Untold vs Utmost - {Untold wins}

06-18-2013, 02:11 AM

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Due Dates:

Verses are due Tuesday,
June 25th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Friday June 28th at 11:59 PM PST.
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Recycling = DQ.
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Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
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@Untold @Utmost

Untold · 06-24-2013, 04:56 PM

Hey

~RustyGunZ~ · 06-25-2013, 10:25 PM

@Utmost @Untold

Utmost · 06-26-2013, 12:18 AM

forgot about this. need an ext

Untold · 06-26-2013, 01:12 AM

Ok. As long as you show

Untold · 06-26-2013, 11:26 PM

i wish this shit mattered. i'll leave this kid battered! im past better
this maybe a battle of the Double U's, but u have nuttin in common wit that letter
wit a smart phone, ur a dumb fuck. the irony wit this man alone
u couldn't 'Boost Mobile' votes even if u posted ur verses from that brand of phone
i'll shave a little off the top. i aint kiddin when i plot. i prepare chronicles
now watch this ProGlide across ya neck wit a razor that'll cut past ya hair follicles
im a G wit dimes. it should be a crime! help? i have no free contribution
faggot, u couldn't get LinkedIn to bitches if that site had cheap prostitution
the sites back n all, but these words'll crack ya jaw
cuz when i call u a knucklehead, i'm still referencing u suckin a faggot off

Utmost · 06-27-2013, 02:19 AM

just got in, ill have somthin up by dead

Utmost · 06-27-2013, 02:59 AM

.
.
Vets said my wordins bad, but its sooooo hard NOT to procrastinate and key
they said I shouldnt 'capitalize on YOU' anymore... well, blame Meth for the matches this week
Uve neva been a ladies man - so I dont need clues to why this guys tense
Coz every chick that takes the 'PisTold off' approach.. is puttin him one bullet closer to suicide attempts
I'll jus key some shit, lock the V and dip - since all ur bringin is the cheapest flips
I mean, fuckin shootin fish in a barrel... this is more like viewin amoeba in a petri dish
Plus with chicks ur the worst, all it takes is a wink n shes steppin out
'course ya bitch is 'two timing' you... I hit her up n she doesnt even think for a Second now
G'head, front like ya clap heat - you can ACT hard but please im warnin ya
Coz the only time we'd see this 'Chum Buck it'.. is if plankton got the secret formula
.
.

Atomic · 06-27-2013, 06:05 AM

i wish this shit mattered. i'll leave this kid battered! im past better
this maybe a battle of the Double U's, but u have nuttin in common wit that letter
ha, cool
wit a smart phone, ur a dumb fuck. the irony wit this man alone
u couldn't 'Boost Mobile' votes even if u posted ur verses from that brand of phone
wording hurts it, punch is meh, concept is cool
i'll shave a little off the top. i aint kiddin when i plot. i prepare chronicles
now watch this ProGlide across ya neck wit a razor that'll cut past ya hair follicles
heh, dece
im a G wit dimes. it should be a crime! help? i have no free contribution
faggot, u couldn't get LinkedIn to bitches if that site had cheap prostitution
rofl, huge reach but i enjoyed it
the sites back n all, but these words'll crack ya jaw
cuz when i call u a knucklehead, i'm still referencing u suckin a faggot off
meh, nah

/./././././

Vets said my wordins bad, but its sooooo hard NOT to procrastinate and key
they said I shouldnt 'capitalize on YOU' anymore... well, blame Meth for the matches this week
wayyy too easy. its aight tho
Uve neva been a ladies man - so I dont need clues to why this guys tense
Coz every chick that takes the 'PisTold off' approach.. is puttin him one bullet closer to suicide attempts
lol poor wording & the w/p is sketchy. i like the concept tho, not a bad bar imo.
I'll jus key some shit, lock the V and dip - since all ur bringin is the cheapest flips
I mean, fuckin shootin fish in a barrel... this is more like viewin amoeba in a petri dish
haaa, cool
Plus with chicks ur the worst, all it takes is a wink n shes steppin out
'course ya bitch is 'two timing' you... I hit her up n she doesnt even think for a Second now
don't see how two timing would connect to seconds..so nah, reaching.
G'head, front like ya clap heat - you can ACT hard but please im warnin ya
Coz the only time we'd see this 'Chum Buck it'.. is if plankton got the secret formula
.
once again, reach on the connection, decent concept tho.

...

v/ untold. took it w/ fresher wording/harder punches. i know u key'd utmost, & based on that ur verse wasn't bad @ all. but yea, untold took it. cool battle guys.

