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Old 08-07-2014, 09:06 PM   #1
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Old 08-07-2014, 09:09 PM   #2
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Certain posted a non-OM OM recently.

I'd be inclined to read different types of writing in there.

Especially since Alias/Unknown Writer #54-107 make up the majority of the front page.
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Old 08-07-2014, 09:12 PM   #3
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lol

The thing is, writing fiction is something I'm weak at. I'd like to add it to my arsenal, and Netcees is a logical place to pick up the axe.
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Old 08-07-2014, 09:13 PM   #4
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If mentioned in a discussion its who'd still use wordy lines and act all dope
Then again hes had this schtick so long he like bb da bb da bb thats all folks
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Old 08-07-2014, 09:15 PM   #5
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Post it on Open Mic.
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Old 08-07-2014, 09:21 PM   #6
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Very well. I will consider this, and I hope others will also.
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Old 08-07-2014, 09:24 PM   #7
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Old 08-07-2014, 09:31 PM   #8
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Old 08-07-2014, 09:32 PM   #9
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im writing an epic fantasy saga at a snails pace

i will post segments here and there

things to note, i am terrible, like in a grammar/sentence structure type way since i didnt pay attention in english probably ever before i dropped out of school. but i am an idiot savant who builds an entire world in my head daily while on autopilot

but word i could use feedback on my AFOREMENTIONED terrible grammar and knowledge of, well, writing in essence.
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Old 08-07-2014, 09:32 PM   #10
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Post it. I'd read and would post some of my own in awhile.
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Old 08-07-2014, 09:38 PM   #11
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Agreed, do it up.
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Would your prose consist of robots ruling as our Dick Cheney still-beating heart overlords, with a dash of vintage Vulgar-humor (about russian potato growers)?
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Negative. It'll be about robots ruling over our dicks.
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things to note, i am terrible, like in a grammar/sentence structure type way since i didnt pay attention in english probably ever before i dropped out of school. but i am an idiot savant who builds an entire world in my head daily while on autopilot

but word i could use feedback on my AFOREMENTIONED terrible grammar and knowledge of, well, writing in essence.
I wouldn't worry too much about it, people will probably help you out enough in here and if you should ever be close to publishing anything spend some extra money for an editor if you should choose to self publish (through a book publisher they'll most likely give you one as part of the deal). Even a bunch of seasoned up and coming writers with great grammar have regret not doing this for their first book, in other words you only need enough knowledge about grammar to make your story comprehensible when it comes down to it as it'll be corrected anyways. So the main focus should be to just make your story entertaining and engaging towards the reader and polish up the rest as you improve in this style of writing.
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...posting short stories / flash fiction in there? Or maybe even in discussion. (but nobody would leave real feedback)

If there was a separate section on NC's for short stories, it would fail. I don't have any stories to submit currently, so I'm not planning on posting stories right away. Just wanted to test the waters - is it acceptable conduct? It'll create better writers, that's for sure.
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Old 08-08-2014, 01:15 PM   #19
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I'd be inclined to read different types of writing in there.

^^ word, i would too.

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