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#1 |
(ง'̀-'́)ง
Join Date: Nov 2015
Posts: 15,844
Battle Record: 52-28
Accomplishments -50+ wins
Champed -Summer Classic VIII
-Netcees Battle League
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-Fight Night Cypher I
-Fight Night XXXV
-Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2
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#2 |
39 NS, lost in votes once
Join Date: Oct 2001
Posts: 11,242
Battle Record: 32-40
Champed - Time to Kill X
- Write Week III
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10 lines.
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#3 |
39 NS, lost in votes once
Join Date: Oct 2001
Posts: 11,242
Battle Record: 32-40
Champed - Time to Kill X
- Write Week III
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2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. I waited 12 extra hours for u to post, u faggot. |
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#4 |
I'M A MONSTER!
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 1,555
Battle Record: 77-13
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - Battle Arena
- 1-2 Punch League (2x)
- The Quick & The Dead II
- BA Swag & Flow Tournament
- 1-2 Season 3
- NBL Season 6
- The Elements
- Fall Brawl II
- Netcees Battle League (4x)
- NBL Season 9
- Summer Classic VII
- 50+ Wins
- The Winter Classic
- Tag Team Tourney
-1-2 Punch League
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At least you're going out with a W!
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#5 |
39 NS, lost in votes once
Join Date: Oct 2001
Posts: 11,242
Battle Record: 32-40
Champed - Time to Kill X
- Write Week III
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lol yup
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#6 |
been that, done there.
Join Date: Jun 2001
Posts: 2,259
Battle Record: 2-1
Accomplishments - OM HOF
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strong conceptual flow building off of your opener (1 and 2). solid flow too, perhaps one too many syllables in 7 compared to 8 - but it worked. After going 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 -- I found your closer to be a bit predictable, but it was effective none-the-less, and rounded out the verse well.
very consistent verse, good shit strikta!
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#7 |
Upset Champion
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
Champed - BA Rookie Tourney
- 1-2 Punch League (x2)
- Pandemonium Cypher
- 1-2 Punch league Season 9
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LMao
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