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04-24-2023, 02:01 AM | #1 |
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Week 2: Lyfzaa Gamble (0-0) vs. Barcotic (0-0) - BARCOTIC WINS
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You know the drill. Due Dates: Verses this week are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ @Lyfzaa Gamble @Barcotic |
04-24-2023, 11:27 PM | #2 | |
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Let's go like 12? Idk lmk
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04-25-2023, 10:49 AM | #3 |
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04-27-2023, 02:08 PM | #4 |
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He thinks hes throwin hands wit cats who aren't adequate Til barc catch his lip. Break out the jaws of Lyf without a car accident Start smashin lids, i kno hes fearing that im a threat This is video court; hes losin his hearing when i connect Peering outside with tecs, its byebye if the heat shoot Yall are welcome to backgammon youll get sidelined with a piece too Some of you morons'd give your house to see me lose But if he mounts anything offensive, its bc his spouse is being rude Hes antsy as shit at the thought of me landing a fist You dont have to visit west africa to see gambia bitch AR mags handy n thick, im strapped to the brink tho Im about to bring a drum to his flat like a wing toast Clap for me..as i blast 40 at this goof rapper Huge actor, exit wound'll split his backstory into 2 chapters Extension if needed
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04-27-2023, 02:51 PM | #5 | |
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Nice might need and ext. I'll try to post by tonight.
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04-27-2023, 09:56 PM | #6 |
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May make it 16 if you decide to take the ext.
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04-29-2023, 03:38 AM | #7 | |
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Fuck it...
Been awhile, might be a little fatigued, none the less I'm the best that's simple to see. Either listen to me, or you'll be dead, put 3 to ya head like Me7o after hitting a three. My rap is rapid release, stab and decease. Hang u while I grab on the leash.. Then throw you over the balcony and slowly let it go n watch while you sadly delete! My words hit like guns if you buck.. Fit to rupture you guts but... you 'barely above ground in life' its like you riding under a truck... So as an example I 'make BARC into money' just by simply cutting him up! I see over time it's often a thing for guys long in the ring to get rewarded and shit... But actual shit, any contest you 'Champed' HAD TO BE FIXED, with more losses than wins! Barcotic a HOFer I see so yeah he can get his props, But if you really think you high key than it must come with a ten foot lock. With bitches I get mad digits, it's simple with a BAD gimmick. I give Barc aLot of credit for even taking this spot, so I could whoop his ass in it! Die hard Knick fan, and rn we in the Playoffs what a picture! So yea It's sad to see as Barclays in agony like after the Nets lost to the Sixers!!
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04-29-2023, 07:38 AM | #8 |
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Video court
Mount offensive Gambia I’ve seen and written a few Melo lines like urs. It’s ok Barclays had the biggest potential. Some of these ideas just have to be cleaned up a bit Not bad for a return from hiatus V. Barc |
04-29-2023, 07:52 AM | #9 |
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well despite our limited interactions i would hope barc knows i can separate discussion/shit-talk keyz VS. actual Open Battles w/ writtens
so yeah that's how i've been rolling as we examine quick ryno vote, as it's very late/early, and zelph does not care to see me pick apart the difference between audio & text on a contraction (or lack there-of) of it is vs. it's. yeah these guys to me seem kinda similar! Not tottally....but i just mean the smooth wording crisp punches that USUALLY hit nice old-time goat/hof potential....i think barc certainly dropped his quality here of just...efficient sharpness whereas Gamble, while still apprently warming up, certainly ain't talkin' out tha side 'his mouth with the GoatSchtick... i mean i can see clearly he's got the background and barz IN A CLOSE ONE THAT I EDGE TO BARC I just feel like his smoothness/efficiency lasted like 90-95% of the whole verse top to bottom whereas gamble had a lotta heat (AND I LOVE HIS SLLIIIIGTHLY PLAYFUL TWIST ON A FEW PUNCHES WHERE HE'S BORED/ LAXIDASICALLY jabbing) lol.....and based on this 1 verse sample size I'd say he's a decent audio head, perhaps the ability to prolly spit either Fast Or Laggy...in OR out of pocket, etc, as ryn0/hal0 likely are, along with whatever other classics I'm gushing about this week (blue/dy, etc) ~ buttt he just was like 80-90% haymaker efficiency as opposed to Barc's graded string-of-hits in the pure 90s realm so yea can't wait to see RustKnock #2 next week gamble barc you're still a fucking lame generic pussy no w/ a few lame stretches (tho very minimal here)...enjoy never diversifying vs. cats like me n AJ Nice W (again, "smooth" bitch) Thx both for drops & gl next wk esp if i draw one of u on a zelph-set matchup after he AGAIN cut the big votes down and got more production on my judging ~ |
