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The COAT...
Join Date: Jan 2013
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Xces AKA Mayhem
I'm hard as a motherfucker, think you're in style? Only time that May HAM is during cinco de mayo Theres ink in my vial, there’s meth inside his shrinking pores So although I'm only 5'11, standing next to him I feel so large, That effort has been hesitant, the end for him is quick regardless Vicious marksmen, pencil with precision, targets feel the darkness Hardships arm the precipice, it's excellence concealed in bars VM's seen as stress amassed in heavens, we appear as stars And olden tribal testaments are evidence you fear the carcass Hang you with the ring that you presented to that Primo broad Dissection of the Queen of hearts, I section off this feeble target Peel apart the dealers cards, I test my oath to shield it's honor Set the flow and let it grow like vegetables in fields of farmers Feet and arms forever grow, I feel evolved, you can't and won't I'm awesome.. Passing me is a mission, speed of an antelope The spit which drips in me is the richest, greenest, you cannot cope It's not just gasoline, bitch this shits supreme and the can is full You're tempting me to spark it like bits of green in a blackened bowl This scriptures deep as Egyptian priests and the facts they know The shits so mean it'll rip your screen and attack your soul Split the seams from your wits and feet, see it drift the seas like the Krakens goal Spliff and weed, it's a gifted feeling, lift and reach to eclipse the ceiling Admit defeat, I'm dropping X and I split the Ces like the hand of Moses Chant the code, you're not passin home cause the competitions advanced opponents I'm monsterous and span the globe like Donner, Blitzen, but not fictitious Coffin calls for doctor visits in shaman clinics to stop his sickness Invade your losses section and drop a digit like long division Rappin round imposter bitches like bondage broads, it’s an ecstacy You’re Bond with broads, inevitably fucked, your fans have bets on me Shove youre pathetic finger gloves in the deaded regions where men rest their meat In the clusterfuck that's destiny you struggle standing next to me No Molly but the ball is rolling, what the fuck is X to me
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that nigga
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Dead at that opener! Solid verse, solid hits. You already know. Always nice to see a Nigma verse.
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The COAT...
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Don't know why this is getting slept on, some quality shit in here. Sometimes the lines was abit long, but nothing that detracted from the overall feel of the verse. Enjoyed several parts, but particularly this:
''Dissection of the Queen of hearts, I section off this feeble target Peel apart the dealers cards, I test my oath to shield it's honor Set the flow and let it grow like vegetables in fields of farmers'' ^Love the flow and set up of the sentences. ''Admit defeat, I'm dropping X and I split the Ces like the hand of Moses Chant the code, you're not passin home cause the competitions advanced opponents I'm monsterous and span the globe like Donner, Blitzen, but not fictitious Coffin calls for doctor visits in shaman clinics to stop his sickness'' ^Even though I felt the second sentence here could have been worded better after the first comma it still flowed well and was dope, just think it could have been even better. Either way, I liked this section a lot as well. Cool shit.
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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Needs more feed. I like the way you slyly word things. It's very unique and your own. Lots of cute liners here and there. Formidable.
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You're all kind souls
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A lot to like about this! Wordplay was on point fareal, that deck of cards line was straight nasty! Very creative I must say.
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