Week 3: YDK (0-2) vs. Objective (0-2) \\ YDK wins by no-show

Certain · 03-10-2014, 04:02 AM

Season 3

The Basics | Read the full rules here.

Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread.

Topics this week are available for your choosing here.

Good luck, @YDK and @Objective.

YDK · 03-10-2014, 01:34 PM

Check

Objective · 03-10-2014, 04:15 PM

Check.

YDK · 03-15-2014, 01:31 AM

Breathless at breakfast, a lump in my throat
a blunt that i smoked reminds me of something i wrote.
I remember the feeling without words, nothing but hope,
But as soon as i awoke i realized i was becoming a joke.
My dreams are surreal and vivid beyond imagination,
Of being successful and capturing every aspiration.
"It's all just an aberration; face it David,
You'll always be underrated in the eyes of the sated!
Meaningless accomplishments, you know that you're fated,
To fail when it matters until you too are jaded!"
Yet I've never fallen, never quit, i keep thriving,
Never stalling, taken hits, but still surviving.
I'm a man of my word that demands to be heard,
Plagued by insanity that only agony cured.
As i brace for my fantasy to finally take place,
I'm again disappointed; I cry with a straight face.
Giving away my pride and freedom, I was willing and able;
So the day I lost my voice,
was the day i signed with a label.

8. You just lost the ability to speak.

03-10-2014, 04:02 AM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Week 3: YDK (0-2) vs. Objective (0-2) \\ YDK wins by no-show Season 3 The Basics \| Read the full rules here. Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS. Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent. Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread. Topics this week are available for your choosing here. Good luck, @YDK and @Objective. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

03-10-2014, 01:34 PM	#2
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	Check __________________

03-10-2014, 04:15 PM	#3
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Check. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

03-15-2014, 01:31 AM	#4
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	Breathless at breakfast, a lump in my throat a blunt that i smoked reminds me of something i wrote. I remember the feeling without words, nothing but hope, But as soon as i awoke i realized i was becoming a joke. My dreams are surreal and vivid beyond imagination, Of being successful and capturing every aspiration. "It's all just an aberration; face it David, You'll always be underrated in the eyes of the sated! Meaningless accomplishments, you know that you're fated, To fail when it matters until you too are jaded!" Yet I've never fallen, never quit, i keep thriving, Never stalling, taken hits, but still surviving. I'm a man of my word that demands to be heard, Plagued by insanity that only agony cured. As i brace for my fantasy to finally take place, I'm again disappointed; I cry with a straight face. Giving away my pride and freedom, I was willing and able; So the day I lost my voice, was the day i signed with a label. 8. You just lost the ability to speak. __________________