Atomic vs. Ctrl Alt Elite - {Atomic wins}

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Tuesday,
  July 2nd, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends Friday July 5th at 11:59 PM PST.
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@Atomic @Ctrl Alt Elite

[Atomic]

check, breh

[Undead.]

check....10 or 16 what the deally brah??

[Atomic]

10, sir

[Atomic]

@Ctrl Alt Elite i have 10 done just wanna make sure ur gonna show up.

[Undead.]

my bad, i might need an ext. work is hella crazy. I'll keep u posted @Atomic

[Atomic]

ext is fine, take your time.

ur god awful i'll let the hate run, ur moms will get raped son,
since birth control been useless, too bad that bitch didn't take some.
i fuck dimes. for u? chicks have to be blind or deaf for banging,
told 'em his bitch was a high-five & then I fuckin left 'em hanging.
ull get smoked like a fag or bleezy, ur so wack it's easy,
fucker i'll make delete history, like any teenager w/ a mac or PC.
this retards known to choke, someone give 'em the heimlich,
maaan you could keystyle ya verse but it STILL won't be timeless.
u'll be losing this battle, KO.. just stop frontin you blow,
pull the rug from beneath this faggot to show i've got it under control.

[Undead.]

ur not a force to be reckoned with, due to ur moronic con's.
So i dont need a Lecture on hiroshima, to know that Atomic Bombs.
u don't got the gut to drop bombs & I'll expose it bitch.
cuz food poisoning's the only time, Atomic ever has explosive shit

Atomic (2-0) vs. Ctrl Alt Elite (2-2)

Control is mid tier personified and he has been for as long as I can remember. He's extrememly decent. Atomic has been slowly adapting to this style but he isn't there yet. I think this will be close but.

Ctrl Alt Elite 60/40.

Ur use to the mag, givin u small chances to Shine dude.
that even the thesaurus, made Atomic Synonymous to Minute.
says he's got hands, im not worried bout the lie he pratters..
i'll Break him down scientifically, cuz dealin w/ Atomic's a Tiny Matter.
Ur bitch trash talked u, she couldn't keep a lid on it.
She said when it comes to handlin atomic, she couldn't get a grip on it.


@Atomic no need for ext

[Allen Knight]

this retards known to choke, someone give 'em the heimlich,
maaan you could keystyle ya verse but it STILL won't be timeless.


Vs

u don't got the gut to drop bombs & I'll expose it bitch.
cuz food poisoning's the only time, Atomic ever has explosive shit
says he's got hands, im not worried bout the lie he pratters..
i'll Break him down scientifically, cuz dealin w/ Atomic's a Tiny Matter.

V/Ctrl, this was a close one but alot of played shit tbh most concepts been done to death, yah'll got decent wording just try to work on ur concepts & be more fresh,
i got elite with a lil more consistent verse here, decent battle props yah'll.

Timeless

vs.

Tiny Matter

Word. This was close, and a decent read. I liked Atomic's High five concept he could have made that pretty dope, I ain't seen that shit done yet but his wording hasn't evolved to 2013 yet, so it didn't hit for me. Timeless was cool, birth control could've been ok but once again the wording was off for me at least. You're other 2 concepts were kind of old they didn't feel to fresh. Ctrl had the tiny matter line which I thought was the line of the battle. Explosive shit should've been cool but the way you worded it made it sound kind of corny, actually the wording on all of your bars made them sound kind of corny, in my opinion. Atomic bombs was an almost, something was missing though I'm just not sure what. Well, like I said this is close but I have both with 1 quote and Ctrl with the line of the battle, therefore I gotta vote for him.

TLDR;

V/ Ctrl Alt Elite

[Lecture]

Atomics concepts are here, then there the next. If you brought more consistency you would be start edging people out in battles like this. Didnt like untolds explosive shit line, tiny matter was line of the match.

Unbias Atomic so dont bitch.

V: C.A.E

[Sharp]

Atomics first 2 nameflips could've been cool but they weren't worded as well as they could've been. Birth control was near quotable for me. Timeless was cool.

Ctrl was maaad corny with something in his verse. Liked tiny matter and maybe the closer.

Thought atomic had one more near quotable so I gotta edge this to him

V/ atomic

close match

i got atomic with hangin' n closer, and he also had a dope flow throughout to me

i got control with tiny matter n his opener...

i gotta edge this to atomic, his misses werent as bad, his flow was better to me (although that dont matter much) and i felt that if control closed stronger he coulda taken this, but i was not feeling his closer at all tbh.

vote - atomic

[Greed]

Those atomic flips were trash

V atomic

First 6 were solid. I didn't get the timeless line.

[Dominate]

Birth control was dope, high five was a good concept just needed to be set up better, delete history is a little bit of a stretch as a nameplay but anyway you should have flipped it with an insult to him rather than reference "any teenager", I thought timeless was a bit simple but OK, closer was cool concept but could have been worded to be harsher... Best verse I've seen from u on NC though tbh, you're adapting to this style :)

Vs

Atomic bombs good personal, explosive shit corny and played, thesaurus way too simple, tiny matter was good, closer was meh.

I got Atomic

[Utmost]

ur god awful i'll let the hate run, ur moms will get raped son,
since birth control been useless, too bad that bitch didn't take some.
i fuck dimes. for u? chicks have to be blind or deaf for banging,
told 'em his bitch was a high-five & then I fuckin left 'em hanging.

vs

ur not a force to be reckoned with, due to ur moronic con's.
So i dont need a Lecture on hiroshima, to know that Atomic Bombs.
says he's got hands, im not worried bout the lie he pratters..
i'll Break him down scientifically, cuz dealin w/ Atomic's a Tiny Matter.

Atomic, first 3 bars were his strongest, then fell off at the end. birth control was pretty nice. i dont think ive seen anyone do high five like that. kudos, delete history was cool coulda been a heater if you set it up diff. overall not bad

Ctrl, good personal tie in with bombs, tiny matter was cool felt a bit longwinded tho..rest was eh to dece for me.


close but..
v/Atomic with harder hits, and a touch more consistency