WK2 : Windu(0-0) vs. Listen(0-0) - listen wins NS

timeless · 10-06-2014, 06:53 AM

Verses will be due Thursday Oct. 9th at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions.

Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors.

Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK .

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Goodluck @ @Listen

Topic - "I hate to advocate drugs, alcohol, violence, or insanity to anyone, but they've always worked for me."

Listen · 10-09-2014, 10:24 PM

Here. Have been traveling this week and just saw this. I shall write and show.

Listen · 10-10-2014, 12:22 AM

Where did it go?

I can’t find you!

Not when you’re pounding the cement and rivaling the sound of my wrist watch,

Listen, listen, she whispers…

Who is she?

I only have half a clue, because the other half is pitch dark,

But thank God for this eye-lid that closes, why isn’t it redundant?
Is it because half of me worries we are fucked; and the other half says fuck it?

Understand the dilemma? I have personalities that are bi-polar,
And my disorder revokes my ownership to one of the owners.
So if you ask me for a story? I would tell you which one…
And if you ever want to be ME? It’s only natural that I say pick one.

You have options… You could be a smart ass or just sans the smart.
But if I’m honest, piano is the wrong class and you would bang the drum.

Because I don’t aspire to inspire, but I could be your rope to hang with
And if you seek a joy ride? We can take the road to a different language.

So what’s your fix? Because she whispers and I listen,
While your heart is on the deck, and the tick tock of your heart is the banging drum,
And she is the jamming gun,

Just stay quiet and

Listen, listen,

I am anything you want me to be, diversity is my strength,
Anguish is my gift, released with all its sins.

Do me!

Don’t do me…

Fucked or fuck it…

I am this line,

Feel me as I feed you and...

Watch me vanish.

10-06-2014, 06:53 AM	#1
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,623 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341329	WK2 : Windu(0-0) vs. Listen(0-0) - listen wins NS Verses will be due Thursday Oct. 9th at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions. Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors. Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK . View Other Rules *Here* Goodluck @ @Listen Topic - "I hate to advocate drugs, alcohol, violence, or insanity to anyone, but they've always worked for me." Last edited by Adonis; 10-11-2014 at 11:18 AM.

10-09-2014, 10:24 PM	#2
Listen Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 41 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 3760711	Here. Have been traveling this week and just saw this. I shall write and show.

10-10-2014, 12:22 AM	#3
Listen Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 41 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 3760711	Where did it go? I can’t find you! Not when you’re pounding the cement and rivaling the sound of my wrist watch, Listen, listen, she whispers… Who is she? I only have half a clue, because the other half is pitch dark, But thank God for this eye-lid that closes, why isn’t it redundant? Is it because half of me worries we are fucked; and the other half says fuck it? Understand the dilemma? I have personalities that are bi-polar, And my disorder revokes my ownership to one of the owners. So if you ask me for a story? I would tell you which one… And if you ever want to be ME? It’s only natural that I say pick one. You have options… You could be a smart ass or just sans the smart. But if I’m honest, piano is the wrong class and you would bang the drum. Because I don’t aspire to inspire, but I could be your rope to hang with And if you seek a joy ride? We can take the road to a different language. So what’s your fix? Because she whispers and I listen, While your heart is on the deck, and the tick tock of your heart is the banging drum, And she is the jamming gun, Just stay quiet and Listen, listen, I am anything you want me to be, diversity is my strength, Anguish is my gift, released with all its sins. Do me! Don’t do me… Fucked or fuck it… I am this line, Feel me as I feed you and... Watch me vanish.