06-28-2013, 03:43 AM

LinkedIn
Pro Glide was an almost

vs

two timing and capitilize on u were both almost

V/ Untold

Hits were better. Misses about the same so it comes down to what did hit. two to two on what hit, one quote for told takes it for him. Close battle.

Sharp · 06-28-2013, 04:02 PM

i wish this shit mattered. i'll leave this kid battered! im past better
this maybe a battle of the Double U's, but u have nuttin in common wit that letter
almost cool, i just didnt like the way it was done
wit a smart phone, ur a dumb fuck. the irony wit this man alone
u couldn't 'Boost Mobile' votes even if u posted ur verses from that brand of phone
kind of a stretch but alright
i'll shave a little off the top. i aint kiddin when i plot. i prepare chronicles
now watch this ProGlide across ya neck wit a razor that'll cut past ya hair follicles
nice
im a G wit dimes. it should be a crime! help? i have no free contribution
faggot, u couldn't get LinkedIn to bitches if that site had cheap prostitution
solid
the sites back n all, but these words'll crack ya jaw
cuz when i call u a knucklehead, i'm still referencing u suckin a faggot off
alright idea but kinda eh

Vets said my wordins bad, but its sooooo hard NOT to procrastinate and key
they said I shouldnt 'capitalize on YOU' anymore... well, blame Meth for the matches this week
nice
Uve neva been a ladies man - so I dont need clues to why this guys tense
Coz every chick that takes the 'PisTold off' approach.. is puttin him one bullet closer to suicide attempts
cool idea
I'll jus key some shit, lock the V and dip - since all ur bringin is the cheapest flips
I mean, fuckin shootin fish in a barrel... this is more like viewin amoeba in a petri dish
eh
Plus with chicks ur the worst, all it takes is a wink n shes steppin out
'course ya bitch is 'two timing' you... I hit her up n she doesnt even think for a Second now
alright
G'head, front like ya clap heat - you can ACT hard but please im warnin ya
Coz the only time we'd see this 'Chum Buck it'.. is if plankton got the secret formula
lol

had it even in quotes, proglide and linkdin vs capitalize and chum bucket and one miss each... untolds nonquotes edged this one for me tho. close battle, cool stuff

v/untold

~RustyGunZ~ · 06-28-2013, 04:12 PM

i wish this shit mattered. i'll leave this kid battered! im past better
this maybe a battle of the Double U's, but u have nuttin in common wit that letter
i'll shave a little off the top. i aint kiddin when i plot. i prepare chronicles
now watch this ProGlide across ya neck wit a razor that'll cut past ya hair follicles

seen boost w/p before, yours was sloppy. opener was alright, cool nameplay, could've been worded a bit better with the set up and delivery. ProGlide is okay the ending of the delivery wasn't very harsh though, bit predictive. linkedin was a good idea but horrible execution tbh, why would they have cheap pros? closer eh, seen better on my name. you hurt from wording mostly here, seemed rushed you didn't really connect any heavy punches with your concepts.

vs.

Uve neva been a ladies man - so I dont need clues to why this guys tense
Coz every chick that takes the 'PisTold off' approach.. is puttin him one bullet closer to suicide attempts
Plus with chicks ur the worst, all it takes is a wink n shes steppin out
'course ya bitch is 'two timing' you... I hit her up n she doesnt even think for a Second now
G'head, front like ya clap heat - you can ACT hard but please im warnin ya
Coz the only time we'd see this 'Chum Buck it'.. is if plankton got the secret formula

opener ehhh.. basic.. pistold was dope imo. fish nah, just didn't hit for me with the connection. two timing was cool, nothing amazing. closer was cool. bit better wording than untold and lotb so

v/utmost

06-18-2013, 02:11 AM	#1
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	Untold vs Utmost - {Untold wins} NBL Netcees Text Battle League Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Tuesday, June 25th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST. Voting ends Friday June 28th at 11:59 PM PST. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are normally 24 hours (unless requested otherwise, that is), can be no longer than 36 hours and have to be granted by your opponent. Line Limit: Min. = 10 lines Max. = 16 lines The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: Must vote on 5 battles and post your links. Post the links in the thread titled "Week 7 Voting Links". You will be punished if you don't post all 5 voting links. You will not like the punishment, so just vote so you don't have to cry later. Details about this are to be found in the "Week 7 Voting Links" thread. General Rules: 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. Feeding = DQ. Recycling = DQ. Biting = DQ. No freeposting, swaying or bitching. Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount. @Untold @Utmost

