WEEK SIX DISCUSSION

Adverse · 05-01-2022, 10:17 PM

Last week was hell let’s make this one better, okay?

Halfway through the regular season

Dominate · 05-01-2022, 10:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Adverse

Last week was hell let’s make this one better, okay?

Halfway through the regular season

Thanks for putting up with us <3

Eviction · 05-02-2022, 03:46 AM

can we make this a slobber knocker, I don't wanna just do 40 lines for a champ match, I been doing 60 this whole time kind of a let down to go from that to 40 lines.

Master Rock · 05-02-2022, 06:46 AM

It's a champ match brothers should be able to go all out.

Dominate · 05-02-2022, 07:01 AM

Writing it is one thing, but 3x60 lines is a lot more than 3x40 for people to vote on. See what Adverse wants to do, I'll go with whatever.

Adverse · 05-02-2022, 08:29 AM

60 is fine with me, perhaps keep the 60 line limit in contenders/championship matches and drop everything else down to 40? The vote was super close

Adverse · 05-02-2022, 08:33 AM

Can somebody aside from myself, Eviction, and Dominate go to this website, filter for ten letter words and generate? That will be our topic for the week (if you get something super lame just click again)

https://randomwordgenerator.com/

NYCSPITZ · 05-02-2022, 08:54 AM

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Originally Posted by Adverse

Can somebody aside from myself, Eviction, and Dominate go to this website, filter for ten letter words and generate? That will be our topic for the week (if you get something super lame just click again)

https://randomwordgenerator.com/

Got u - Provincial.

How about picture prompts for next week? Those used to be insane and got everyone’s juices flowing

Adverse · 05-02-2022, 12:01 PM

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Originally Posted by NYCSPITZ

Got u - Provincial.

How about picture prompts for next week? Those used to be insane and got everyone’s juices flowing

Thanks man, I did pics like three weeks in a row to start the season is why I’ve been bouncing around but sure pics work for next week

Dominate · 05-02-2022, 08:55 AM

Alright guys let's try a 60 limit out then and see how we go

NYCSPITZ · 05-02-2022, 09:09 AM

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Originally Posted by Dominate

Alright guys let's try a 60 limit out then and see how we go

I’m cool w that & I voted 40

Adverse · 05-02-2022, 12:12 PM

Battles are up, if I missed anything please don’t hesitate to let me know

Eviction · 05-02-2022, 12:35 PM

60 is the sweet spot at 40 I'm like oh shit I got to end this now.

Eviction · 05-02-2022, 12:44 PM

the topic provincial are you meaning the verb or noun, or that's up to us lol?

NYCSPITZ · 05-02-2022, 01:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Eviction

the topic provincial are you meaning the verb or noun, or that's up to us lol?

Up to u lol

Objective · 05-02-2022, 03:20 PM

@Frank: Now that I can speak more. The stuff in italics was the character reminiscing/thinking, me mentioning it as style points is me basically saying that it shouldn't be needed. What wasn't in italic is present time. There's 3 stories going on, basically. Present time (stamding at the pier considering suicide and eventually coming home), thinking/reminiscing about life/what made the character decide against suicide and the time in Dahab. I should have exchanged the stuff you felt was filler to highlight this in some way instead. Should also have spent the opening couplet to highlight where I was, that would have taken away the confusion with Norwegian Ocean/Dahab. In short: I should have spent more time on it overall, which I should have done with basically all my verses so far this league.

Edit: Thanks a lot for feedback/votes, they have been incredibly good all over the board so far this league with exception of a few. I need to get my shit together.

Eviction · 05-02-2022, 10:41 PM

Still scratching my head over last week if you win by 1 or 20 it’s still a win technically I won that battle and the other guy lost, should have closed it when the tie was decided.

Adonis · 05-03-2022, 12:43 AM

I hear you eviction, but coming from the mod side is very very difficult, if not utterly impossible to please everyone. Let's not send adverse into an eating frenzy and lose all the collective weight we have lost, which for him and I, is whatever he's lost lol

Eviction · 05-03-2022, 01:50 AM

I can eat for the both of us

Adonis · 05-03-2022, 02:11 AM

This entire pizza is in your honor adverse. May it's dough fill us all

05-01-2022, 10:17 PM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,744 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446143	WEEK SIX DISCUSSION Last week was hell let’s make this one better, okay? Halfway through the regular season

05-02-2022, 06:46 AM	#4
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,333 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599638	It's a champ match brothers should be able to go all out. __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz

05-02-2022, 07:01 AM	#5
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,311 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	Writing it is one thing, but 3x60 lines is a lot more than 3x40 for people to vote on. See what Adverse wants to do, I'll go with whatever. __________________ The Bad Guys

05-02-2022, 08:55 AM	#10
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,311 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	Alright guys let's try a 60 limit out then and see how we go __________________ The Bad Guys

05-02-2022, 03:20 PM	#16
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,793 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474189	@Frank: Now that I can speak more. The stuff in italics was the character reminiscing/thinking, me mentioning it as style points is me basically saying that it shouldn't be needed. What wasn't in italic is present time. There's 3 stories going on, basically. Present time (stamding at the pier considering suicide and eventually coming home), thinking/reminiscing about life/what made the character decide against suicide and the time in Dahab. I should have exchanged the stuff you felt was filler to highlight this in some way instead. Should also have spent the opening couplet to highlight where I was, that would have taken away the confusion with Norwegian Ocean/Dahab. In short: I should have spent more time on it overall, which I should have done with basically all my verses so far this league. Edit: Thanks a lot for feedback/votes, they have been incredibly good all over the board so far this league with exception of a few. I need to get my shit together. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o Last edited by Objective; 05-02-2022 at 03:25 PM.

05-02-2022, 03:46 AM	#3
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	can we make this a slobber knocker, I don't wanna just do 40 lines for a champ match, I been doing 60 this whole time kind of a let down to go from that to 40 lines.

05-02-2022, 08:29 AM	#6
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,744 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446143	60 is fine with me, perhaps keep the 60 line limit in contenders/championship matches and drop everything else down to 40? The vote was super close

05-02-2022, 08:33 AM	#7
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,744 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446143	Can somebody aside from myself, Eviction, and Dominate go to this website, filter for ten letter words and generate? That will be our topic for the week (if you get something super lame just click again) https://randomwordgenerator.com/

05-02-2022, 12:12 PM	#12
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,744 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446143	Battles are up, if I missed anything please don’t hesitate to let me know

05-02-2022, 12:35 PM	#13
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	60 is the sweet spot at 40 I'm like oh shit I got to end this now.

05-02-2022, 12:44 PM	#14
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	the topic provincial are you meaning the verb or noun, or that's up to us lol?

05-02-2022, 10:41 PM	#17
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	Still scratching my head over last week if you win by 1 or 20 it’s still a win technically I won that battle and the other guy lost, should have closed it when the tie was decided.

05-03-2022, 12:43 AM	#18
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	I hear you eviction, but coming from the mod side is very very difficult, if not utterly impossible to please everyone. Let's not send adverse into an eating frenzy and lose all the collective weight we have lost, which for him and I, is whatever he's lost lol __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

05-03-2022, 01:50 AM	#19
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	I can eat for the both of us

05-03-2022, 02:11 AM	#20
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	This entire pizza is in your honor adverse. May it's dough fill us all __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR