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Flow loads of words together in the alphabet. Go.
I find, Artificial artists acting always amusing, Actually atomizing and abusing, An art-form, as-well as arrogantly assuming, that they're Actually amazing, attitudes-in, a Big ball of bullshit, backwards babbling, Batty bitches blabbering on 'bout battering, Bigger boys, begging beef, basically just badgering, Being bought by brainless brehs, it's baffling, I'm ***kling, cool calm and crushing, Countless cabbages career's, causing concussion, to the Crazily cocooned child-like combustion, we Call creativeness, come try cussin', I'm Dangerous, Defiantly don't dabble, 'cause your Dumb, dippy, dim-witted drama don't dazzle, I'm Diligently different, dedicated delivery, Drawing dense depictions, definitely what you didn't-see. Got next bit now... from Every errant eggy emerging emulation, Expertly ensuing easy elimination, on Endless emcee's, encouraging education, Effortlessly ending epic exaggerations, of Firearms, fools flaunting a fake flex, Fraudulence forces fans to finally forget, Fundamental factors that factually form finesse, Fuck fibbing fam, I'm fully forever fresh ! Gullible guys are galumphing getting gassed, Galavanting glamorizing ghettos and gats, Gradually generating giant gaps, in the Game's genius, that generally gob-smacks, I'll H-Bomb haters having hallucinations, Happily hang hundreds having no hesitation, This aint Happenstance or hereditary, I Havn't handled hundreds, hoes, or Hennessy. Next... (This is taking ages!) I'm independently illustrated, not Immaturely ignorantly imitated, with Incoherent inconsistencies integrated, It's indisputable this industry is inflated, with Jibber jabbering jokers just in a jumble, Juvanile jackass's journeying the jungle, rap's Just a jammed jukebox now it's jarring, you Jeopardize it's judgement jotting junk jargon, your Knowledge is kindergarten, just Kamikaze, I'm Kitted to kill, like kung-fu or karate, the Keyboard king, Rap kernel colored in khaki, Kindling my kudos so I can KILLUNINATI ! Life's lesson I've learnt is it's limitless, I'm Loving laying lunatic lines, lyrics and limericks, Leading larger levels, leagues from the littlest, Laughing at lying ludicrous lads looking with lividness, Most mans mentality is muddy, Mainly minding means of making more money, My music is monumental, More material than majors man it's mental, Numerous nights I've needed naps like narcoleptics, but Never normally do, nine of ten get neglected, Rap's a Necessary need like nookie to nymphomaniacs, my Natural narcotic, no needle needed nor nasal-act, Ordinary oaths are overall obsolete, but more Often originality is odd-to-see, so Observe me on this ongoing odyssey, and Oversee my objective overtaking overseas. Last edited by Zen; 05-23-2013 at 01:14 PM. |
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It's ok some of it was a stretch but a good attempt...It's just hard sometimes flowing all words under one letter at a time...I give you props for even trying...
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Dude I fucking enjoyed this; flow was sick as hell and the rhymes were enjoyable. I just wish you could have used better words and bar ending rhymes. More wordplay and Multi's please!
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Aww I thought it was goona be a-z, but for what it is I liked it.
I felt the A part was a bit streched though I liked the C part the best I felt it had better content than the rest of alphabets. and even though the flows kind of everywhere i kinda expected it its pretty hard to keep a steady flow while rhyming alphabetically. Keep writting :) |
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That's pretty crazy having all the lines with one letter at a time. Nice try man. The rhymes themselves were pretty weak but for the effort that something like this takes it deserves props. Check out Alpha Beta by zygote in the HOF thread for a similar piece to this done perfectly. Keep droppin and drop feed on other OM pieces man.
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This has been done many times... I'm not a fan... It's just trying to make sense of words that start with that letter... I guess blackalicious did it best... Ehhh
Just my opinion
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Yeh I know fam, just another way to drop lines.
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