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the letters S.H. are the theme
subcutaneous hyperdermic needles, used as instruments of evil, shooting heroin directly into the bloodstream of all our people/ hallucinations become a safe haven, and empower the feeble, till everything is backwards and they crash down from the highest steeple/ see section eight becomes section hate as things get medieval, poverty is the new secret home of the dark ages upheaval/ sometimes those under these conditions seek a harrowing escape, so they inject themselves with drugs and imagine a better place/ or a better time as several hours go by, some how they feel better and don't really know why/ seeking the answer to all the secrets held below skies, silence holds the truth so shhhhhhhhhhhhhh, speak no lies/ never sacrifice honesty, one look in the mirror its clear, that selfishness hindered your judgment to get your here/ seek help go to a sober house till things appear, less clouded, inner sanctity and hope help one persevere
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A.bove T.he R.est
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wow cool, big words!
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ayyyo fuck outta here with that 'letter S.H. are the theme'...dead that...shit is beyond retarded i aint even got words for that shit to do it justice
& that said, i fucked with this verse, it had its moments... Quote:
fuck it i wont quote anymore, but i will say i didnt mind reading this at all, but it was def lacking a lil something...like originality never a hate thing, but take it how you want #1 be easy. |
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