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09-19-2014, 12:43 AM | #2 | |
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Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show Youre dying to be me, maybe in another life I fathered your style, youre just Pan trying to stab me with a butter knife Sho's scrawny, one look at the faggot I can tell that he cant brawl Doesnt know if he wants to be Chief Keef, Tyga or a Raggedy Anne doll Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck? The Planes couldve been the next Dohpe, maybe Im not thinking right But its pretty ironic how Sho getting high stopped us from ever taking flight We beat these addicts so many times I stopped trying to keep tab Its straight to Vegas after this, we'll be at Rehab while u guys are in rehab Quote:
Yea u Conceited.. aka a 5 foot black rapper who's also a corny faggot Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one Maaan those tattoos. Bad news.. it's shitty fam I'm talkin' about how wack Murda Ink is, guess u can call me a 50 fan i'ma bury you in the Graveyard for all of ya recent shit we'll see A Walk Among the Tombstones. & I ain't talking no Neeson Flick On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke .. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke They still remember our old verses cuz we're better, fact.. Ur lines fade after a wk or 2. Y'all r Global Ambassadors for Henna Tats They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block Bye...
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09-19-2014, 10:35 PM | #3 |
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Fuck these niggas b
Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice I'd beat Orc's face in with my fists while they're bare till they're drippin wet His eyes'll be where the ice is so much they'd be America's biggest threat Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ? Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's Orc reminds me of B Rabbit cuz he grew up with the same trash Both wanted to be rappers & his mom slept with kids in his same class Shoulda named yall Milfs, shit all I gotta do is call that dame to pipe I’d bag her easy and have that Cougar all over Kar like it's Talladega Nights You're queens of this sport, in Planes we were cool now I don't team up with dorks I'm ready to get rid of Kar so much this battle was almost me vs Orc Irish faggot, his heritage is dying rapid and the shits ugly Shit I bet you watch the Brady bunch Potato sack race & get hungry These damn average lames will get scored on when we clap macs & tre's Y'all better play some D MC or u're gonna end up like Jam Master J Ask sho we strapped though, no games you’ll see how I do Orc wears the tights so shit we’ll have more dots on yall than a CGI shoot We don't hang around the same crowd, my niggas can't wait to chalk this jerk See my peeps are gangstas while ur peeps involve me taking off my shirt I know Kare be snitching and that’s why I wanna bring this fake harm He’s known for talking to the Jakes so much he got insurance from State Farm U see we're too much y'all won't be able to stand in need of a crutch Medics will be holding up O K, like they just dropped a three in the clutch ZIP EM UP!!
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09-19-2014, 11:41 PM | #4 | ||
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09-21-2014, 07:55 PM | #5 |
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now that im ona laptop..i can get at this
Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show (decent open) Youre dying to be me, maybe in another life I fathered your style, youre just Pan trying to stab me with a butter knife (ok) Sho's scrawny, one look at the faggot I can tell that he cant brawl Doesnt know if he wants to be Chief Keef, Tyga or a Raggedy Anne doll (nice) Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it (nice) Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck? (ok) The Planes couldve been the next Dohpe, maybe Im not thinking right But its pretty ironic how Sho getting high stopped us from ever taking flight (lol) We beat these addicts so many times I stopped trying to keep tab Its straight to Vegas after this, we'll be at Rehab while u guys are in rehab (nah) straight segment..nothing too overwhelming..only line I didn't rly like was the closer..the rest was ok tonice Quote: Originally Posted by Murda Sho Well I know I read it... I'm too conceited to not read mags with my name in it Sho I don't read mags but the ppl adore me, maggot Yea u Conceited.. aka a 5 foot black rapper who's also a corny faggot (ha) Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one (playyyyed..I had concept like this back in 08 @rm) Maaan those tattoos. Bad news.. it's shitty fam I'm talkin' about how wack Murda Ink is, guess u can call me a 50 fan (pretty cool) i'ma bury you in the Graveyard for all of ya recent shit we'll see A Walk Among the Tombstones. & I ain't talking no Neeson Flick (eh) On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke .. