Championship Match: Destroyer vs. BROKE LESNAR - BROKE LESNAR wins

Meth · 08-21-2014, 12:48 PM

The 1-2 Punch League

Due Monday Midnight Pacific

@Destroyer @BROKE LESNAR

BROKE LESNAR · 08-21-2014, 01:16 PM

Check.

Destroyer · 08-21-2014, 01:17 PM

here we go

BROKE LESNAR · 08-21-2014, 06:03 PM

ur the bomb

ur wife told me the first night u both smashed was gross and a total disaster
cuz when u showed her ur package i.e. "D" she coldly exploded with laughter

Destroyer · 08-25-2014, 01:42 PM

that one is a lot better

des will slice u up into pieces, & neatly pile u up in the back
of my truck & u'll be just another dude to go from BROKE to stacked.

Kin · 08-25-2014, 02:28 PM

thiz one's close.... a toss up... Broke that was a straight bar...not extremely hard hitting tho' set up was clean

Des...set up also clean an your punch is a lil' harder in my opinion...but at the same time felt it coulda been a more creative nameplay

thiz one's a toss up....cant call it ..

but If I gotta pick....guess I gotta go wit' which one I thought was harder

soooo...

-Destro'

YDK · 08-25-2014, 11:19 PM

Tbh I liked Brooke's bar a bit more just because it was more creative IMO. I feel like all the broke nameplays are boring an even if done perfect still only holds so much weight anymore lol
vote broke

Certain · 08-26-2014, 01:44 AM

BROKE LESNAR: That wordplay was forced as hell. The wording was really good here. But you could have done more with an "i.e. D" line if you really wanted to go that route, particularly since Destroyer starts with a D.

Destroyer: This was pretty mediocre, too. The wording was off, and the "broke" nameplay was way too simple and direct.

The weird thing is both of you have written pretty well lately. I guess you just don't care much about this match, even if it's one bar. I'm going to vote for line I liked more and not feel good about this battle as a whole, particularly as a title match.

Vote: BROKE LESNAR

Blanco Bishop · 08-27-2014, 08:38 AM

I like both but des's transition didn't read smooth to me.

Thought broke was a bit more polished this time around.

V broke

Defiant · 08-28-2014, 03:50 AM

I got broke
Close but the concept was slightly more fresh

Vote - broke

Roar · 08-28-2014, 04:23 PM

Both dropped fire. Broke put more into it imo.

V/broke

KnowP · 08-28-2014, 09:16 PM

Good battle neither had personals soo it came down to next flip and I think broke executed his concept a bit better here.

V. Broke

Unfukwitable · 08-28-2014, 10:28 PM

cool battle but i feel ones line hit alil harder

v/BROKE

Camp Bell · 08-28-2014, 11:05 PM

broke's line was pretty dope, witty.
des line was ehh, broke to rich as
in piled and stacked...nah

vote: Broke

08-21-2014, 12:48 PM	#1
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489508	Championship Match: Destroyer vs. BROKE LESNAR - BROKE LESNAR wins The 1-2 Punch League Due Monday Midnight Pacific @Destroyer @BROKE LESNAR __________________ Crystal

08-21-2014, 06:03 PM	#4
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	ur the bomb ur wife told me the first night u both smashed was gross and a total disaster cuz when u showed her ur package i.e. "D" she coldly exploded with laughter Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 08-25-2014 at 11:10 AM.

08-25-2014, 11:19 PM	#7
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	Tbh I liked Brooke's bar a bit more just because it was more creative IMO. I feel like all the broke nameplays are boring an even if done perfect still only holds so much weight anymore lol vote broke __________________

08-26-2014, 01:44 AM	#8
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	BROKE LESNAR: That wordplay was forced as hell. The wording was really good here. But you could have done more with an "i.e. D" line if you really wanted to go that route, particularly since Destroyer starts with a D. Destroyer: This was pretty mediocre, too. The wording was off, and the "broke" nameplay was way too simple and direct. The weird thing is both of you have written pretty well lately. I guess you just don't care much about this match, even if it's one bar. I'm going to vote for line I liked more and not feel good about this battle as a whole, particularly as a title match. Vote: BROKE LESNAR __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

08-28-2014, 11:05 PM	#14
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	broke's line was pretty dope, witty. des line was ehh, broke to rich as in piled and stacked...nah vote: Broke __________________ get high. write rhymes.

08-21-2014, 01:16 PM	#2
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Check.

08-25-2014, 02:28 PM	#6
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	thiz one's close.... a toss up... Broke that was a straight bar...not extremely hard hitting tho' set up was clean Des...set up also clean an your punch is a lil' harder in my opinion...but at the same time felt it coulda been a more creative nameplay thiz one's a toss up....cant call it .. but If I gotta pick....guess I gotta go wit' which one I thought was harder soooo... -Destro'

08-27-2014, 08:38 AM	#9
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	I like both but des's transition didn't read smooth to me. Thought broke was a bit more polished this time around. V broke

08-28-2014, 03:50 AM	#10
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	I got broke Close but the concept was slightly more fresh Vote - broke

08-28-2014, 04:23 PM	#11
Roar Lyin Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 39 Rep Power: 0	Both dropped fire. Broke put more into it imo. V/broke

08-28-2014, 09:16 PM	#12
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463485	Good battle neither had personals soo it came down to next flip and I think broke executed his concept a bit better here. V. Broke

08-28-2014, 10:28 PM	#13
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	cool battle but i feel ones line hit alil harder v/BROKE