Week 10: 17. dyedinthewool (1-3) vs. 18. MMLP (0-3) \\ MMLP wins via no-show

Certain · 04-28-2014, 04:02 AM

Season 3

The Basics | Read the full rules here.

Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread.

Topic

“We look forward to the time when the power to love will replace the love of power.” — William Ellerly

Good luck, @dyedinthewool and @MMLP.

dyedinthewool · 04-28-2014, 05:14 AM

Check

MMLP · 04-28-2014, 08:00 AM

In

MMLP · 05-02-2014, 09:26 PM

a prospective actor, who vied for free parts
with a succession of chapters and a childhood sweetheart
He aspired to reach stardom with each display
he lifted the place, his performance exquisitely played.
Emerging flawless, surging forward with critics' acclaim
and a certain belief, the spotlight perfectly gleamed
illuminating the world at his feet, but he can't defer what's beneath,
He has a girl glued to his side
spewing with pride, and his future in mind...
looming with liars and agents ruling his mind
who choose to decide that a baby is needed
to boost his desire with a change of appearance
from a wayward careerist stuck in bit parts
to a major league pier, who suffers his art
by becoming a father they hoped it would boost
his stuff even farther , roles and his views,
would grow with each movie and help to expand
his profile while improving the wealth of the man.
so He selfishly planned to conceive him a kid
- shelving his plans of achievements for this
he eargerly wished for a child of his own
and dreamed of a kid to silence their groans.
-the wife he's devoted to used as a pawn
in the life they promoted, yet would choose to ignore.
once the youth had been born they planned to exact
a hugely informal and matter of fact
plan of attack to eliviate his status
a grandeurous act that would feed the papers.
him being famous paramount in their minds
and key to saving his downward decline.
only now is the time his wife loses the kid
the power they vied for excused on a whim.
His stillborn future and kin exstinguished their hope
using this window as a bid to expose
their limited goal of building a superstar
an indescrimate oaf who filled the pursuit of parts
and would choose his heart to achieve his dreams
despite his lurid past and means it leads
he needs to keep working, takes a couple hours
and reflects on his power of love overcoming his love of power

04-28-2014, 04:02 AM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Week 10: 17. dyedinthewool (1-3) vs. 18. MMLP (0-3) \\ MMLP wins via no-show Season 3 The Basics \| Read the full rules here. Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS. Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent. Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread. Topic “We look forward to the time when the power to love will replace the love of power.” — William Ellerly Good luck, @dyedinthewool and @MMLP. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

04-28-2014, 05:14 AM	#2
dyedinthewool green eggs and damn Join Date: Feb 2014 Location: northeast Posts: 786 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 18308781	Check

04-28-2014, 08:00 AM	#3
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	In

05-02-2014, 09:26 PM	#4
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	a prospective actor, who vied for free parts with a succession of chapters and a childhood sweetheart He aspired to reach stardom with each display he lifted the place, his performance exquisitely played. Emerging flawless, surging forward with critics' acclaim and a certain belief, the spotlight perfectly gleamed illuminating the world at his feet, but he can't defer what's beneath, He has a girl glued to his side spewing with pride, and his future in mind... looming with liars and agents ruling his mind who choose to decide that a baby is needed to boost his desire with a change of appearance from a wayward careerist stuck in bit parts to a major league pier, who suffers his art by becoming a father they hoped it would boost his stuff even farther , roles and his views, would grow with each movie and help to expand his profile while improving the wealth of the man. so He selfishly planned to conceive him a kid - shelving his plans of achievements for this he eargerly wished for a child of his own and dreamed of a kid to silence their groans. -the wife he's devoted to used as a pawn in the life they promoted, yet would choose to ignore. once the youth had been born they planned to exact a hugely informal and matter of fact plan of attack to eliviate his status a grandeurous act that would feed the papers. him being famous paramount in their minds and key to saving his downward decline. only now is the time his wife loses the kid the power they vied for excused on a whim. His stillborn future and kin exstinguished their hope using this window as a bid to expose their limited goal of building a superstar an indescrimate oaf who filled the pursuit of parts and would choose his heart to achieve his dreams despite his lurid past and means it leads he needs to keep working, takes a couple hours and reflects on his power of love overcoming his love of power