06-27-2013, 02:59 AM	#8
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	. . Vets said my wordins bad, but its sooooo hard NOT to procrastinate and key they said I shouldnt 'capitalize on YOU' anymore... well, blame Meth for the matches this week Uve neva been a ladies man - so I dont need clues to why this guys tense Coz every chick that takes the 'PisTold off' approach.. is puttin him one bullet closer to suicide attempts I'll jus key some shit, lock the V and dip - since all ur bringin is the cheapest flips I mean, fuckin shootin fish in a barrel... this is more like viewin amoeba in a petri dish Plus with chicks ur the worst, all it takes is a wink n shes steppin out 'course ya bitch is 'two timing' you... I hit her up n she doesnt even think for a Second now G'head, front like ya clap heat - you can ACT hard but please im warnin ya Coz the only time we'd see this 'Chum Buck it'.. is if plankton got the secret formula . . Last edited by Utmost; 06-27-2013 at 03:13 AM.

06-24-2013, 04:56 PM	#2
Untold Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 865 Battle Record: 10-7 Rep Power: 0	Hey

06-26-2013, 12:18 AM	#4
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	forgot about this. need an ext

06-26-2013, 01:12 AM	#5
Untold Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 865 Battle Record: 10-7 Rep Power: 0	Ok. As long as you show

06-26-2013, 11:26 PM	#6
Untold Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 865 Battle Record: 10-7 Rep Power: 0	i wish this shit mattered. i'll leave this kid battered! im past better this maybe a battle of the Double U's, but u have nuttin in common wit that letter wit a smart phone, ur a dumb fuck. the irony wit this man alone u couldn't 'Boost Mobile' votes even if u posted ur verses from that brand of phone i'll shave a little off the top. i aint kiddin when i plot. i prepare chronicles now watch this ProGlide across ya neck wit a razor that'll cut past ya hair follicles im a G wit dimes. it should be a crime! help? i have no free contribution faggot, u couldn't get LinkedIn to bitches if that site had cheap prostitution the sites back n all, but these words'll crack ya jaw cuz when i call u a knucklehead, i'm still referencing u suckin a faggot off

06-27-2013, 02:19 AM	#7
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	just got in, ill have somthin up by dead

06-27-2013, 06:05 AM	#9
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	i wish this shit mattered. i'll leave this kid battered! im past better this maybe a battle of the Double U's, but u have nuttin in common wit that letter ha, cool wit a smart phone, ur a dumb fuck. the irony wit this man alone u couldn't 'Boost Mobile' votes even if u posted ur verses from that brand of phone wording hurts it, punch is meh, concept is cool i'll shave a little off the top. i aint kiddin when i plot. i prepare chronicles now watch this ProGlide across ya neck wit a razor that'll cut past ya hair follicles heh, dece im a G wit dimes. it should be a crime! help? i have no free contribution faggot, u couldn't get LinkedIn to bitches if that site had cheap prostitution rofl, huge reach but i enjoyed it the sites back n all, but these words'll crack ya jaw cuz when i call u a knucklehead, i'm still referencing u suckin a faggot off meh, nah /./././././ Vets said my wordins bad, but its sooooo hard NOT to procrastinate and key they said I shouldnt 'capitalize on YOU' anymore... well, blame Meth for the matches this week wayyy too easy. its aight tho Uve neva been a ladies man - so I dont need clues to why this guys tense Coz every chick that takes the 'PisTold off' approach.. is puttin him one bullet closer to suicide attempts lol poor wording & the w/p is sketchy. i like the concept tho, not a bad bar imo. I'll jus key some shit, lock the V and dip - since all ur bringin is the cheapest flips I mean, fuckin shootin fish in a barrel... this is more like viewin amoeba in a petri dish haaa, cool Plus with chicks ur the worst, all it takes is a wink n shes steppin out 'course ya bitch is 'two timing' you... I hit her up n she doesnt even think for a Second now don't see how two timing would connect to seconds..so nah, reaching. G'head, front like ya clap heat - you can ACT hard but please im warnin ya Coz the only time we'd see this 'Chum Buck it'.. is if plankton got the secret formula . once again, reach on the connection, decent concept tho. ... v/ untold. took it w/ fresher wording/harder punches. i know u key'd utmost, & based on that ur verse wasn't bad @ all. but yea, untold took it. cool battle guys.

06-28-2013, 03:43 AM	#10
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	LinkedIn Pro Glide was an almost vs two timing and capitilize on u were both almost V/ Untold Hits were better. Misses about the same so it comes down to what did hit. two to two on what hit, one quote for told takes it for him. Close battle.