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Old 12-19-2014, 02:48 PM   #1
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Default The Great Indoors Of Endor Shoot For The Stars Like Centaurs

To understand is to learn, that's your basis to burn encased in a urn
the most basic of words, the faces that share their traces of earth
scattered in the oasis it hurts..but I'm through with my hiatus from work
My sickness is as contagious as dirt, bad allergies & the persuasion of curse
enraged by an Asian chasing the curve. your slow and just making it worse
so whatever your deliberation is worth, give it to a Jamaican to jerk
Your vitals are perfect for containing a herb, a poison IV breaking your nerve...
that will have you retracing your verbs, watch what you say, taking a turn
180's that return like boomerangs, only to make you kick back.. the shooters aim
360's to where your mind used to range, leaving you stress free like Buddahs brain
540's, a couple shots of fireball at King Koopas face, your killing yourself...a Loopers fate
720's, and a 10 are the users rate, your 15 minutes came early like a roosters day
Its a shame what these consumers paid, the hit they took that would boost the pain
to think we are the 'same' confused the traits, a mockery thats consumed by hate
Still....the flattery is blasphemy, my anatomy controls the workers, the faculty...
Fuels the canopy hanging over these tragedies I laugh at what's been happening
Light the match and magically disappear, the perfect place to hide is in sanity.....
Disturbed by family & friends, waiting for the finale to end something theyd handle me in
A red drape covering the stage....comedy is where it actually begins
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Old 12-24-2014, 04:39 PM   #2
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Old 12-26-2014, 12:01 PM   #3
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nice. loopers fate line was sick.
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