Poetic (me & you)

Dope girl · 01-29-2014, 05:18 PM

You are my everything,
I don't want noone but you.
I been thinkin bout you day & night,
I don't want you to leave me.
Everyday we fussing & cursing but I stick with you,
Because I love you.
When I look into your eyes,
I see connection meant to be.
These are the reasons why I love you,
you are loyalty,
you are faithful.
you are Charming.

suppose to be Poetic

Certain · 01-29-2014, 05:19 PM

I love you, too.

Objective · 01-29-2014, 09:03 PM

''you are loyalty,''
^ I liked this line. Dope shit.

Dope girl · 01-29-2014, 11:49 PM

thanks!

Exis · 02-01-2014, 09:00 AM

This is why I hate poetry.

Smooth · 02-01-2014, 09:30 AM

^ nahh this was cool. A little simple yeah but poetry can be whatever, that's the cool shit about it. I was feeling the emotion in this.. for some people its hard to give in and put themselves out there in their own writing. I think writings the perfect place TO do that, one of the only places for me.. so I appreciate how deep you got with this. Nice.

01-29-2014, 05:18 PM	#1
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	Poetic (me & you) You are my everything, I don't want noone but you. I been thinkin bout you day & night, I don't want you to leave me. Everyday we fussing & cursing but I stick with you, Because I love you. When I look into your eyes, I see connection meant to be. These are the reasons why I love you, you are loyalty, you are faithful. you are Charming. suppose to be Poetic

01-29-2014, 05:19 PM	#2
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	I love you, too. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

01-29-2014, 09:03 PM	#3
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	''you are loyalty,'' ^ I liked this line. Dope shit. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

02-01-2014, 09:30 AM	#6
Smooth Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 32 Rep Power: 0	^ nahh this was cool. A little simple yeah but poetry can be whatever, that's the cool shit about it. I was feeling the emotion in this.. for some people its hard to give in and put themselves out there in their own writing. I think writings the perfect place TO do that, one of the only places for me.. so I appreciate how deep you got with this. Nice. __________________

01-29-2014, 11:49 PM	#4
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	thanks!

02-01-2014, 09:00 AM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	This is why I hate poetry.