Round One: Siu Mi vs. Moe Jetts [Siu Mi wins (NS)]

Adonis · 07-25-2014, 01:36 AM

Verses will be due Friday at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions.

Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors.

Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK .

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Goodluck

@Siu Mi @Moe Jetts

Topic:

Adonis · 07-28-2014, 11:23 PM

@Siu Mi @Moe Jetts

Siu Mi · 07-28-2014, 11:57 PM

Present ^.^

Siu Mi · 08-01-2014, 02:12 AM

"The paint thinner will be the icing on the cake.
Watch them choke on their rhetoric!" Decisive wins at stake.

The bison lives a titan til the livestock thins in plate.
Then the private whims of divisive men ask bison to fill it's place.
The oppression evolves. The message in the weapon dissolved.
The presence in the message is gone. In fact, we're not present at all.
The residents see a president's pause and right away question the cause.
Is life in each precedent false? Their duty is to the relevance of...
"Life and liberty and the pursuit of happiness..." Riiiiiight...
Well, the impressions are off. We see "You Are Free" on the walls,
In the same steads where the plates are as bald as cancer patients on all
That chemo. We're too wrapped around the axle of what we drove.
The vehicle of truth is on fire. Once all is done we all reap what we've sown.
Will elevation be enough for each's own to reach peace's throne?
Can a word puncture their exo-sheaths and nodes? A government governed by its people alone?
In wonderment wondering if it's a feasible goal, we unleashed on patrols.

"Vigilantes on the loose! Mask goons with speakers and tomes!"
Rubber shellings speak in open streets, greeting our skin, bleeding and broke.
"Turn on the hose!" The flammable spray lit the graffiti and stone.
YOU ARE FREE TO SURRENDER YOUR HUMANITY TO BE WHOLE!
Protocol replaced due process in the streets of New Rome,
The last bastion of resistance to the cyborg regime in control.
Humans are slaves to tech and the President's speeches are owned
By these intelligent leeches in chrome, wired to relieve us of old
Thinking in an attempt to weed out the woes of our species to "mold"
Us into a people of growth. Well fuck that. We are offspring of hope.
The words of oppression run-off as we do,
avoiding riot peacekeepers while still shooting the cathedral.
YOU ARE FREE TO-- light a match and ignite the revolution!

The burning orange robs the sky of black pollution.
The smoke of free souls rises like evolution's blueprint.
The insurgency sparks a state of emergency, they called the brutes in.
I stand in the square in observation of my movement.
Arrogant and unaware, they hold me there. I smile.
Wave peace signs, watching the coldest stares, I don't mind.
Slowly kneeling as if pride and my heart had made a divide,
I trigger the EMP vest rigged with ball bearings inside.
WE ARE ALL FREE! with this sacrifice no message can die!
5, 4, 3, 2... let no oppressor survive.

King Ra. · 08-02-2014, 03:16 AM

Siu Mi wins by no show.

07-25-2014, 01:36 AM	#1
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Round One: Siu Mi vs. Moe Jetts [Siu Mi wins (NS)] Verses will be due Friday at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions. Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors. Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK . View Other Rules Here Goodluck @Siu Mi @Moe Jetts Topic: __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-28-2014, 11:23 PM	#2
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	@Siu Mi @Moe Jetts __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-28-2014, 11:57 PM	#3
Siu Mi Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 25 Rep Power: 0	Present ^.^ __________________ love is

08-01-2014, 02:12 AM	#4
Siu Mi Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 25 Rep Power: 0	We Are Free "The paint thinner will be the icing on the cake. Watch them choke on their rhetoric!" Decisive wins at stake. The bison lives a titan til the livestock thins in plate. Then the private whims of divisive men ask bison to fill it's place. The oppression evolves. The message in the weapon dissolved. The presence in the message is gone. In fact, we're not present at all. The residents see a president's pause and right away question the cause. Is life in each precedent false? Their duty is to the relevance of... "Life and liberty and the pursuit of happiness..." Riiiiiight... Well, the impressions are off. We see "You Are Free" on the walls, In the same steads where the plates are as bald as cancer patients on all That chemo. We're too wrapped around the axle of what we drove. The vehicle of truth is on fire. Once all is done we all reap what we've sown. Will elevation be enough for each's own to reach peace's throne? Can a word puncture their exo-sheaths and nodes? A government governed by its people alone? In wonderment wondering if it's a feasible goal, we unleashed on patrols. "Vigilantes on the loose! Mask goons with speakers and tomes!" Rubber shellings speak in open streets, greeting our skin, bleeding and broke. "Turn on the hose!" The flammable spray lit the graffiti and stone. YOU ARE FREE TO SURRENDER YOUR HUMANITY TO BE WHOLE! Protocol replaced due process in the streets of New Rome, The last bastion of resistance to the cyborg regime in control. Humans are slaves to tech and the President's speeches are owned By these intelligent leeches in chrome, wired to relieve us of old Thinking in an attempt to weed out the woes of our species to "mold" Us into a people of growth. Well fuck that. We are offspring of hope. The words of oppression run-off as we do, avoiding riot peacekeepers while still shooting the cathedral. YOU ARE FREE TO-- light a match and ignite the revolution! The burning orange robs the sky of black pollution. The smoke of free souls rises like evolution's blueprint. The insurgency sparks a state of emergency, they called the brutes in. I stand in the square in observation of my movement. Arrogant and unaware, they hold me there. I smile. Wave peace signs, watching the coldest stares, I don't mind. Slowly kneeling as if pride and my heart had made a divide, I trigger the EMP vest rigged with ball bearings inside. WE ARE ALL FREE! with this sacrifice no message can die! 5, 4, 3, 2... let no oppressor survive. __________________ love is

08-02-2014, 03:16 AM	#5
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Siu Mi wins by no show. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.