chicken scratch

Void · 03-23-2013, 01:15 PM

Surviving despite these mindless of eyes. Life is a lie when you deny what's inside. Deny what's implied. Right. We're all fine? Call me emotional. Call me extremist. Call me when all you fall off the deep end. I'll console you. I'll hold you. I'll ball up your pieces. Your flaws and your weakness. Draw you all new 'til you call me your Jesus. Easier to worship than serve. Let religion be the crutch you turn to when hurt. You can't be burdened to learn.

I've decoded romance. The art of attraction. Could manipulate your senses. Sway your heart to imagine it's starved for my habits. But fuck, I'd be such a shark to enact 'em. Sometimes I just target, for practice. Just to remind myself of how smart I can pass as. This knowledge has wrecked me. In solace, directing the nobs. It's so stressing. Playing God, when God is a thought you don't acknowledge. Depressing. Process obsessing over ants. It's not that your ants, but the metaphor implants at least a piece of how little you mean to me. How simple your thinking seems. It's not ego. It's not my advancement or that you're dumb, it's just you're stuck at average fuck.

Just Write · 05-31-2013, 12:53 PM

lol, the second portion made me laugh.

fav

Just to remind myself of how smart I can pass as. This knowledge has wrecked me. In solace, directing the nobs. It's so stressing. Playing God, when God is a thought you don't acknowledge. Depressing

peace

CopyPat · 06-10-2013, 01:00 AM

hahaha how does this have one response. this is dull all day. loved the read as usual. but u probly don't even want feed so fuck it ha

YDK · 06-10-2013, 03:14 AM

Dope as fuck man, I love the paragraph style but rarely use it myself. This is the type of drop that makes me wanna do it tho. Awesome drops that flow and flex this well always inspire me to try it too lol can't find any flaws tbh just wish it was longer even as 2 paragraphs it never seems to be enough. Keep it up man, loved the closer btw shit was fire

Geno · 06-10-2013, 07:02 PM

Brilliant, as usual sir. Love seeing you active. Keep writing. Collab coming soon.

03-23-2013, 01:15 PM	#1
Void Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Rep Power: 0	chicken scratch Surviving despite these mindless of eyes. Life is a lie when you deny what's inside. Deny what's implied. Right. We're all fine? Call me emotional. Call me extremist. Call me when all you fall off the deep end. I'll console you. I'll hold you. I'll ball up your pieces. Your flaws and your weakness. Draw you all new 'til you call me your Jesus. Easier to worship than serve. Let religion be the crutch you turn to when hurt. You can't be burdened to learn. I've decoded romance. The art of attraction. Could manipulate your senses. Sway your heart to imagine it's starved for my habits. But fuck, I'd be such a shark to enact 'em. Sometimes I just target, for practice. Just to remind myself of how smart I can pass as. This knowledge has wrecked me. In solace, directing the nobs. It's so stressing. Playing God, when God is a thought you don't acknowledge. Depressing. Process obsessing over ants. It's not that your ants, but the metaphor implants at least a piece of how little you mean to me. How simple your thinking seems. It's not ego. It's not my advancement or that you're dumb, it's just you're stuck at average fuck.

05-31-2013, 12:53 PM	#2
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	lol, the second portion made me laugh. fav Just to remind myself of how smart I can pass as. This knowledge has wrecked me. In solace, directing the nobs. It's so stressing. Playing God, when God is a thought you don't acknowledge. Depressing peace __________________

06-10-2013, 03:14 AM	#4
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	Dope as fuck man, I love the paragraph style but rarely use it myself. This is the type of drop that makes me wanna do it tho. Awesome drops that flow and flex this well always inspire me to try it too lol can't find any flaws tbh just wish it was longer even as 2 paragraphs it never seems to be enough. Keep it up man, loved the closer btw shit was fire __________________

06-10-2013, 07:02 PM	#5
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Brilliant, as usual sir. Love seeing you active. Keep writing. Collab coming soon. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-10-2013, 01:00 AM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahaha how does this have one response. this is dull all day. loved the read as usual. but u probly don't even want feed so fuck it ha