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Old 06-10-2013, 03:51 AM   #1
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Incubation, wat you thinkin? Brains heating up. Leaking a lil fluid no breathing or speaking, fuck! Throat strangled face mangled with the intangible's of, a morbid old man with knees an ankles mixed up. Cut the circulation fuck the words I'm facing, "I'll break your fuckin thumb!" Bitch I'll snap your fuckin neck before this altercation is done! Back to the story the facts of the topic, baby mama yelling for me "you guys! just stop it!" Im choking him out cover the throat an the mouth, he's gurgling now but in a moment he'll be showing he's out; cold. Too old, too frail, damn dad you failed. I tried ta fuckin stop you I threw the torch fluid an lighter, you thought you could ignite this fire in the house while me an her was inside her!? Your lucky mom is (dead man, switch) it up I shoulda hit you in the head damn! I shoulda killed you on the spot collapsed your throat till you stopped, cuz now the bond is broken when it should be a knot. How fuckin dumb am I? I'm your fuckin son! Or am I? But I can control my anger...can't I?
The paramedics arrive let the policeman inside, explain to them your story without breaking your stride. Your mistaken if I show a glimpse of regret, I got the best of you old man its much easier said. Go ahead cry, your fucked up in the head, I bet its partially my fault, But you tried ta kill me in my bed! Your the craziest of all! Now as they haul you off for your psych evaluation, remember the situation, cuz next time I'll fuckin kill YOU without a moments hesitation.
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Old 06-10-2013, 05:19 AM   #2
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Old 06-10-2013, 07:36 AM   #3
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Old 06-10-2013, 08:02 PM   #4
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