KnowP vs. Jilti - Jilti wins

Meth · 08-21-2014, 12:50 PM

The 1-2 Punch League

Due Monday Midnight Pacific

@KnowP @jilti

KnowP · 08-22-2014, 02:40 PM

Yup

KnowP · 08-25-2014, 12:13 PM

ya girl give me head in park, she feelin this aim, drive
and she dont mind if you put her in gear.... cause yo scronny ass wears the same size

jilti · 08-25-2014, 11:31 PM

speaking of girlfriends..

u think that fat bitch gets called beautiful like she's attractive
but when people say she Gorges, its to describe her eating habits

BROKE LESNAR · 08-26-2014, 01:36 AM

Wow great battle. Similar themes. Both came with it. Jil has never done better imo. He is really stepping it up. Only fault I could really find was the pronounciation of the gorges wp. When I say it as gorgeous and gorges they have a different sound. Such as gorjiss and gorjiz. Other than that I would say best battle I seen so far. Knowp I thought was a little bit more creative with the entire concept and misdirection but that isn't taking anything away from Jil.

v-kp

Certain · 08-26-2014, 01:49 AM

KnowP: The setup was terrible. The punchline was fine, but I don't like generic lines in 1-2 punch leagues. All you have to do is come up with one line about a guy. Make it at least a nameplay if not a personal.

jilti: This was a very cleanly executed generic punch. So the same problem exists, but you handled yourself better.

Vote: jilti

MKG · 08-26-2014, 03:04 AM

Both had cool wordplay here but IMO jiltis was smoother
And harder hitting so my vote goes to j

Blanco Bishop · 08-26-2014, 10:38 AM

V jilt. Read smoother nhad a cleaner setup. Thought kp's wording was a little jumbled.

KnowP · 08-26-2014, 10:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

KnowP: The setup was terrible. The punchline was fine, but I don't like generic lines in 1-2 punch leagues. All you have to do is come up with one line about a guy. Make it at least a nameplay if not a personal.

jilti: This was a very cleanly executed generic punch. So the same problem exists, but you handled yourself better.

Vote: jilti

Lol at the contradiction

Certain · 08-26-2014, 10:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KnowP

Lol at the contradiction

There was none. You both had generic punchlines. Your setup was terrible. His wasn't.

Notebook · 08-26-2014, 03:38 PM

Nice battle.

KnowP: Your bar could've been far more awesome if you tweaked that first line. I might come off picky, but that "feeling this aim, drive" took away from the bar a little. Filler'ish. But, still, I found this to be a pretty dope punch with some unique wordplay...although, we don't know if Jilti is actually scrawny or not. That's an unverifiable personal, lol; but, other than that, I dig it.

Jilti: These are some clean lines. You didn't slack off with the set-up, and it flowed nicely into the Gorgeous / Gorges flip...giving us a pretty enjoyable bar that's more "in-your-face" than anything.

Vote: Jilti. Much cleaner and hard-hitting. I just sensed more consistency.

08-21-2014, 12:50 PM	#1
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489511	KnowP vs. Jilti - Jilti wins The 1-2 Punch League Due Monday Midnight Pacific @KnowP @jilti __________________ Crystal

08-26-2014, 01:49 AM	#6
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	KnowP: The setup was terrible. The punchline was fine, but I don't like generic lines in 1-2 punch leagues. All you have to do is come up with one line about a guy. Make it at least a nameplay if not a personal. jilti: This was a very cleanly executed generic punch. So the same problem exists, but you handled yourself better. Vote: jilti __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

08-22-2014, 02:40 PM	#2
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 222 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463488	Yup

08-25-2014, 12:13 PM	#3
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 222 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463488	ya girl give me head in park, she feelin this aim, drive and she dont mind if you put her in gear.... cause yo scronny ass wears the same size

08-25-2014, 11:31 PM	#4
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	speaking of girlfriends.. u think that fat bitch gets called beautiful like she's attractive but when people say she Gorges, its to describe her eating habits

08-26-2014, 01:36 AM	#5
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Wow great battle. Similar themes. Both came with it. Jil has never done better imo. He is really stepping it up. Only fault I could really find was the pronounciation of the gorges wp. When I say it as gorgeous and gorges they have a different sound. Such as gorjiss and gorjiz. Other than that I would say best battle I seen so far. Knowp I thought was a little bit more creative with the entire concept and misdirection but that isn't taking anything away from Jil. v-kp

08-26-2014, 03:04 AM	#7
MKG Senior Member Join Date: May 2014 Posts: 481 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	Both had cool wordplay here but IMO jiltis was smoother And harder hitting so my vote goes to j

08-26-2014, 10:38 AM	#8
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	V jilt. Read smoother nhad a cleaner setup. Thought kp's wording was a little jumbled.

08-26-2014, 03:38 PM	#11
Notebook fanlink.to/Notebook Join Date: Feb 2014 Location: Hell. Posts: 49 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	Nice battle. KnowP: Your bar could've been far more awesome if you tweaked that first line. I might come off picky, but that "feeling this aim, drive" took away from the bar a little. Filler'ish. But, still, I found this to be a pretty dope punch with some unique wordplay...although, we don't know if Jilti is actually scrawny or not. That's an unverifiable personal, lol; but, other than that, I dig it. Jilti: These are some clean lines. You didn't slack off with the set-up, and it flowed nicely into the Gorgeous / Gorges flip...giving us a pretty enjoyable bar that's more "in-your-face" than anything. Vote: Jilti. Much cleaner and hard-hitting. I just sensed more consistency.