Kwal!ty vs. Untold {Untold wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

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@kwalityakagetanamethatworksinmentions @Untold

[Untold]

Check

[Vinny]

cheq @Untold how many lines?

[VENgeanc]

Line Limit:

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c'mon man. don't embarrass me, now knock this kid out.

[Vinny]

didnt want to have less then him or vice verse.

[Untold]

10-12

[~RustyGunZ~]

....

Originally Posted by Untold

the fuck is that shit?^ u fags get a room or prepare to be shoved
cuz when kwal!ty's back wit a VENgeance.. they'll be holdin hands, declarin their love
if kwal ran this site or this league, it would diminish fine
kwal tryin to run his own life, would end up lookin like the Boston marathon's finish line
i got money. ur not funny. i'll slap this hoe
so when it comes to bread, my grains fuck wit ur head cuz ur lackin dough
un' stays wit pussy n uses a modern approach to get chicks
while k uses that medieval Game... Of Thrones n watches it alone on Netflix
got ya chick in my bed, givin me head. she trill, yo
but if we see Quality Inn a bedroom, he'll be changin sheets n leavin mints on a pillow

[Untold]

No show?

[Vinny]

hes known as a faggit to his kin! the whole family thinks this mans a disgrace
tries to coverup & end everything w/ a Paws, this time just my hands in his face
i stomp people out with expensive shoes like Jordan Flints & Pennys!
the only time you 'Get Out Of Pocket' is when Grabbing all the Lint & Pennies
ima prove voters got a 'Weak Stomach' & that your not worthy G!
cause they dont want to see UnWrap, like 'Bandages After Severe Surgery'
got Control in this battle but no1 in this 'BrotherHood' sees you sleying names,
so if you hear Untold Legends in same sentence we 'Literally just Playing Games'
think your a Bos il beat you by Mass amounts while punches clean this Blogger
but if you decide to run! il blow you off your feet like a Senior Jogger

[Flow]

the fuck is that shit?^ u fags get a room or prepare to be shoved
cuz when kwal!ty's back wit a VENgeance.. they'll be holdin hands, declarin their love
if kwal ran this site or this league, it would diminish fine
kwal tryin to run his own life, would end up lookin like the Boston marathon's finish line
got ya chick in my bed, givin me head. she trill, yo
but if we see Quality Inn a bedroom, he'll be changin sheets n leavin mints on a pillow

VS~

Ima prove voters got a 'Weak Stomach' & that your not worthy G!
cause they dont want to see UnWrap, like 'Bandages After Severe Surgery'
got Control in this battle but no1 in this 'BrotherHood' sees you sleying names,
so if you hear Untold Legends in same sentence we 'Literally just Playing Games'


To be honest I didn't really like this battle much, on the quotes I think Kwal had less but his were much better.

But on consistency Ill swing it to Untold

[Sharp]

Back with a vengeance, quality inn

V

Unwrap


Kwal struck me as a liitle corny/rusty tbh. Wasn't bad but didn't fly for me. Untold had lotb, edge it to him

[...]

untold
ven, marathon, quality

vs

kwality
lint, legends

v/untold....consistency...better misses

[Defiant]

the fuck is that shit?^ u fags get a room or prepare to be shoved
cuz when kwal!ty's back wit a VENgeance.. they'll be holdin hands, declarin their love
if kwal ran this site or this league, it would diminish fine
kwal tryin to run his own life, would end up lookin like the Boston marathon's finish line

vs

ima prove voters got a 'Weak Stomach' & that your not worthy G!
cause they dont want to see UnWrap, like 'Bandages After Severe Surgery'



untold started nice, kinda fell off. Dough line was played as fuck. Kwality came kinda weak still adapting to the style the quote was kinda basic and played, just gotta make your concepts harsher and try not to focus to much on basic nameplays. Untold gets this with his first 4 lines, stay up both


vote - untold

[Dominate]

Vengeance, quality inn, game of thrones wp wasn't good but 'watches it alone on Netflix' I thought was a funny/harsh flip

Not bad

Vs

Unwrap, untold legends

Had some good ideas but wording was off and a bit corny in places IMO.

Not quoting either boston marathon line bc I think it's in poor taste. Too soon guys.


Vote- untold for more/better quoteables

[Cashius]

I liked the quality inn thing...netflix was ok. Decent verse for utmost.

Kwality...lint was ok, some played stuff in there like "wrap/rap"...eww. Also, no more quotes for the punch...that's frowned upon here mostly.

Utmost took it.

[~RustyGunZ~]

the fuck is that shit?^ u fags get a room or prepare to be shoved
cuz when kwal!ty's back wit a VENgeance.. they'll be holdin hands, declarin their love
if kwal ran this site or this league, it would diminish fine
kwal tryin to run his own life, would end up lookin like the Boston marathon's finish line
un' stays wit pussy n uses a modern approach to get chicks
while k uses that medieval Game... Of Thrones n watches it alone on Netflix

opener was roflz and fire. hell no @ bread line. the boston marathon was kind of lame and an obvious concept but it was done well. game of thrones was cool not great. in/inn is played and the flip was just eh.

vs


ima prove voters got a 'Weak Stomach' & that your not worthy G!
cause they dont want to see UnWrap, like 'Bandages After Severe Surgery'
got Control in this battle but no1 in this 'BrotherHood' sees you sleying names,
so if you hear Untold Legends in same sentence we 'Literally just Playing Games'


paws is played. closer no, bad wording. two quotes could use better wording but were decent


v/untold

[megatron]

holdin hands, mints on pillows

vs

unwrap

yea neither of the marathon lines were any good kwality didn't really have much impact un came in hard and ended hard better in betweet
v/ untold

[Def_fuckin_5]

Untold:

Quality Inn



Vinny:

Senior jogger



came down to the misses, vinny had too many old nameplays in his verse

vote= Untold