Philly vs Rawn MacDon - {Philly wins}

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@The Bully @Rawn MacDon

sup Phil..

10?

if u want more its fine idc

[Philly]

The homie G-money.
Yea 10 is cool with me fam

[~RustyGunZ~]

@Philly @Rawn MacDon

While u hand off to the P.D., Im screening Panzer’d Lamborghinis'
Sing Soprano w Houdini cuz when in Rome, all that tone gets U Gandolfini'd
Give 4 pumps to nik-A's Jordans, the way us Fla brahs' hoard guns
in fact the only time this jock-strap’d is wearing that, along with his support cup
u never had the heart to start, not on varsity or for ur alma-matar
Shts clear when the college doctor prescribes ur offensive line's as beta-blockers
I'm amazed that kids have the audacity to call him something great
when his punches land-phil appears in that place, with written product dumping waste
i never walk a girl home, i spit my shit on deck to hit n work they frame
while everything bull-pens strikes out, and couldn’t take a bitch out pitchin perfect game

[Philly]

Originally Posted by Rawn MacDon

I am Def a below avg battler @The Bully

It's sad you can't even tell how wack you are.

Look...
Sorry for trashin your plans, but u don't have a chance in this battle here man
Think u'll be gettin no L this week?...homie, I really hope for u that ur a Cavaliers fan
Prolly just hearin the story this late, but I fucked that little whore that u date
& EVERYONE knows I smashed that shit. It's like Aaron Hernandez & his security tape
She's gross too, that pussy was was like the loosest darkest hole bro
You & ur boy could both jump in, and still have ample room for Marco polo
My punches break ur grill yo... go put that under ya pillow when you sleepin bitch
The toothfairy'll leave a note like "Philly killed u, here's a couple bucks u piece of shit"
Since 11 I listened to the Lox...that's prolly why I never liked fiction
I can tell u didn't grow up on D-block...
and you were someone's "baby girl" if u were EVER in prison

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Rawn MacDon

While u hand off to the P.D., Im screening Panzer’d Lamborghinis'
Sing Soprano w Houdini cuz when in Rome, all that tone gets U Gandolfini'd
nice flow no punch
Give 4 pumps to nik-A's Jordans, the way us Fla brahs' hoard guns
in fact the only time this jock-strap’d is wearing that, along with his support cup
not really a punch, not what I would consider one anyways, nice flow though
u never had the heart to start, not on varsity or for ur alma-matar
Shts clear when the college doctor prescribes ur offensive line's as beta-blockers
lol that was pretty dohpe and fresh
I'm amazed that kids have the audacity to call him something great
when his punches land-phil appears in that place, with written product dumping waste
nice word play
i never walk a girl home, i spit my shit on deck to hit n work they frame
while everything bull-pens strikes out, and couldn’t take a bitch out pitchin perfect game
nah

your execution is way off, I think your focus is to heavy on the flow and rhyme scheme. Just a tip, you had some nice bars near the end

Originally Posted by Philly

It's sad you can't even tell how wack you are.

Look...
Sorry for trashin your plans, but u don't have a chance in this battle here man
Think u'll be gettin no L this week?...homie, I really hope for u that ur a Cavaliers fan
weak statement
Prolly just hearin the story this late, but I fucked that little whore that u date
& EVERYONE knows I smashed that shit. It's like Aaron Hernandez & his security tape
weak
She's gross too, that pussy was was like the loosest darkest hole bro
You & ur boy could both jump in, and still have ample room for Marco polo
lol - better
My punches break ur grill yo... go put that under ya pillow when you sleepin bitch
The toothfairy'll leave a note like "Philly killed u, here's a couple bucks u piece of shit"
lol random but made me chuckle
Since 11 I listened to the Lox...that's prolly why I never liked fiction
I can tell u didn't grow up on D-block...
and you were someone's "baby girl" if u were EVER in prison
meh pretty easy, not that great, all your comments come off to much like statements - a lacking in concepts but with some funny swag

tough shout - ill edge it to philly for more lols

[Sharp]

Dope battle

Liked land Phil and bullpen from rawn

Noel was bonkers. Hernandez and Marco polo were cool

Phil got it in quotes but rawn did his thing too. Really good battle, both enjoyable reads

V/philly

[Geno]

RAWN MY DOOD.

but i got philly here. had a little more umph with him

[Atomic]

Will edit a vote when i get home.

[Atomic]

While u hand off to the P.D., Im screening Panzer’d Lamborghinis'
Sing Soprano w Houdini cuz when in Rome, all that tone gets U Gandolfini'd
meh
Give 4 pumps to nik-A's Jordans, the way us Fla brahs' hoard guns
in fact the only time this jock-strap’d is wearing that, along with his support cup
cool
u never had the heart to start, not on varsity or for ur alma-matar
Shts clear when the college doctor prescribes ur offensive line's as beta-blockers
lmao, cool
I'm amazed that kids have the audacity to call him something great
when his punches land-phil appears in that place, with written product dumping waste
nice w/p, wording was meh
i never walk a girl home, i spit my shit on deck to hit n work they frame
while everything bull-pens strikes out, and couldn’t take a bitch out pitchin perfect game
nah, not feeling

//

Sorry for trashin your plans, but u don't have a chance in this battle here man
Think u'll be gettin no L this week?...homie, I really hope for u that ur a Cavaliers fan
okay.
Prolly just hearin the story this late, but I fucked that little whore that u date
& EVERYONE knows I smashed that shit. It's like Aaron Hernandez & his security tape
too easy, but it's alright.
She's gross too, that pussy was was like the loosest darkest hole bro
You & ur boy could both jump in, and still have ample room for Marco polo
ha, nice
My punches break ur grill yo... go put that under ya pillow when you sleepin bitch
The toothfairy'll leave a note like "Philly killed u, here's a couple bucks u piece of shit"
ROFL, okay
Since 11 I listened to the Lox...that's prolly why I never liked fiction
I can tell u didn't grow up on D-block...
and you were someone's "baby girl" if u were EVER in prison
wording was meh imo, but it's alright

v/ when i looked at this the first few times i couldn't judge a clear winner, but i'm going to give the VERY slight edge to philly for the reasons that his misses were still decent, where as rawns misses were bad lol. so for that reason v/ philly, even tho, like i said this was EXTREMELY close. good battle guys.

[Greed]

Rawn you had some good ideas but they didn't transfer to the page like they should of. Beta blockers and alma mater didn't flow right for me and threw the line off. jock strap was alright. Closer was alright I guess.

V philly

Not great

last 2 concepts for rawn should've hit but didnt due to wording. rawn ur a good writer battle more and ull get this shit

vs

liked your first 3.. Noel was a stand out. hope people know how to pronounce the fuckers name.


V/ Phil