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke (pretty good) They still remember our old verses cuz we're better, fact.. Ur lines fade after a wk or 2. Y'all r Global Ambassadors for Henna Tats (nice) They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block (cool close) similar results..mebe 1 o2 lines I absolutely didn't like the rest was ok to nice Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter (nice open) Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice (cool) I'd beat Orc's face in with my fists while they're bare till they're drippin wet His eyes'll be where the ice is so much they'd be America's biggest threat (no) Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ? Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp (lol) King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did (nice) What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's (decent) Orc reminds me of B Rabbit cuz he grew up with the same trash Both wanted to be rappers & his mom slept with kids in his same class (nice) Shoulda named yall Milfs, shit all I gotta do is call that dame to pipe I’d bag her easy and have that Cougar all over Kar like it's Talladega Nights (cool) You're queens of this sport, in Planes we were cool now I don't team up with dorks I'm ready to get rid of Kar so much this battle was almost me vs Orc (ok) Irish faggot, his heritage is dying rapid and the shits ugly Shit I bet you watch the Brady bunch Potato sack race & get hungry (decent) These damn average lames will get scored on when we clap macs & tre's Y'all better play some D MC or u're gonna end up like Jam Master J (nice) Ask sho we strapped though, no games you’ll see how I do Orc wears the tights so shit we’ll have more dots on yall than a CGI shoot (ok) the last 6 were ok. iono this was close mc were consistent but I think that verse sho dropped had the heavier lines overall tbh like the hits were better for the most part v/np
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09-22-2014, 01:01 AM | #6 |
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Milk Chocolate: This was a solid showing, of the caliber of a championship battle. I really liked the line about The Planes because, even though "getting high"/"taking flight" wordplay normally is played, it was worded well and felt very distinctly personal, not just in the sense that it was a personal but in the same way that Nas' "You sold your soul for riches" line felt like a personal affront. The first stanza as a whole was better than the second pretty clearly, though the closer on the first stanza was one of the weakest lines in the verse. The line about murda sho's looks was harsh, and the 2d line was clever. In that second stanza, the Smoke line was good and personal, but there weren't many standouts as a whole. Mostly it was a bit generic, maybe lazy.
Name Pending: The opening four lines felt almost like a checklist, coming up with the best Chocolate line followed by the best Milk line. But they were really, really good lines, just would have been more effective if spread apart a little in such a long verse. The tramp stamp line was interesting, but my research shows that Orc mostly references Butler as the best text battler ever. The Falcons line was so slick and sort of a throwback to a time when writing was valued more in battling.It's interesting that you both had Will Ferrell movie references. At least, I assume each of you wrote one of those. The Anchorman one was much better. The me vs. Orc line was clever. The Jam Master J and B Rabbit lines were pretty bad, and a different, worse Jake from State Farm line was just used in the Summer Classic championship. Both verses slipped in the second halves, but I thought Name Pending was a little more consistent and had better wording and delivery (though both teams are very good at wording). In essence, I enjoyed it more. Vote: Name Pending
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09-24-2014, 03:38 AM | #7 |
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Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro
Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck? Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke .. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block vs. Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ? Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's We don't hang around the same crowd, my niggas can't wait to chalk this jerk See my peeps are gangstas while ur peeps involve me taking off my shirt This was a dope display of talent no joke, I think this came down to consistency, I feel one team came a bit more sharp overall but I can't knock neither squad.. Dope ass finals v/..NamePending |
09-25-2014, 10:27 AM | #8 |
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Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro
Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck? Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke .. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block vs. Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ? Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's Orc reminds me of B Rabbit cuz he grew up with the same trash Both wanted to be rappers & his mom slept with kids in his same class We don't hang around the same crowd, my niggas can't wait to chalk this jerk See my peeps are gangstas while ur peeps involve me taking off my shirt This was a good ass battle both came with good shit, consistency n everything both teams showed up but I got np by a quote close as shit match thou good shit fellas V/np |
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