"The Pink Slip Battle"

namix · 05-28-2013, 09:54 AM

based on the actual events which took place this past memorial day weekend, as the threat of yet another pink slip battle was looming over netcees.

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Challenger

Sup. 20?

lol, to me he's just another battler, one who's been barking a lot
and I’d be the pink-slipper’s hardest matchup since argyle socks
got nothin to lose, but also nothin to gain or prove pink-slippin dudes
if I wanted to hulk out I’d be an even bigger banner than bruce
yet ya comin at me like I’m in the middle of another ass-kickin spree
when I see no need to battle… or even a real reason to speak.
i just said pickin on kids levels below you is pitiful as pitiful can be
so turning around and battling you would be fuckin hypocritical of me
take no offense to this, we can even pretend to be friends guy
this isn’t even a diss, its just the truth with some end rhymes

theres legends I aint faced, add in vets…my list here’s stacked
lemme tackle that ‘n holla back when I’m at the mid-tier cats
cuz actin like you deserve anything more is seriously weird to me
you’d need to mature a lot - socially, physically, ‘n most of all, lyrically
old school heads only please; if he was, he was and is hardly nice.
I don’t remember any of his shit...and I just read his archives twice!
I whooped it back then and I’ll keep on kicking it until my last days
but if I went at this scrub much longer it’d border on ass-play.
so thanks again for the call-out! call this a rain-check or promise
get a bit closer to the pinnacle, and someday I’ll take you up on it.

Just Write · 05-28-2013, 10:01 AM

Lol this was funny and have some nice wordplay scattered. Dug the argyle socks line as well as the banner and a few others. Nice drop, stay up

Objective · 05-29-2013, 06:58 PM

Already read this shit, never commented tho'. Enjoyed the re-read as well, some funny shit in there, my fav got to be the ''hypocritical of me''-line. Dope. Keep droppin' ish.

Mike Wrecka · 05-29-2013, 07:53 PM

hey namix I read this in discussion. thought it was dope. good work my friend. nice drop

namix · 06-03-2013, 10:21 AM

thanks for peepin fella's, good looks!

IamBenT · 06-03-2013, 10:25 AM

Very dope, funny disses, lots of swag, and a great finisher visual. Well done

Split · 06-04-2013, 12:46 AM

go feed someone

Lars · 06-04-2013, 05:12 AM

LOL @ the Argyle socks line

thought that was your best

wasn't particularly fond of the banner play but i rhymed "doctor david banner was shot with rays of gamma" recently and you reminded me of it just now. my brain has seen far too much drug use. respect.

namix · 06-04-2013, 10:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lars

LOL @ the Argyle socks line

thought that was your best

wasn't particularly fond of the banner play but i rhymed "doctor david banner was shot with rays of gamma" recently and you reminded me of it just now. my brain has seen far too much drug use. respect.

lol, good looks lars. thanks for peepin.

namix · 06-04-2013, 10:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Split

go feed someone

listen asshole, my feedbacks should count for 5 relative to most of the breakdowns I've seen :)

just broke down @Zenland piece ZenLand Part II:
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=68888#post68888

:cool:

Split · 06-04-2013, 11:59 AM

good

namix · 06-06-2013, 06:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Split

good

my drop, my feedback, the fact i listened to you, or all of the above? lol ;)

glad your on top of this for real though.

thank you for working hard for the company. :D

05-28-2013, 10:01 AM	#2
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	Lol this was funny and have some nice wordplay scattered. Dug the argyle socks line as well as the banner and a few others. Nice drop, stay up __________________

05-29-2013, 06:58 PM	#3
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Already read this shit, never commented tho'. Enjoyed the re-read as well, some funny shit in there, my fav got to be the ''hypocritical of me''-line. Dope. Keep droppin' ish. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

05-29-2013, 07:53 PM	#4
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	hey namix I read this in discussion. thought it was dope. good work my friend. nice drop __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

06-03-2013, 10:21 AM	#5
namix been that, done there. Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 2,259 Battle Record: 2-1 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 85246655	thanks for peepin fella's, good looks! __________________ well fed.

06-03-2013, 10:25 AM	#6
IamBenT SuPreaM Lyricyst Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: San Antonio, TX Posts: 704 Battle Record: 9-6 Rep Power: 412358	Very dope, funny disses, lots of swag, and a great finisher visual. Well done __________________ *A.bove T.he R.est* IamBenT\|Genocide\|MikeWrecka\|Objective\|Vulgar\|Witty \|Rawn MacDon

06-04-2013, 12:46 AM	#7
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	go feed someone __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

06-04-2013, 05:12 AM	#8
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809298	LOL @ the Argyle socks line thought that was your best wasn't particularly fond of the banner play but i rhymed "doctor david banner was shot with rays of gamma" recently and you reminded me of it just now. my brain has seen far too much drug use. respect. __________________ PROVEN BITER

06-04-2013, 11:59 AM	#11
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	good __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com