beauty is in the eyes of the beholder

[Just Write]

just a quick morning key, feed returned



beautiful girls with bad attitudes are a dime a dozen
but im tryin to find that one with that vibrant substance
the type to make you do right in the eyes of public;
a future wife deserves the world & earns a life of lovin.
i dont fight for nothin.... gotta make sure its worth it
found out there's no such thing as a relationship that's perfect
a thousand blank faces, that i choose to let fate interpret;
people only concerned with outsides n never scrape the surface.
you can lay there hurtin, huddled in your puddle of misery
or choose to stand up, and confront insecurities
ive suffered from burglary, had a heart but she stole it
i mean what good is it broken if they're no one to console it
but it's true what they say about how time heals the pain
came from out of a grave now flying higher than rain
not searching for perfection, just inner beauty's reflection
...for a unity of human beings is truly a blessing

[Zen]

You keyed this? Very good key full of substance if this was keyed very impressive. The first few lines were my favorites of the post. Strong way to start it off and paint the picture cleanly as to what this verse is about. You sir are a rising star here. Keep droppin man.

[Just Write]

@zen lol im tryin to get at this girl and she said to write her sumn so it was like a quick 5 minute deal.. surprisedmself haha. guess i was motivated. drop a link for me to feed. you know i got you

[Zen]

Have nothing atm fella but when I do I'm gonna let you know