with twice the force. its more of an aural impression than one of singular quotation. good to see this. thank you man. __________________ Zack Wicks for president

03-25-2015, 08:38 PM	#2
Mutilate Detained Join Date: Mar 2015 Posts: 234 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 0	The first line was clever I liked that, this was short but didn't need to be long, it worked perfect. Nice little written here Genocide. Rhymes were basic but that's okay