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Old 05-23-2013, 07:30 PM   #1
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There's nothing as raw, as dope when it fucking dissolves
Everybodies a fraud, who claims they ain't swung from my balls
I'm dustinng you off, cause antiques are measured in dirt
Take this two cents and pocket them, for whatever its worth
The consequences that i never deserved, have bettered my luck
And all you birds flock together til your feathers been plucked
My skins fucking leathery tough, theres no penetration allowed
Is what you fagots hear, from every single date you've been out
I be laying it down, thats after the pipes been orally cleansed
You ain't seen a sicker angle since ya girls been forcefully bent
Your all abortions of text, buncha kids that nobodies loved
Talking bout a sex life that you've never had, socially fucked
My sofa's been touched by the baddest bitches there are
I be choking them out, its like my fucking dick is there scarf's
Their britches tear off without even the slightest restraint
I got a footlong, that boring bitches get excited to take!

Fa sho'
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Old 05-24-2013, 10:10 AM   #2
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Yea this was nice, swagger type shit. Enjoyed the aint nobody not swung from my balls and the dick as a scarf lines just to quote a couple. Whole shit was raw though. Stay up
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Old 05-24-2013, 12:44 PM   #3
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So indirect lol. I see you.

Better than your atr collab

Keep pushing pumpkin
Shit stacks pretty high in this case.

Good flow
Good structure
Decent concept wise.

Not bad
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Old 05-24-2013, 03:27 PM   #4
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Ya'll smell that? I smell beef.
But this shit was dope Geno. Raw like you always bring with a touch of dark humor. Nice shit.
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Old 05-25-2013, 07:38 AM   #5
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I liked this much a lot.
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Old 05-26-2013, 02:00 PM   #6
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There's nothing as raw, as dope when it fucking dissolves
Everybodies a fraud, who claims they ain't swung from my balls
I'm dustinng you off, cause antiques are measured in dirt
Take this two cents and pocket them, for whatever its worth

You started off nice....



I be laying it down, thats after the pipes been orally cleansed
You ain't seen a sicker angle since ya girls been forcefully bent

Liked this line most.....


Nice work.... time to collab.... again.. it's been a long time..
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Old 05-26-2013, 03:21 PM   #7
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Your all abortions of text, buncha kids that nobodies loved
Talking bout a sex life that you've never had, socially fucked
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I literally lol'd at this...

there isn't much to say with all due honesty
you usually put in a lot of work, and you never let up...
which makes for some great verses...nice drop breh...
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grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrup
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