Cold Blooded - Sleeps Feat. Loose Logic (audio)

Loose Logic · 06-04-2013, 12:51 AM

feed links -
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7023
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6947

This is off of his upcoming album

verse 1 - Sleeps
verse 2 - Loose Logic

Nigma · 06-04-2013, 01:27 AM

Listened to this twice, really enjoyed the song. Sleeps had some one liners that I was really digging, a lot of dooope metas and imagery that really stuck with me, and Loose man you've that that syllable play, you are incredibly comfortable on that beat and your transition to and from the double time is golden.

Objective · 06-04-2013, 11:30 AM

Would be dope if you added the lyrics as well. I like to read while I listen to the shit even tho' I can hear the lyrics well. Easier to go back and quote shit that I felt stood out. The first verse was ill.

''Respects overdue, I was neglected and left alone till my dreams bury ya facts in another world set in stone.'' <-- dope ish.

I guess it's you on the second verse. The flow/rhymescheme was on point/dope and I'll bump this track from time to time. The I eat bars/Dahmer, Angel with Clip wings, Martyr shit, raising a bar, cold blooded, cave for the morgue-lines stood out to me. The weed-OD line was played and your only semi-weak shit with an OK enough twist imo.

Definately a dope track. Props.

Loose Logic · 06-07-2013, 05:04 PM

Good looks

Boredom · 06-07-2013, 05:53 PM

sick track, enjoyed this.

Dope girl · 06-16-2013, 07:48 AM

Both of you had some dope lines, The whole thing sound sickness.

Flow · 06-16-2013, 04:05 PM

I agree with objective you really should put the lyrics up to go with it especially as it's the open mic it would make sense an would certainly be easier to
Constructively critique. The sound and flow was on point both really had the voice an Tone I like to hear on a track like that nice an professional feel.

Look forward to hearing some more of your stuff

Pakistani Hand Cannon · 06-18-2013, 12:32 PM

sleeps done his thing as usual - verse was just average for that nigga; couple shits i wasnt feeling, for most part was on point & delivery was perfect for tha joint though

your verse was aiiight, def wasnt feeling it as much though no lie, mood just didnt match the beat so well for me , call it a personal preference. eh listened to it again, your verse just dont resonate with a nigga. - wouldnt call it whack for a second, but i aint finna tell you i fucked with it just for the fuck of it.

on the whole, didnt mind tha listen, take it how you want

#1

06-04-2013, 01:27 AM	#2
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Listened to this twice, really enjoyed the song. Sleeps had some one liners that I was really digging, a lot of dooope metas and imagery that really stuck with me, and Loose man you've that that syllable play, you are incredibly comfortable on that beat and your transition to and from the double time is golden. __________________

06-04-2013, 11:30 AM	#3
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Would be dope if you added the lyrics as well. I like to read while I listen to the shit even tho' I can hear the lyrics well. Easier to go back and quote shit that I felt stood out. The first verse was ill. ''Respects overdue, I was neglected and left alone till my dreams bury ya facts in another world set in stone.'' <-- dope ish. I guess it's you on the second verse. The flow/rhymescheme was on point/dope and I'll bump this track from time to time. The I eat bars/Dahmer, Angel with Clip wings, Martyr shit, raising a bar, cold blooded, cave for the morgue-lines stood out to me. The weed-OD line was played and your only semi-weak shit with an OK enough twist imo. Definately a dope track. Props. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

06-07-2013, 05:04 PM	#4
Loose Logic Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 175091	Good looks

06-07-2013, 05:53 PM	#5
Boredom Been On One Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 1,617 Battle Record: 26-28 Champed - Newbie Tournament IV Rep Power: 415110	sick track, enjoyed this.

06-16-2013, 07:48 AM	#6
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	Both of you had some dope lines, The whole thing sound sickness.

06-18-2013, 12:32 PM	#8
Pakistani Hand Cannon Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 1,230 Rep Power: 5303583	sleeps done his thing as usual - verse was just average for that nigga; couple shits i wasnt feeling, for most part was on point & delivery was perfect for tha joint though your verse was aiiight, def wasnt feeling it as much though no lie, mood just didnt match the beat so well for me , call it a personal preference. eh listened to it again, your verse just dont resonate with a nigga. - wouldnt call it whack for a second, but i aint finna tell you i fucked with it just for the fuck of it. on the whole, didnt mind tha listen, take it how you want #1