Week 1: Dill Pickle vs. Greed \\ Greed wins via no-show

Certain · 02-22-2014, 03:20 PM

Season 3

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Verses are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Deadline extensions of 24 hours are available on request and cannot be denied.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines (or 650 words if formatted in a paragraph style) unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread.

Topic

"The Good Soldier"

Good luck, @Dill Pickle and @Greed.

Greed · 02-22-2014, 04:21 PM

Dill pickle huh.

Greed · 02-28-2014, 10:25 AM

Im in the barracks in a bear hat, laid the chair flat and stared back
At the glare from the sun cracked over my gear pack
Its early and It feels that, recovering from last nights 6 beer pack
When this king of the jungle was approached by a meerkat
If this soft spoken rook is god chosen, we all hopeless
He has to be barely 20, he seems to not yet have lost hope and
He wanna explain what's wrong, not a typical conversation to approach a vet with
But chow was at 0800 so I let him roll while he vented

He say
'This ain't a virtual reality more like a parallel galaxy
we rally to support our troops to battle the Iraqis
we bomb their facultys and kidnap they families
we turn a third world country to the type you only see in fantasys
now we have to stay stationed in a place that now faces much altercation
Apparently liberation is the decimation of an entire nation'

smiling faces only trying my patience
They bust you bust, what would you do dealing with theses types of cases

'political figureheads use subliminal messages
With minimal relevance to show revere for your president
Reeking of devil scent yet disguised as its heaven sent
Get your head in check 2 pennies don't make 11 cent'

You don't go from dollars to quarters unless going from hotter to colder
We gonna need this oil if you enjoy starting your motor
Just gimmie my space..... i may talk like a stoner
But all that bull shit don't concern me, a good soldier just follows orders

02-22-2014, 03:20 PM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Week 1: Dill Pickle vs. Greed \\ Greed wins via no-show Season 3 The Basics \| Read the full rules here. Verses are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Deadline extensions of 24 hours are available on request and cannot be denied. Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Verses may not exceed 48 lines (or 650 words if formatted in a paragraph style) unless agreed upon by the opponent. Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread. Topic "The Good Soldier" Good luck, @Dill Pickle and @Greed.

02-22-2014, 04:21 PM	#2
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Dill pickle huh.

02-28-2014, 10:25 AM	#3
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Im in the barracks in a bear hat, laid the chair flat and stared back At the glare from the sun cracked over my gear pack Its early and It feels that, recovering from last nights 6 beer pack When this king of the jungle was approached by a meerkat If this soft spoken rook is god chosen, we all hopeless He has to be barely 20, he seems to not yet have lost hope and He wanna explain what's wrong, not a typical conversation to approach a vet with But chow was at 0800 so I let him roll while he vented He say 'This ain't a virtual reality more like a parallel galaxy we rally to support our troops to battle the Iraqis we bomb their facultys and kidnap they families we turn a third world country to the type you only see in fantasys now we have to stay stationed in a place that now faces much altercation Apparently liberation is the decimation of an entire nation' smiling faces only trying my patience They bust you bust, what would you do dealing with theses types of cases 'political figureheads use subliminal messages With minimal relevance to show revere for your president Reeking of devil scent yet disguised as its heaven sent Get your head in check 2 pennies don't make 11 cent' You don't go from dollars to quarters unless going from hotter to colder We gonna need this oil if you enjoy starting your motor Just gimmie my space..... i may talk like a stoner But all that bull shit don't concern me, a good soldier just follows orders