Joel Venom - U Kno Nuthin (prod. Joel Venom)

Joel Venom · 07-23-2013, 07:08 PM

unreleased, "2nd World" coming soon

Exis · 07-24-2013, 08:54 AM

Long time no see man...and chea, this was dope.Could you have written a more catchier hook? Lol...Thought the delivery was smooth as, in all honesty this would have to be one of my favorite joints from you...some of the tracks on that 2nd Cosmos (or whatever the fuck it's called) were flames but this is right up there imo...good shit fam, really good...

Stay ill yo.

Pakistani Hand Cannon · 07-28-2013, 10:40 AM

from the get go i thought i wasnt gonna fuck with this at all cuh of tha hook, but that wasnt really the case.

i listened to this a couple times still,

honestly not my typa music for most part, buh shit i fucked with this, even by the end the hook had me caught, so i guess job done on that front. first verse was just what i'd call inoffensive, nothing that really stood out for me - butchya presence n shit (including rhythmically) was on point enough for me not to straight up turn tha shit off. - on a more positive note, second verse i liked yo straight up, your delivery is always a lil too bouncy n shit for me personally (you def do it well though, its just a prefference) but other than that, shits on point, productions cool aswell & even though as ive already stated this aint the typa shit i usually vibe with, i'd still say you done a solid fucking job on all basis - tha beat included.

never a hate thing, butchu know, take it howeva you want it

#1

Joel Venom · 07-29-2013, 05:00 PM

much love for this rugged, thanks for the in depth feedback it means alot!

PiE · 07-29-2013, 05:54 PM

Not bad. hook was eehh.. sounds like filler, but the verses were okay. The voice effects and all of the echo double backups took away from the verse quality to me. Cool song for this day and age.

DMVsToneB · 07-30-2013, 11:40 PM

Cold bruh .. hook is what a hook should be, catchy. Flow is smooth throughout the verses. Can't really hate on much here. Stay up dude

07-29-2013, 05:54 PM	#5
PiE el es a la mode Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: slice of heaven Posts: 94 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 37	Not bad. hook was eehh.. sounds like filler, but the verses were okay. The voice effects and all of the echo double backups took away from the verse quality to me. Cool song for this day and age. __________________

07-24-2013, 08:54 AM	#2
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Long time no see man...and chea, this was dope.Could you have written a more catchier hook? Lol...Thought the delivery was smooth as, in all honesty this would have to be one of my favorite joints from you...some of the tracks on that 2nd Cosmos (or whatever the fuck it's called) were flames but this is right up there imo...good shit fam, really good... Stay ill yo.

07-28-2013, 10:40 AM	#3
Pakistani Hand Cannon Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 1,230 Rep Power: 5303583	from the get go i thought i wasnt gonna fuck with this at all cuh of tha hook, but that wasnt really the case. i listened to this a couple times still, honestly not my typa music for most part, buh shit i fucked with this, even by the end the hook had me caught, so i guess job done on that front. first verse was just what i'd call inoffensive, nothing that really stood out for me - butchya presence n shit (including rhythmically) was on point enough for me not to straight up turn tha shit off. - on a more positive note, second verse i liked yo straight up, your delivery is always a lil too bouncy n shit for me personally (you def do it well though, its just a prefference) but other than that, shits on point, productions cool aswell & even though as ive already stated this aint the typa shit i usually vibe with, i'd still say you done a solid fucking job on all basis - tha beat included. never a hate thing, butchu know, take it howeva you want it #1

07-29-2013, 05:00 PM	#4
Joel Venom Galaxy Child Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Raleigh, NC Posts: 137 Rep Power: 37	much love for this rugged, thanks for the in depth feedback it means alot!

07-30-2013, 11:40 PM	#6
DMVsToneB Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 72 Battle Record: 0-3 Rep Power: 3224606	Cold bruh .. hook is what a hook should be, catchy. Flow is smooth throughout the verses. Can't really hate on much here. Stay up dude