04-29-2023, 08:19 AM | #10 |
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Jaws of Lyfe cool np
Hearing / court wp is an old idea executed well Backgammon good wp and I like how you did it Offensive lol Gambia good smooth wp not overdone. Like it Drum to his flat is fire Closer ehh I just don't think it's works , but ok Vs Melo is nice Balcony nah, needs more Tree bark flip is okay but it's been done a lot over the years Loses than wins okay, your wording has been good but seems off in this bar... High key is ight conceptually Taking this spot alright Barclays was a cool np Solid battle... barc was on this week, good consistent verse Gamble your wording was good and a couple solid bars... I just think conceptually some were a miss and you were a bit plagued by rust / not knowing what's fresh Vote Mikey props to both
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04-29-2023, 03:29 PM | #11 |
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He thinks hes throwin hands wit cats who aren't adequate
Til barc catch his lip. Break out the jaws of Lyf without a car accident fire Start smashin lids, i kno hes fearing that im a threat This is video court; hes losin his hearing when i connect decent Peering outside with tecs, its byebye if the heat shoot Yall are welcome to backgammon youll get sidelined with a piece too fire lol Some of you morons'd give your house to see me lose But if he mounts anything offensive, its bc his spouse is being rude I don’t get this one Hes antsy as shit at the thought of me landing a fist You dont have to visit west africa to see gambia bitch solid here AR mags handy n thick, im strapped to the brink tho Im about to bring a drum to his flat like a wing toast dude wtf this is dope af lmao Clap for me..as i blast 40 at this goof rapper Huge actor, exit wound'll split his backstory into 2 chapters it sounds good but didn’t hit for me Vs Been awhile, might be a little fatigued, none the less I'm the best that's simple to see. Either listen to me, or you'll be dead, put 3 to ya head like Me7o after hitting a three. fire I liked this My rap is rapid release, stab and decease. Hang u while I grab on the leash.. Then throw you over the balcony and slowly let it go n watch while you sadly delete! this had potential to be fire, your multis are dope but you ended this weakly My words hit like guns if you buck.. Fit to rupture you guts but... you 'barely above ground in life' its like you riding under a truck... So as an example I 'make BARC into money' just by simply cutting him up! decent flip, def gotta shorten this up a bit tho I see over time it's often a thing for guys long in the ring to get rewarded and shit... But actual shit, any contest you 'Champed' HAD TO BE FIXED, with more losses than wins! decent Barcotic a HOFer I see so yeah he can get his props, But if you really think you high key than it must come with a ten foot lock. wasn’t feeling this With bitches I get mad digits, it's simple with a BAD gimmick. I give Barc aLot of credit for even taking this spot, so I could whoop his ass in it! decent I suppose Die hard Knick fan, and rn we in the Playoffs what a picture! So yea It's sad to see as Barclays in agony like after the Nets lost to the Sixers! solid closer, nice Overall a nice battle here, in all honesty this is probably one of the best and most consistent barcotic verses I’ve ever read. Keep dropping like this and the league is gonna turn Canadian. Gamble, for your first battle back I feel like this is actually a really good verse. I know it’s been years since you last battled, and we’ll talk about it more offline but you definitely had the right ideas and concepts, multis, and wording….but some of your bars were too stretched and light in nature. I think you’ll be in much better form next week and mostly like beat whoever you’re battling. Good shit to both but I gotta go with barcotic in this one. Vote Brocotic |
04-29-2023, 04:38 PM | #12 | |
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Thnx for the votes fellas, good battle barc.
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04-29-2023, 04:52 PM | #13 |
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Jaws of lyfe, video court,Gambia, closer was a good concept but I wasn’t a fan of the approach leading into it.
Vs Nothing Lifza had a good flow going but he sacrificed wit for it. It would probably make a cool track but there wasn’t much in the form of punches. There really wasn’t anything there that made me glad I spent the time to read it. Barc had some cool hits. I really liked the closer but the wording just felt like it needed some more thought to refine it a bit. V/Barc |
04-29-2023, 05:46 PM | #14 |
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Bqrc had a good verse.. jaws of lyf, backgammon, wing toast.. a nice change from the rb wp/uterus stuff lol. Gambia dece, mounts was kinda corny but works tho
Gamble had Barclays.. seems rusty and style is longbar-esque.keep at it, shorten some wordy parts. V bar
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04-30-2023, 12:16 PM | #15 |
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Barcotic Wins 6-0
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