MAINESPITZ vs. Dominate - {Dominate wins}

The Summer Classic V
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

@MAINESPITZ @Dominate


Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Wednesday,
  June 19th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due Sunday, June 16th 2013
• Voting ends Monday 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 48 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• A check in IS mandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Atomic]

chin checka.

[Dominate]

check

[Atomic]

Upset city, faggit...

..yooooo, look.


you're ugly as fuck, he'd need a grand for a whore to fuck,
cuz the only way Dominickers would be a vacation to florida!

Dom:

Gimme the 36hr ext, I'll try to get something up

Sorry Cash. I prolly should have signed out this week tbh

dom clearly won't dominate so please quit being a fag,
this bitch'll ask for the longest extentions yet weave seen that you're trash
nobody gives shit about ur verse, fuck how you feel you're not boss
if you think we Carrots hilarious... PLUS I'll fucking peel your top off.
this fagg0t spits wackness, a salads something he'd care to toss,
cuz gayboy isn't comfortable in his own skin, so I'LL fuckin' tear it off.
your structure is a cluster fuck, grab the blade & then i'll cut this knuck,
hopefully you get a kick outta these bars, & then i'll finish w/ an uppercut!
since you're a part of this battle, its only turned into a gay bout,
kid told me he had a ChickIn the bag, then grabbed his KFC takeout.
you can eat these bullets for free, bitch. the meals included,
& ur bars? i'll fucking kill 'em all... didn't want dom to feel excluded. (OFWGKTA)

bye

[Dominate]

Last round? I Martyred that. Got a piece of my opponent, scarred em fast
You got a piece of Cake… but you beating that newb was farrr from that
I seen longbar heads come back again, & get mad when they can’t adapt to trends
But how are YOU lamenting that style when u were still a whiny mid-tier fagg0t then?
It’s no secret you Live In A Basement, I only pray that you’re NOT proud
Online you’re a Low-Level Boarder. Offline you’re the SAME at ur mom’s house
Fuckin disgrace, you at Warthog levels of ugly & lame scout
No plans to spend Time in Europe but I’m expecting a Tuscany Day now
& I pull hoes you Mamma’s boy, so you need to cool those obsessions
Or once I Whisker Away It’ll leave you that Distance from full-blown depression
He fantasizes allll day about someone touching his sphincter
You’ll see ‘Tom Green w/ envy just from mentioning someone got Fingered
Crybaby fagg0t. You get rabid when told that ur not good
Why even try to Take out Lo’ Mein.. u only eat whatever your mom cooks

[Flow]

Originally Posted by MAINESPITZ

Upset city, faggit...

..yooooo, look.


you're ugly as fuck, he'd need a grand for a whore to fuck,
cuz the only way Dominickers would be a vacation to florida!
no

Dom:



dom clearly won't dominate so please quit being a fag,
this bitch'll ask for the longest extentions yet weave seen that you're trash
no
nobody gives shit about ur verse, fuck how you feel you're not boss
if you think we Carrots hilarious... PLUS I'll fucking peel your top off.
no this is just in your face shit
this fagg0t spits wackness, a salads something he'd care to toss,
cuz gayboy isn't comfortable in his own skin, so I'LL fuckin' tear it off.
no this is just in your face shit
your structure is a cluster fuck, grab the blade & then i'll cut this knuck,
hopefully you get a kick outta these bars, & then i'll finish w/ an uppercut!
no this is just in your face shit
since you're a part of this battle, its only turned into a gay bout,
kid told me he had a ChickIn the bag, then grabbed his KFC takeout.
meh this was a half decent concept but the punch was weak
you can eat these bullets for free, bitch. the meals included,
& ur bars? i'll fucking kill 'em all... didn't want dom to feel excluded.
no (OFWGKTA)

bye

Originally Posted by Dominate

Last round? I Martyred that. Got a piece of my opponent, scarred em fast
You got a piece of Cake… but you beating that newb was farrr from that
ok personal
I seen longbar heads come back again, & get mad when they can’t adapt to trends
But how are YOU lamenting that style when u were still a whiny mid-tier fagg0t then?
lmao lotb so far great personal
It’s no secret you Live In A Basement, I only pray that you’re NOT proud
Online you’re a Low-Level Boarder. Offline you’re the SAME at ur mom’s house
meh concept was pretty naff as was the execution but im being tougher on you
Fuckin disgrace, you at Warthog levels of ugly & lame scout
No plans to spend Time in Europe but I’m expecting a Tuscany Day now
lol don't think anyone hits warthog levels
& I pull hoes you Mamma’s boy, so you need to cool those obsessions
Or once I Whisker Away It’ll leave you that Distance from full-blown depression
lol nice wordplay
He fantasizes allll day about someone touching his sphincter
You’ll see ‘Tom Green w/ envy just from mentioning someone got Fingered
lol
Crybaby fagg0t. You get rabid when told that ur not good
Why even try to Take out Lo’ Mein.. u only eat whatever your mom cooks

