29 today. Happy Halloween, fucknuts!

sral · 10-31-2014, 08:36 AM

quick key.

To you all I’m a veteran, to Kelly I’m Baz
With maturity beckoning and a wedding to plan.
Never looked back since greeting her eyes
Its like destiny had a meeting of mynds.
As the years have gone by ive been mellowing out
My careers on the rise & im settled no doubt
Content with the house and place that we live
Windmill Crescents astounding & great for our kids.
Its changed me a bit, mostly I’m finding
In the way that I think and motives behind it.
Im no longer hiding behind a façade
Or gloating at hijinks from nights at the bar.
The fights I would start, scraps I got beat,
I still find it bizarre I haven’t lost teeth!
No man can stop me of their own accord
With my hands at godspeed - I’ll go through walls.
Even though I’m small, got a lions heart in my chest
This broken jaw just proves I’m as hard as it gets.
The barmiest yet, snorted lines of enormous size
4 and a half gram within seconds, & more then besides
Walked Billy Wright with a bloodied stuffy nose
and ordered the guys a double rum and coke.
now I’m cuddled up at home with jack squat to do
doing nothing, just the soaps on constant view
horror movie collection that grows by the day
aint gotta prove shit, been stood over the grates.
Let go of the brakes, freewheeling through life
still prone to mistakes, but this here’s the realest I’ll write.
Cuz I’m holding the aces, & I’ll only deal when its right…

29.

Verbal · 10-31-2014, 10:31 AM

Happy birthday. Glad to see that your life is coming together like this. It would make sense that I should start doing the same. Dating is a more fun alternative.

CopyPat · 11-03-2014, 06:49 PM

hahah we old out here. nice verse bruv. i know u wrote this hella quick which makes it even more impressive. smoother than always. on some grown man shit haha. liked the realness factor, pretty funny and honest. good stuff as always old pal. happy belated homie!

Wise Wiggles · 11-03-2014, 11:19 PM

Good stuff my nikka

MMLP · 11-04-2014, 11:40 AM

true story... keystyled on the bus NO DOUBT, very enjoyable read, upbeat and dope

Kudos!

Exis · 11-04-2014, 11:46 AM

Nice...humor was a stand out, had some nice shit in here...sorry can't quote anythin' atm but the middle section was tight imo..the top and bottom be solid.

Stay upwards .

Mr. J · 11-07-2014, 04:19 PM

The flow to the piece is really interesting..
that short catch of breath you need to take
the way the piece unfolds into a opportunistic setting
how you linked the words and ideas together was nice
happy belated

10-31-2014, 08:36 AM	#1
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,608 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	29 today. Happy Halloween, fucknuts! quick key. To you all I’m a veteran, to Kelly I’m Baz With maturity beckoning and a wedding to plan. Never looked back since greeting her eyes Its like destiny had a meeting of mynds. As the years have gone by ive been mellowing out My careers on the rise & im settled no doubt Content with the house and place that we live Windmill Crescents astounding & great for our kids. Its changed me a bit, mostly I’m finding In the way that I think and motives behind it. Im no longer hiding behind a façade Or gloating at hijinks from nights at the bar. The fights I would start, scraps I got beat, I still find it bizarre I haven’t lost teeth! No man can stop me of their own accord With my hands at godspeed - I’ll go through walls. Even though I’m small, got a lions heart in my chest This broken jaw just proves I’m as hard as it gets. The barmiest yet, snorted lines of enormous size 4 and a half gram within seconds, & more then besides Walked Billy Wright with a bloodied stuffy nose and ordered the guys a double rum and coke. now I’m cuddled up at home with jack squat to do doing nothing, just the soaps on constant view horror movie collection that grows by the day aint gotta prove shit, been stood over the grates. Let go of the brakes, freewheeling through life still prone to mistakes, but this here’s the realest I’ll write. Cuz I’m holding the aces, & I’ll only deal when its right… 29. __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season) Last edited by sral; 10-31-2014 at 10:33 AM.

11-03-2014, 06:49 PM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahah we old out here. nice verse bruv. i know u wrote this hella quick which makes it even more impressive. smoother than always. on some grown man shit haha. liked the realness factor, pretty funny and honest. good stuff as always old pal. happy belated homie! __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

11-03-2014, 11:19 PM	#4
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Good stuff my nikka __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

11-07-2014, 04:19 PM	#7
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	The flow to the piece is really interesting.. that short catch of breath you need to take the way the piece unfolds into a opportunistic setting how you linked the words and ideas together was nice happy belated __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-31-2014, 10:31 AM	#2
Verbal Member Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 32 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	Happy birthday. Glad to see that your life is coming together like this. It would make sense that I should start doing the same. Dating is a more fun alternative.

11-04-2014, 11:40 AM	#5
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	true story... keystyled on the bus NO DOUBT, very enjoyable read, upbeat and dope Kudos!

11-04-2014, 11:46 AM	#6
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Nice...humor was a stand out, had some nice shit in here...sorry can't quote anythin' atm but the middle section was tight imo..the top and bottom be solid. Stay upwards .