i can help save text

uh-oh · 03-31-2014, 08:28 PM

i can do it.

but you will all have to throw out everything you ever learned and accept me as your sensei.

like a true sense, i can't actually compete with my grasshoppers, im old and decrepit. but what i can teach you is proper form and techniques.

at the present you are all talented streetfighters, but none of you can really fight.

with my critiques i can make text fun to READ again, and when people actually read what other people write, it inspires people to write.

sign up in here for tutelage

Fig · 03-31-2014, 08:33 PM

I'm in

big baby · 03-31-2014, 08:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fig

I'm in

no show w.e

Fig · 03-31-2014, 08:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by big baby

no show w.e

no show your life

Bech

Sharp · 03-31-2014, 08:39 PM

for real teach me. youre entertaining as fuck

Hush · 03-31-2014, 08:52 PM

Intrigued

veritas · 03-31-2014, 08:52 PM

White trash this bitch

Paradigm · 03-31-2014, 09:07 PM

Teach me the way of Metaphives

uh-oh · 03-31-2014, 09:17 PM

someone post some text in here and i will pick it apart and show you what you are all doing wrong. pick your favorite battle from your favorite battlers, your favorite open mic whatever. can be your work or someone elses.

i will point out everything you or they are doing wrong and help lead you in the right direction

THE REAL CAPTAIN OBVIOUS · 03-31-2014, 09:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by uh-oh

someone post some text in here and i will pick it apart and show you what you are all doing wrong. pick your favorite battle from your favorite battlers, your favorite open mic whatever. can be your work or someone elses.

i will point out everything you or they are doing wrong and help lead you in the right direction

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PancakeBrah · 03-31-2014, 09:57 PM

How is a command/request obvious?

KwaL!ty · 03-31-2014, 10:03 PM

I want in lol.

THE REAL CAPTAIN OBVIOUS · 03-31-2014, 10:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by El Pancake

How is a command/request obvious?

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PancakeBrah · 03-31-2014, 10:07 PM

Worst alias in the game.

THE REAL CAPTAIN OBVIOUS · 03-31-2014, 10:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by El Pancake

Worst alias in the game.

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Hush · 03-31-2014, 10:35 PM

Negged

Vulgar · 03-31-2014, 11:02 PM

lol

This thread is a good idea though.

oats · 03-31-2014, 11:20 PM

critique this:

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=62295

Sharp · 03-31-2014, 11:25 PM

I'll take the plunge
@uh-oh

http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=276508&postcount=10

last minute drop against alphabet. go for it

Fig · 03-31-2014, 11:29 PM

I.keep bitches at all times, no it aint a front.
I.keep bitches in my ride, then I raid the butt.
I keep bitches on my mind, but I aint gay for love.
I keep bitches on the side, but my favorite one?
I.keep that bitch cummin on the daily fuck
Then when I'm sick of it, blast it with the lazer gun.

03-31-2014, 08:28 PM	#1
uh-oh DA GOD Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Canton Ohio Posts: 12,362 Battle Record: 1-0 Champed - Beat Battle II - Beat Battle V - Beat Bags Rep Power: 84181420	i can help save text i can do it. but you will all have to throw out everything you ever learned and accept me as your sensei. like a true sense, i can't actually compete with my grasshoppers, im old and decrepit. but what i can teach you is proper form and techniques. at the present you are all talented streetfighters, but none of you can really fight. with my critiques i can make text fun to READ again, and when people actually read what other people write, it inspires people to write. sign up in here for tutelage __________________ EVERYBODY I KNOW GOT WEED OR GOT POWDER BUT I AINT GOT EITHER. GOT ALOT OF DEMONS

03-31-2014, 08:33 PM	#2
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	I'm in __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

03-31-2014, 08:52 PM	#6
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Intrigued __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

03-31-2014, 09:07 PM	#8
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033512	Teach me the way of Metaphives Last edited by Paradigm; 03-31-2014 at 09:09 PM.

03-31-2014, 09:17 PM	#9
uh-oh DA GOD Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Canton Ohio Posts: 12,362 Battle Record: 1-0 Champed - Beat Battle II - Beat Battle V - Beat Bags Rep Power: 84181420	someone post some text in here and i will pick it apart and show you what you are all doing wrong. pick your favorite battle from your favorite battlers, your favorite open mic whatever. can be your work or someone elses. i will point out everything you or they are doing wrong and help lead you in the right direction __________________ EVERYBODY I KNOW GOT WEED OR GOT POWDER BUT I AINT GOT EITHER. GOT ALOT OF DEMONS

03-31-2014, 09:57 PM	#11
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	How is a command/request obvious? __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

03-31-2014, 10:03 PM	#12
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	I want in lol.

03-31-2014, 10:07 PM	#14
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Worst alias in the game. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

03-31-2014, 10:35 PM	#16
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Negged __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

03-31-2014, 11:02 PM	#17
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	lol This thread is a good idea though.

03-31-2014, 11:20 PM	#18
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	critique this: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=62295 __________________ You should be water

03-31-2014, 11:29 PM	#20
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	I.keep bitches at all times, no it aint a front. I.keep bitches in my ride, then I raid the butt. I keep bitches on my mind, but I aint gay for love. I keep bitches on the side, but my favorite one? I.keep that bitch cummin on the daily fuck Then when I'm sick of it, blast it with the lazer gun. __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15