White wash - Vote Dom

[The Bully]

nothing

vs

It’s no secret you Live In A Basement, I only pray that you’re NOT proud
Online you’re a Low-Level Boarder. Offline you’re the SAME at ur mom’s house
& I pull hoes you Mamma’s boy, so you need to cool those obsessions
Or once I Whisker Away It’ll leave you that Distance from full-blown depression
He fantasizes allll day about someone touching his sphincter
You’ll see ‘Tom Green w/ envy just from mentioning someone got Fingered

Not a real close one here, Dom had a solid verse. I thought low level boarder was dope... line of the battle. Whisker away was nice, tom green was pretty funny too. Cake wasn't bad either.

Maine's wording isn't bad, the concepts here are just not too good...Care-it/Carrot, We've/Weave, Chicken/ChickIn...just way too simple homie.

V/ Dominate

Originally Posted by MAINESPITZ

Upset city, faggit...

..yooooo, look.


you're ugly as fuck, he'd need a grand for a whore to fuck,
cuz the only way Dominickers would be a vacation to florida!
--neh--

Dom:



dom clearly won't dominate so please quit being a fag,
this bitch'll ask for the longest extentions yet weave seen that you're trash
--we've/weave? seriously.--
nobody gives shit about ur verse, fuck how you feel you're not boss
if you think we Carrots hilarious... PLUS I'll fucking peel your top off.
--thats a bit played, old, and simple my G--
this fagg0t spits wackness, a salads something he'd care to toss,
cuz gayboy isn't comfortable in his own skin, so I'LL fuckin' tear it off.
--uh-uh--
your structure is a cluster fuck, grab the blade & then i'll cut this knuck,
hopefully you get a kick outta these bars, & then i'll finish w/ an uppercut!
--your concepts are ... sooooo simple, not just simple tho... they are also played, and they dont hit--
since you're a part of this battle, its only turned into a gay bout,
kid told me he had a ChickIn the bag, then grabbed his KFC takeout.
--doesnt work both ways, would be okish if it did--
you can eat these bullets for free, bitch. the meals included,
& ur bars? i'll fucking kill 'em all... didn't want dom to feel excluded.
--negative--(OFWGKTA)

bye

Originally Posted by Dominate

Last round? I Martyred that. Got a piece of my opponent, scarred em fast
You got a piece of Cake… but you beating that newb was farrr from that
--cool--
I seen longbar heads come back again, & get mad when they can’t adapt to trends
But how are YOU lamenting that style when u were still a whiny mid-tier fagg0t then?
--ok--
It’s no secret you Live In A Basement, I only pray that you’re NOT proud
Online you’re a Low-Level Boarder. Offline you’re the SAME at ur mom’s house
--haha dope--
Fuckin disgrace, you at Warthog levels of ugly & lame scout
No plans to spend Time in Europe but I’m expecting a Tuscany Day now
--alright--
& I pull hoes you Mamma’s boy, so you need to cool those obsessions
Or once I Whisker Away It’ll leave you that Distance from full-blown depression
--nice, seen whisker away before but not used like this--
He fantasizes allll day about someone touching his sphincter
You’ll see ‘Tom Green w/ envy just from mentioning someone got Fingered
--eh--
Crybaby fagg0t. You get rabid when told that ur not good
Why even try to Take out Lo’ Mein.. u only eat whatever your mom cooks
--lol--

wasnt close

Dom ate him

V/ Dominate

[Alvin Karpis]

Crybaby fagg0t. You get rabid when told that ur not good
Why even try to Take out Lo’ Mein.. u only eat whatever your mom cooks

vs

nothing


dom had some other good lines overall not bad, maine was all over the place and didn't have the creativity or directness needed to win


v/dominate

[Maximus]

Nada
vs
piece of cake
low level border-lotb
whisker away
.
.
Dom takes this by a landslide, he had creative concepts and personals which he landed well. Atomic has a pretty cool wording but his concepts are too simple and barely hit

[Atomic]

kk i get it, dom can say whisker away & that wordplay is mad complex but carrots is so fucking simple.

nice lines doms, gg close it.

[Orc]

nothing
vs
I seen longbar heads come back again, & get mad when they can’t adapt to trends
But how are YOU lamenting that style when u were still a whiny mid-tier fagg0t then?
It’s no secret you Live In A Basement, I only pray that you’re NOT proud
Online you’re a Low-Level Boarder. Offline you’re the SAME at ur mom’s house
Fuckin disgrace, you at Warthog levels of ugly & lame scout
No plans to spend Time in Europe but I’m expecting a Tuscany Day now
& I pull hoes you Mamma’s boy, so you need to cool those obsessions
Or once I Whisker Away It’ll leave you that Distance from full-blown depression

dom killed it. vote dom