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07-01-2019, 06:05 AM | #1 |
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Blue Bayou vs INF - INF WINS
BA Summer League Due Thursday, July 4th Minimum - 6 lines Max - 10 lines Line limit can increase if both agree 24hr ext to be granted by opponent NO biting NO swaying NO feeding Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit or match the first to drop @Blue Bayou @INF |
07-02-2019, 12:24 AM | #2 |
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07-02-2019, 09:50 AM | #3 |
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07-04-2019, 01:57 PM | #4 |
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9 milli to the face his head’ll rock & splash gallons
when it ‘kicks off’, i’ll send his Cap Flyin’ like the bottle cap challenge awkward reject got mad when i said 'last battle man i owned you fast' guess it's a touchy subject.. like his dad’s hand & his knee during home school math lookin like a circus freak.. i’ll work his speech & put a can to lids smoke a gram a piff. roll-up & have a ‘Scope expand his Mouth’ like a Manson Vid Last edited by Blue Bayou; 07-04-2019 at 02:03 PM. |
07-04-2019, 03:31 PM | #5 |
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Silently let a couple fly. Adjust the site shots come at night..
You'll only see a beam & hear a whistle like a bad bitch by a construction sight Type to get drunk & fight. LOSE then key 100 bars for a quick save Hope for his Sacrum don't have em fallin down....My foot up his ass'll make HIS break You're washed Blue. begged to befriend in SOL looked reallyy weird.. Trust they gassed this giant....now a stars burnt out & we wouldn't be cool in a million years |
07-07-2019, 10:38 PM | #6 |
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9 milli to the face his head’ll rock & splash gallons
when it ‘kicks off’, i’ll send his Cap Flyin’ like the bottle cap challenge cool. Double cap in the punch reads a little awkward to me though awkward reject got mad when i said 'last battle man i owned you fast' guess it's a touchy subject.. like his dad’s hand & his knee during home school math funny, dope. Good use of 'subject' in the fip makes it a good punch to me lookin like a circus freak.. i’ll work his speech & put a can to lids smoke a gram a piff. roll-up & have a ‘Scope expand his Mouth’ like a Manson Vid took some googling to understand it. It's nice Silently let a couple fly. Adjust the site shots come at night.. You'll only see a beam & hear a whistle like a bad bitch by a construction sight dope Type to get drunk & fight. LOSE then key 100 bars for a quick save Hope for his Sacrum don't have em fallin down....My foot up his ass'll make HIS break again, had to google it. It's okay You're washed Blue. begged to befriend in SOL looked reallyy weird.. Trust they gassed this giant....now a stars burnt out & we wouldn't be cool in a million years dope I got two I really liked from each. Gonna come back to this Rereading it, I got Inf, the difference here being in apparently the only one who liked his closer lol. Dope battle guys V/inf |
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07-07-2019, 01:37 PM | #9 |
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Cap flyin vs construction site, those were the best from each
As a whole, Blue had the better verse though. Wording was shaky on the Sacrum bar and the closer was eh V/Blue |
07-08-2019, 10:56 AM | #10 |
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This is a tough one. I read them over a few more times to really figure this out.
Blue opener with a strong visual and then drop a bottle cap challenge line which probaby should have gone before the first line for a greater effect in my opinion. Secondly, Blue came out with a real scenario about Inf's whining and stating about it being a touchy subject which really peak my interest but he ended his rhyme with math which was cool but was irrelevant to his whining (I felt drawn away at that point). The thought his closing line was pretty clever with the Manson Vid flex. Now for Inf, smooth rhyme opener not my type but smooth none the less. 3rd line caught me again because of the true nature involved regarding the hundred bars, but I felt the rhyme and next corralating line could have been excuted better. As for Inf''s closer was pretty dope, personally addressed with scientifical theory excuted in proper fashion. After going through these verses a few times, Blue kept giving me something then kept taking it away like a game of peek a boo therefore I'm giving it to Inf for opening smooth rhymes and a ultimately clever closer.
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07-08-2019, 10:08 PM | #11 |
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Solid battle fellas solid battle blue came with bottle cap line which was a good opener that school math shit was harsh but wasn’t feeling the mansion bid line didn’t hit as hard for me.
INF came with same heat. Dope opener to start the match, solid shit. Wasn’t feeling the his break line was worded a bit funny for my taste, cool concept though. And the closer was dope . Honestly this close could go either way. I like INFs opener and closer feel like he took it with those. Inf |
07-09-2019, 12:22 AM | #12 |
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07-09-2019, 05:42 AM | #13 |
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9 milli to the face his head’ll rock & splash gallons
when it ‘kicks off’, i’ll send his Cap Flyin’ like the bottle cap challenge oh ok, nice to see where Cashius got his bar from. This was nice awkward reject got mad when i said 'last battle man i owned you fast' guess it's a touchy subject.. like his dad’s hand & his knee during home school math lol ok made me smirk lookin like a circus freak.. i’ll work his speech & put a can to lids smoke a gram a piff. roll-up & have a ‘Scope expand his Mouth’ like a Manson Vid yeah ya lost me here bud Vs Silently let a couple fly. Adjust the site shots come at night.. You'll only see a beam & hear a whistle like a bad bitch by a construction sight lol this was cool I liked it Type to get drunk & fight. LOSE then key 100 bars for a quick save Hope for his Sacrum don't have em fallin down....My foot up his ass'll make HIS break decent You're washed Blue. begged to befriend in SOL looked reallyy weird.. Trust they gassed this giant....now a stars burnt out & we wouldn't be cool in a million years solid closer The 6 line battles are cool but 1 bar can literally make or break you. Thought blue had it but the closer hurt him. Inf didn’t have any clear misses and edges it imo. Vote INF |
07-09-2019, 06:41 AM | #14 |
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Have them both tied in quotes
Touchy subject/Manson vid vs construction site was dope and stars burnt out Inf second bar was a miss for me and blues cap challenge read a bit awkward but I liked it better... got him edging this slightly |
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